The Grotto-Heaven Is Actually Me

I think the protagonist's cave can be a proper virgin bitch. Why, the people in your world, whether they are immortal cultivators or ordinary people, live in such misery. You don't need to kill people to increase your strength. You just need someone to enter. It's okay to open a space and protect people from several towns around it. As long as someone enters, your strength will increase and your reputation will increase. More people will go there, and it's better if each person has a limit on the number of times. Anyway, you can open skills and the author can write them by himself. You can open areas and enter them without killing people. You can also send out tasks to let the common people and immortal cultivators catch the weird ones and come back. It is much better than doing it yourself. The most important thing is that the common people here live too hard. In order to survive, they are covered in weird heads. Fa, your conscience has not noticed that your cave is obviously not about killing monsters to upgrade the cave, but you are playing it like killing monsters to upgrade the cave. Think about it for yourself. It is better for you to train a group of people to help you and have a good reputation, or you have turned yourself into a monster. I will not read your novel. The reason is that the other protagonists did not choose to become evil and powerful. You have a choice, and you have a long life. You have unlimited life, you can open skills, you can open a few backpacks, put all the valuable seeds and things in the backpack, and ordinary people who cultivate immortals can take it. You send tasks, and they complete the tasks. How wonderful. Your cave may become a holy place to protect the human race, leaving a way for ordinary people to survive. Aren't you also an ordinary person? You have so many immortal cultivation techniques, and you can't learn them.

I'm a bit interested. Let's take a look. I read a lot of comments to the author. I suggest that the author adopt the opinions on writing style and refer to the plot. After all, it's hard to adjust the words. If you alternate between left and right, the book won't go on.

There's no conflict, it's a bit bland, brother, does it feel like this is the field style?

I would like to make a suggestion, try not to expose the fact that the cave has a brain, and control it secretly. The previous paragraph where the rules were changed and only two people can enter is equivalent to directly telling people that this cave has a controller. That would not be fun. You can change the wording, such as holding a piece of paper to enter, or remind the practitioners on the side to find out how many people they can bring. Just like in the article, directly pull out a banner to tell others that the rules have been changed, which is easy to expose.

There are too many pitfalls, and the time aspect is a big pit. There is no time setting for the opening of the cave, and there is no time limit for the spiritual plants to be harvested at will. It is weird, and the growth of monsters requires continuous upgrades in a short period of time. The most taboo in farming is to develop too many plots in a short time. The protagonist has no lifespan. Why is he in such a hurry? Did the author forget that the protagonist is a cave when he wrote it? He could just sit back and watch, but he had to do so many things at the beginning. I was convinced not to take action against these treasure hunters in the cave, but to do it myself later. Those treasures are obviously indispensable to the protagonist. If they lose them, just replace them with others. It has to be like a life and death parting, otherwise it will be a breakthrough type. You have the final say how much you give, and you don't have to do it yourself. Let those fights advance. If you have to do it yourself, you will definitely have no chance of ranking. Even if you are the referee and end it yourself, you are a bitch and an idiot.

I think the most neglected theme in fantasy is plants. The plants in most fantasy novels are beneficial to the animals and people who eat them, but this is not in the interest of the plants being eaten. Does it work hard to survive just to be eaten by others? Moreover, it is difficult for this kind of plant to survive in symbiosis with other animals (most of them describe it as having low ability and vitality, making it difficult to adapt to environmental changes). I think plants in fantasy novels should be hard, with strong vitality and poisonous (compared to attributes such as water and fire, which require less environmental requirements), and the longer they live, the harder they are, the stronger their vitality, and the more poisonous (they will die if they fail to reach it). The aura they absorb should also develop in this aspect, rather than producing beads of spiritual fluid (which is not beneficial to themselves). At the same time, with strong vitality, it is inevitable for plants to be perennial and reproduce like bamboo, which also eliminates artificial selection. Animals and plants then continue to adapt and re-enhance themselves.

Dirty words. Driving in moderation is good for your body and mind, but driving too much can make you sick.

I hope you won't be a eunuch. He has already died in more than thirty books.

This book can be regarded as a dungeon version of cultivating immortals. The setting is interesting and it is well received But I can see a few pitfalls with the naked eye. I don't know how the author will deal with them 1. You cannot change the map (currently not possible). Changing the map is really useful as a idiom for writing online articles. It is recommended. It is set as a secret realm located in the void with randomly opened entrances, which can greatly relieve readers' aesthetic fatigue 2. Break away, especially the type where characters are drawn out of cards. The characters come too fast, and there are only so many pens and updates. The later the stage, the more bloated it is. It is recommended Characters should exit and exit (including oneself, group portraits are really difficult to write) 3. Becoming a human being, in a narrow sense, means transforming into a human being and cultivating immortality. In a broad sense, it means breaking away from the main line of farming in caves. Arrange too much words to do things that break away from the main line such as adventure. After all, what is your title attracting? The author always knows what type of reader he is. At present, the problem of 2 may be relatively big. Today's chapter only talks about pets, and there is no plot at all. That's not to say that such a transitional chapter cannot be written at all But think about what happens when there are more pets in the future?

😡 If you dare to be an eunuch, I will copy your book and I will become a cave I will write "The Immortal Mansion Is Myself" 🙂