Pirates: the Steady and Responsible Person in the Straw Hats

It's watchable, but it's difficult to write about the story. The main character can be integrated into the Straw Hat Pirates, and it doesn't make readers think that it can work without him. Moreover, if you just rewrite the original plot, you will lose readers, and the book will end up being a eunuch.

The protagonist doesn't know that the plot is meaningless, and he doesn't know that the plot wants to change something.

Brother, cut it out. Stop writing. I have no interest in reviewing the text version of One Piece again.

Yuri

I admire the author who writes about following the boat. It's not that I don't like the flow, but it's mainly difficult to grasp. If the hang-up is too big, it's meaningless to follow the boat. If the hang-up is small, it's like drifting with the flow. The protagonist's ability should be unique but not too strong. Then there is the daily life, which must be written well and must be written. The protagonist must be integrated into the pirate group and cannot be like an outsider. Then a touching plot is best. Finally, there is the opponent. In the pirate plot, as the main combat force, a well-matched opponent will be assigned. The protagonist has no opponent, so the author has to DIY one himself, and it should not be too abrupt. Currently, the best one written about Chuanliu is the magician, but the eunuch is one. I hope the author can work hard.

Friends, have you noticed that since Zoro got Enma, he feels like he has changed into a different person? You can see it from his aunt's expression more and more like Oden.

The beginning is so nasty. In the next chapter, he skips several years and grows to 1.9 Meters tall. He has no pressure to deal with 20 to 30 million pirates. Is this a jump? Just jump to punching one Yonko and you're done.

Follow the boat! What I personally cannot accept the most is... Overstepping one's authority or overriding Luffy, such as letting the protagonist decide the next destination! Can we go to the island or not? Fight or not fight or something! No matter how outstanding the protagonist is, it is easy to gain the trust of other companions. But you can't just skip Luffy and become the decision-maker! There are some authors who are even more speechless! "Little ones! Set sail!" This sentence is shouted by the protagonist! Are you the captain or Luffy is the captain?

Follow the boat... It can neither steal the captain's limelight, nor be useless. It is difficult to grasp this degree.

Ah this. . . You just add a protagonist, and then add an additional opponent who is the protagonist in each wave of enemies. Remove these two points and there is no change from the original work.,,, Emmm, what's the point?

Since the sun god followed the boat flow, the beast flow has risen

Boat traffic is the most unsightly of all types

The biggest problem with Ship Flow is that I read several chapters in a row, all of which are based on the plot of the original work. It doesn't matter whether the protagonist exists or not. If the center is lost, then it's completely like reading the original work.

To be honest, those who can write about the flow of boats are really masters.

You can win for a while with some clever tricks, but it would be boring if the protagonist keeps doing this

Follow the boat flow. It's not that I object to it, the point is that following a group of people hanging on the wall, one every three days, and one every five days, the average person really can't get stronger at the speed. Let's not talk about Donghai Novice Village. Starting from entering the Grand Line, first defeat Sand Crocodile, Sky Island, then defeat Judiciary Island CP9, and then defeat Moria. The first half of the journey should take less than two years. The speed of getting stronger is the same as making a rocket.

Are you rewriting the original plot? Fighting Bucky and Zoro, Zoro vs. Hawkeye, and Nami stealing the ship. Well, I can't watch anymore because I already know the plot below. I'll wait until you finish writing the ending to read it.

I couldn't stand it until I reached Chapter 15. This novel is neither funny nor passionate nor invincible. It has basically nothing to watch. It really is like a novel without a soul at all. Author, you don't actually know what you are writing. Basically, one person can fight pig's feet back and forth. The level of combat power is chaotic, and secondly, the protagonist is just like a dispensable person.

I've read it again. Can you restore the update? Author, this is the only comfortable novel I've read in the past few years.