Darkness Invades, My Profession Is Light

Current situation of writing

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Plasma hand cannon?

Big Eyeball has opened a new book! This book is very beautiful, and comrades should read it first!

What kind of death track is this?

Just looking at the introduction, I think the heroine is poorly written and forced to write. I want to ask if this is the case.

Can there be no heroine? Reading this kind of novel, I feel that the heroine is superfluous.

It's very comfortable to watch, the setting is interesting, and the writing is okay, but it's a bit Riddler-y, and the pace is a bit slow (I personally prefer big scenes). I'm looking forward to the next development. Also, can anyone tell me about the Warhammer system?

Should the author consider deleting the last two paragraphs of the introduction? Many readers of Qidian have the embarrassing cancer of "Qidian phobia"

Complementary Building | Occupational Building | Weapons and Props Building | Skill Building Everyone can put forward any good ideas. The author named them waste, imagine waste, all kinds of waste... I will just copy (cross out) the good settings and learn from them!

How can I put it, the writing is okay, but the author has included too many things. It is acceptable to have a sentence or two occasionally, but it is a bit uncomfortable to appear in a long chapter. In short, if you can catch the radio waves, you should be able to watch it.

Chapter 31: Running away, the plot does not advance at all, the whole love is entangled, I would have written 30+ chapters in 5 chapters of other novels

I have an idea, wouldn't saving the same survivor decay? You can completely turn the survivor into a zombie and reuse it to achieve a win-win situation.

At first I thought it was a post-apocalyptic story about upgrading and killing monsters, but it turned out that the heroine was reborn and took the boss with her. After watching it for a while, I felt that the main story was good, but there were too many romance elements and the author's personal game goods, and it felt like I was reading a love story.

The author, please play jokes appropriately, because I don't really want to know whether Jie Xusheng drinks or goes to the knife first, Xiao Heizi's dancing is not standard, and whether Gan Yu eats to clear his heart. What I want to see is the plot. Playing memes appropriately can help create a relaxed atmosphere, but author, you are playing a little too much.

Understand?

As long as there is no heroine, I will watch it (to be fair), there are few that are well written in terms of emotions. The embarrassment of the heroine entering the plot, the embarrassment of the heroine being inexplicably delayed, and the possibility of so-called resurrection from the dead, amnesia and serious illness, etc. Alas, it's not that I don't believe there are emotions in this world, but you have to have some idea, right? If you're not strong enough, falling in love will either involve NTR or all kinds of messy things like being a traitor, or you'll meet a disgusting heroine who stabs you in the back, or something like that. Personally speaking, if you don't have enough ability, you can have a female supporting role, but you shouldn't have a female protagonist. If it's not written well, it's very toxic. If it's not written very well, it's also toxic. If the entry method is not handled well, the whole book will not be whitened.

He Chen

There is really a lot of nonsense. Almost all non-character speaking parts can be considered nonsense. And 50% of the character's speech can also be regarded as nonsense

If you are writing a book for readers, add less game jokes and the like. It will make you confused. If you don't know the story, it will be embarrassing. If you are writing a book for your own psychological satisfaction, then treat it as if I didn't say it and give it up.

It's well written, but I can't accept the style.

A love story wrapped in doomsday skin. . . . . . . . . . . .

Should we add Dzogchen, Peak, and Half-step to the second level to the first-level intermediate level?

Is this book a post-apocalyptic love story?

Are you sure this isn't a doomsday love story? It's all about you loving me and me loving you. Let's all be sweet together. I've read more than 30 chapters. Oh my god.

To be honest, I really think this book is very well written Maybe it's because I don't know what is a good article and what is a good novel, but I think this book is very good My judgment of good and bad is very simple It presents me a world, not the kind of mindless and cool thing This book seems to have brought me into a concrete world, not the kind of weird and unpredictable things Ajin, well written I like it very much

Too much nonsense, too many meaningless statements.

I haven't read it yet, I just read the synopsis. There is nothing in the front. I feel so embarrassed when I see that Xia in the back is wanted to be the mother of the child. It's not that I don't want a heroine, but the synopsis gives me the feeling that I am here to find a wife, and everything else is just done casually. All this is just what I felt after reading the introduction, do not substitute it into the novel

Ward finished the book in just a few days. It seems that I came too late (early this month)

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