I Am Cyber Cousin

In addition, this book should not be suitable for flashbacks. Except for the introduction of the plot at the beginning, if flashbacks are used later, there will be a feeling of "the protagonist is already so naughty and you still want me to watch him get beaten." This feeling is definitely a highlight of Internet articles.

The beginning is okay, especially the first chapter has that flavor, but what about the protagonist? The first three chapters have just two protagonists, which is a bit off the main line. The background description in the first chapter is enough. The protagonist can show up in the ruined temple. The farm can be written in the fifth chapter. Describe how the protagonist escapes from the ruined temple, how to activate the golden finger, or what conditions the golden finger has to obtain benefits. The golden three chapters are not all used to lay the background. It needs to be pointed out. It has good potential if written well. There are also some places in the introduction that are redundant. Just write about raising the fire. The later part about power is unnecessary.

After watching Lonely, the main character didn't exist at all.

I hope there won't be a "memory transfer" drama by then. If the protagonist finally discovers that the native is me, and the so-called time travel is just the product of a conspiracy theory, then I won't be happy.

Both Cyber ​​and my older cousin are my favorites.

Keep writing, I look forward to the day you publish it