I Show My Cards, I Am a Native of the Motherland!

I can only say that the subject matter is not bad, but the writing level is too low, and the three golden chapters are just for watering down. It took three or four chapters to finish the setting that can be explained in a few sentences. The setting of the original work was directly used to fill in the water. Who in this subject matter does not know the setting of Superman? "Take off" can be summarized in one sentence, but I just wrote a whole chapter of nonsense. Take off at the beginning of the third chapter, and it is still just taking off in the fourth chapter. The yuppie of water, the protagonist's thinking is very strange, like a second grade student, the writing style has a self-pleasure, and the word "three years" appears nearly ten times in the first three chapters.

It was quite attractive at the beginning, but it became more and more unsatisfactory, and it felt like it was boring and a pity to abandon.

It's quite strange. I don't understand what the protagonist is thinking? Or what are you thinking, author? Just because Batman used kryptonite to plot against the protagonist, and then the protagonist tried to kill Batman without saying a word? Quite a temper? Then why was the protagonist frightened by the kryptonite spear used by the motherland earlier, and fled like a lost dog? I think this hatred is greater than being plotted by Batman, right? With the protagonist's temper, when he knows that he is not afraid of kryptonite, shouldn't he go directly to the people of the motherland to cause trouble? Why is it that after more than ten chapters, I haven't seen the protagonist go to trouble the people of the motherland? Instead, it's as if it never happened. In the first few chapters of love, it wasn't the protagonist who ran away like a dog, right? And knowing that the motherland and Bald Luke are collaborating to cause trouble (against the protagonist), they just sit back and do nothing. You are quite magnanimous at this time.

To be honest, this kind of novel is not suitable for setting the birth point in our country, because it will be affected by reality and cannot obtain true freedom. If it is set in a foreign country or an imaginary country, it can be played in any way.

It's not fair, but to be honest it looks a bit strange. I feel like the main character has a lower IQ.

What did the author write? Can the people of the motherland compare with Superman? I suggest you take a good look at the aftermath of the battle between the Homelanders and the aftermath of the Superman battle. This is not on the same level at all. When Superman fights, he destroys a building, while the people of the motherland just destroy a small house.

There is a lot of nonsense. Basically, there are several chapters for one thing. For example, there are 8 chapters of flying. There are many other chapters that keep repeating the same thing. There are also many inexplicable plots. For example, it is very inexplicable. For example, it is very inexplicable that I can't fly to China no matter how I fly. It feels like I am writing for the sake of writing just to make up the word count.

Identification completed, poisonous. The protagonist's IQ is worrying

So you endured it for three years, but you didn't take revenge on those who bullied you?

Why does the protagonist lose his IQ completely after getting a superhuman physique? Is the reduction of wisdom so exaggerated? What about the decades of social experience as an ordinary person? Suddenly you can only make up your own mind?

What about being a superman and being a citizen of the motherland? These are just the dreams of a young man who jumped off a building and died.

Do not touch the chemical products on the assembly line if they are poisonous. The identification has been completed.

Rubbish novel, endure it for three years, and then fly away without retaliation. It lasts for ten chapters, and you keep enjoying yourself in the middle. What's the point of enduring it for three years? Go home and go to bed, you are really not suitable for writing novels.

Stop scolding, the author has profound writing skills! In just twenty chapters, the image of the protagonist to the clown is perfectly portrayed! What else do you want to spray? This is the best Joker fanfic I have read on Qidian. 🙂

What are the people of the motherland talking about? Isn't this just a naughty kid suddenly gaining great power and causing trouble everywhere?

Aren't you a native of the motherland? Why didn't you react when someone bombed you with a nuclear bomb? I'm so embarrassed, I didn't react at all after being beaten.

The only shortcoming of the author's book is that the protagonist is a yellow race, and he was born in China. Patriotism and respect for the ancestors are things that can only be admired when humans are small. For the protagonist who is invincible in the world, it is most appropriate not to set it as a white race. After all, free America shoots every day. Whenever this kind of protagonist is mentioned, I feel a deep admiration for the martyrs in my heart. I feel that it is too inconsistent.

Good guy, I changed the map as soon as things started. Are you so afraid of 404? I don't want to read it since I changed the map. There are too many Superman ancestors in American comics. You don't have the advantage of time to write the plot. How can you win the attention of readers?

Kneel down and lick rubbish books, if it were me, no matter what country you are from, if you dare to provoke me, I will kill you as a warning to others!

Chapter eight, just flying in the sky

Before flying at the speed of light, I could see, but after that I couldn't.

Batch routines written by the studio

. . . . What are you writing about? ? I thought I was going to write about the real universe, but ended up writing about Marvel and DC. I couldn't write about the real earth, but the endless starry sky outside the earth wasn't enough for the male protagonist to flutter about? ? ?

There is no need to write about this subject. If you write well, you will be blocked. If you write poorly, no one will read it.

To be honest, if my country had a superman, I would support him. Superman is the propeller of national development. Many people think of using superhuman force, which is too low-level. Let's talk about his public utility in detail 1. Aerospace technology. Nowadays, the highest cost of spaceflight is the cost of rockets. If the motherland sends the space station up multiple times and supplies, then we can colonize the moon this year. 2. Super brain, this thing is a bug in a world where intelligence is king. Only Americans can teach Superman to become a big fool with a head full of muscles. Here we are the country's top scientists,

Not bad. I've read several chapters. Please tell me when it's finished so I can go straight to the end.

It's been three months since I stopped updating. Is this book TJ?

Is the protagonist of this book Superboy-Prime?

It's too confusing. I think it's all happening one after another, and it can't be connected into a main plot.