The Cave Is Actually Myself

This book can be regarded as a dungeon version of cultivating immortals. The setting is interesting and it is well received But I can see a few pitfalls with the naked eye. I don't know how the author will deal with them 1. You cannot change the map (currently not possible). Changing the map is really useful as a idiom for writing online articles. It is recommended. It is set as a secret realm located in the void with randomly opened entrances, which can greatly relieve readers' aesthetic fatigue 2. Break away, especially the type where characters are drawn out of cards. The characters come too fast, and there are only so many pens and updates. The later the stage, the more bloated it is. It is recommended Characters should exit and exit (including oneself, group portraits are really difficult to write) 3. Becoming a human being, in a narrow sense, means transforming into a human being and cultivating immortality. In a broad sense, it means breaking away from the main line of farming in caves. Arrange too much words to do things that break away from the main line such as adventure. After all, what is your title attracting? The author always knows what type of reader he is. At present, the problem of 2 may be relatively big. Today's chapter only talks about pets, and there is no plot at all. That's not to say that such a transitional chapter cannot be written at all But think about what happens when there are more pets in the future?

How should I put it, it still feels a little different. The beginning is different from what I expected. I will save it for now and see how it develops in the later stage.

1. The subject matter is very novel. I haven't found any similar books yet. Of course, maybe I don't read enough.​ ​ 2. The writing is good and the writing style is also very humorous. The author's writing skills are definitely above average. At least there are no illogical sentences or typos, and logical errors have not yet been discovered. Without these, what is left is the speller's cultural heritage and knowledge reserve! Hope, like his hole, deep enough.​​ 3. Regarding the setting, I have read a few chapters so far, and I have not found any bad points. I hope it will be reasonable in the future. If it is normal, it will be a very good book. Finally, I hope Chaowendao can bring you a good work!

This plot looks so outrageous... I always feel like something is not right.

I think the protagonist's cave can be a proper virgin bitch. Why, the people in your world, whether they are immortal cultivators or ordinary people, live in such misery. You don't need to kill people to increase your strength. You just need someone to enter. It's okay to open a space and protect people from several towns around it. As long as someone enters, your strength will increase and your reputation will increase. More people will go there, and it's better if each person has a limit on the number of times. Anyway, you can open skills and the author can write them by himself. You can open areas and enter them without killing people. You can also send out tasks to let the common people and immortal cultivators catch the weird ones and come back. It is much better than doing it yourself. The most important thing is that the common people here live too hard. In order to survive, they are covered in weird heads. Fa, your conscience has not noticed that your cave is obviously not about killing monsters to upgrade the cave, but you are playing it like killing monsters to upgrade the cave. Think about it for yourself. It is better for you to train a group of people to help you and have a good reputation, or you have turned yourself into a monster. I will not read your novel. The reason is that the other protagonists did not choose to become evil and powerful. You have a choice, and you have a long life. You have unlimited life, you can open skills, you can open a few backpacks, put all the valuable seeds and things in the backpack, and ordinary people who cultivate immortals can take it. You send tasks, and they complete the tasks. How wonderful. Your cave may become a holy place to protect the human race, leaving a way for ordinary people to survive. Aren't you also an ordinary person? You have so many immortal cultivation techniques, and you can't learn them.

I'm a bit interested. Let's take a look. I read a lot of comments to the author. I suggest that the author adopt the opinions on writing style and refer to the plot. After all, it's hard to adjust the words. If you alternate between left and right, the book won't go on.

There's no conflict, it's a bit bland, brother, does it feel like this is the field style?

I would like to make a suggestion, try not to expose the fact that the cave has a brain, and control it secretly. The previous paragraph where the rules were changed and only two people can enter is equivalent to directly telling people that this cave has a controller. That would not be fun. You can change the wording, such as holding a piece of paper to enter, or remind the practitioners on the side to find out how many people they can bring. Just like in the article, directly pull out a banner to tell others that the rules have been changed, which is easy to expose.

There are too many pitfalls, and the time aspect is a big pit. There is no time setting for the opening of the cave, and there is no time limit for the spiritual plants to be harvested at will. It is weird, and the growth of monsters requires continuous upgrades in a short period of time. The most taboo in farming is to develop too many plots in a short time. The protagonist has no lifespan. Why is he in such a hurry? Did the author forget that the protagonist is a cave when he wrote it? He could just sit back and watch, but he had to do so many things at the beginning. I was convinced not to take action against these treasure hunters in the cave, but to do it myself later. Those treasures are obviously indispensable to the protagonist. If they lose them, just replace them with others. It has to be like a life and death parting, otherwise it will be a breakthrough type. You have the final say how much you give, and you don't have to do it yourself. Let those fights advance. If you have to do it yourself, you will definitely have no chance of ranking. Even if you are the referee and end it yourself, you are a bitch and an idiot.

I think the most neglected theme in fantasy is plants. The plants in most fantasy novels are beneficial to the animals and people who eat them, but this is not in the interest of the plants being eaten. Does it work hard to survive just to be eaten by others? Moreover, it is difficult for this kind of plant to survive in symbiosis with other animals (most of them describe it as having low ability and vitality, making it difficult to adapt to environmental changes). I think plants in fantasy novels should be hard, with strong vitality and poisonous (compared to attributes such as water and fire, which require less environmental requirements), and the longer they live, the harder they are, the stronger their vitality, and the more poisonous (they will die if they fail to reach it). The aura they absorb should also develop in this aspect, rather than producing beads of spiritual fluid (which is not beneficial to themselves). At the same time, with strong vitality, it is inevitable for plants to be perennial and reproduce like bamboo, which also eliminates artificial selection. Animals and plants then continue to adapt and re-enhance themselves.

Dirty words. Driving in moderation is good for your body and mind, but driving too much can make you sick.

I hope you won't be a eunuch. He has already died in more than thirty books.

😡 If you dare to be an eunuch, I will copy your book and I will become a cave I will write "The Immortal Mansion Is Myself" 🙂

Why was that fish just allowed to be caught? If you have intelligence, you can let people search for souls, and you can upgrade the things you gave earlier to level 3! It's okay to raise grass and pick fruits, but is it okay to raise animals and give them away? Animals can develop feelings after being kept at home for a long time!

If something happens, I suggest you send a notice. The trust between readers and authors is very fragile.

If I were a cave, I would accept spiritual beasts and plants instead of people. Because human nature is unreliable, and the second is that it is too easy to be exposed. (Searching for souls is easy. You can either force it with poison or force your family. People can use various methods to make you stand out in the cave.) You will never be discovered before you have absolute control. If you are discovered, you will definitely die

Why do you want to help that little girl? She said she wouldn't help, but she just threw you over. She really didn't understand what she was writing, and she only gave you a first-level spiritual herb. She was still there to help her explain how to accumulate savings and there were so many spiritual herbs in your cave. What's the difference? If you want to help, just want to help. I've said this before, but it's almost as if I didn't say it before.

In fact, if you have to write this kind of book that interacts with the outside world, it is best to disguise yourself as a secret realm. Otherwise, if you think of it as Dongtian, everyone will just want to occupy it. Dongtianliu has to change the landlord all the time, which is also very troublesome. In short, you have to understand the advantages of your book. The protagonist is Dongtian. If you still follow the path of transforming into a human being and cultivating immortality in the later period, then you are really going high and low.

The introduction looks a bit dirty. Can the protagonist stand it if he enters his hole?

The protagonist is driven straight to Huanglong every day, trying the depth, fantasy bus

I just read a cave-like novel. The Spirit of the Cave plays the role of Long Aotian, an evil cultivator, a blood-sucking capitalist, a dog-licker, and a warrior. Within a few days, it was upgraded to the third-level cave dwelling, which was faster than the ordinary Nine Yin White Bone Claw quick version. Being poisoned. I don't know if this book is poisonous.

The first generation, be grateful The second generation, as it should be The third generation, since ancient times The fourth generation, kill weirdos and share the blessed land

I just don't understand, there are so many new people. A system may not be well written, and it must be a hodgepodge. I originally got 80 points for writing the order system well, but I only got 30 points for writing it out.

The idea is very good, but the poor IQ leads to the poor plot. It is a pity that such a good idea is lost. I hope there are experts who can rewrite a book with this idea and remember to send me a message. Don't write books if you have a bachelor's degree or less. The plot arrangement is purely a reflection of the author's own intelligence.

Forget it, let's watch it for a while, I really like turning into this kind of mess, I am here to visit

Grandma, it's been discontinued, right? I originally thought it was the end of the book before watching it, but I would like to remind new book friends who come to read it, the protagonist has a changeable temperament. He originally thought that the pet monster he kept in the cave was taken away, but he said he didn't care, and everyone realized that he was not keeping it as a pet. Because of this, a group of book friends walked away, so let it go. Later, when they met, they showed "I will never let you go", thinking of ways to get the previous monster back, and the inconsistency of his thoughts was very fragmented. In the early stage, I liked to use pornographic accents frequently. I didn't care. But because of this, I lost some book friends, so the author didn't dare. Also, in order to divert misfortune, I pretended to be the younger brother of the skeleton monster and snatched a woman who was a monk (who had a similar level of cultivation to the skeleton monster), killed her, skinned her, and took away the bones. This place was indeed a poisonous spot, which made me feel uncomfortable. I had tricked those monks before because they were greedy and wanted to attack the protagonist. It didn't matter if they died, but now I really can't accept the idea of ​​snatching other women to kill them. It's a pity that I paid money to read so much, so I could only keep reading. Unexpectedly, this author has published a new book, and this book has been discontinued 😡

I went to other book review sections to recommend the book after only 2,000 words, which is meaningless. If you have this time, you might as well write more Braille.

Hey, hey, hey, just write these few chapters and you still leave a message in the comment area. . At least write more, this is the least I have ever seen

I originally thought it was good, and I was going to order it all after I had a million words. This is the result.

I voted for a month to support the author.