American Comics Begin to Travel Across the Heavens

Can't see Chapter 15. . . . . Too retarded. . . . .

I have read so many books. This one is really white and watery. It is all based on the plot. There is no sense of participation of the protagonist at all. I don't know the purpose of the protagonist entering the movie world. It is a primary school of writing and a kindergarten of plot. The author may not know what to write. It may be just one person's yy. It's really bad.

Please author, I'm really tired of it at the end. Can you please stop keeping the running accounts? It's really getting more and more torturous. I read "Jian Lai" and "Shu Jian Lake" to be reasonable and gritted my teeth for a few days to get through it. In the end of your book, you have to write down running accounts every day, which is even more difficult than "Jian Lai" and "Shu Jian Lake" to ask questions. Can you write something substantive? Please reflect on the class you are in. I don't know what class you are in.

The repeated chapter and the watered-down chapter alone may have a word count of 200,000

10 Monthly passes are given. I don't like to watch plots that are bloody and cruel. I like the invincible protagonist. Even if you are not invincible, at least you cannot be weaker than the enemies you encounter or are about to encounter. It's okay to open it 50-50. I just read Chapter 153. Already fully booked. I hope that the subsequent chapters will not disappoint me🙏

It's too arrogant to be a superman 😁

It's very interesting. I'm very optimistic about the author. I hope to continue working hard. Come on.

Is there no Shennong to explain the character design? How are the medicinal properties? Toxic or tonic, to tonify the kidneys or tonify the mind

I saw what happened to the people of the motherland. I was really speechless. The protagonist was obviously super powerful, but the author insisted on writing it like a weak chicken. I won't say it anymore. The most important thing is to forcibly reduce intelligence. The protagonist's IQ is equivalent to that of a first-year junior high school student, or at most a second-year junior high school student.

This book is very poisonous. The author himself lacks human sophistication. In many places, he describes his own wishful thinking, and it is the kind of thing that a normal person would know is impossible at a glance. In addition, it lacks common sense in Western countries, so when describing Westerners' dialogue, there is a Chinese tone. Moreover, he lacks scheming and dares to trust and tell anyone. The protagonist of a book can tell the personality of the author. Basically, it is concluded that the author is young, self-centered, likes to enjoy himself, has not experienced any worldly feelings, and his family also protects the author very well. These can be seen in the book

I saw Chapter 155, and the dialogue was really awkward. I don't know what the author was thinking. He was talking to a bunch of foreigners. I don't want you to feel like the translator in the movie. You can do it even with a modern Chaoyang accent. But guess what, it feels like an ancient martial arts novel. When they arrived in Wakanda, the old king said to the protagonist and his party, "Welcome to Wakanda. I have been rude, but I hope to atone for my sins." If this sentence is not enough, there is another sentence after it, "I haven't asked you what to call me? Why did you come to our Wakanda?" Are you serious? What does a bunch of African foreigners sound like? You are just saying "Come here, Gaha'er?" From Northeast China. I thought you were joking! What the hell is this ancient style of yours?

I don't know which world you want to see in the next world. 1: Man of Steel (including the Superman series) 2: Superman Hancock 3: My Superman Ex-Girlfriend 4: Black Robe Pickets (I don't know if anyone will watch this) Yes, Li Yue couldn't stand that his strength was too low, so he asked me to help him get superhuman powers. (It is not necessary to go to these worlds.) You can also comment and write other worlds you want to see.

After reading about the first 100 chapters, I really couldn't stand it anymore. The setting in the Marvel world in the early stage was okay and not too toxic. Then I wrote about the black-robed pickets, and the whole setting collapsed into a mess. Just now, he shot a meteorite with a weapon at the level of Marvel's Heavenly Father. Then it becomes only able to protect against bullet damage. It's almost as strong as a Panther tank with only one millimeter of armor. A body that cannot be torn apart even when traveling through space, and a body that cannot be penetrated even by bullets. It's really too bad to see.

The title of the book should be changed to - I Want to Lick Through the Heavens or - Lick Through the Heavens starting from Marvel

Almost all the authors who write about Marvel are licking shit. Most Marvels start out as licking shit, and then become SHIELD tools, or follow a few protagonists, without innovation.

Tucao building, if you have anything to complain about, please come here 😃😃

I have read more than a dozen chapters, and the beginning is good. I was speechless when I traveled to Iron Man. The plot felt like it was copied from the movie, which was too dry. She was still protecting her like a nanny... But there was no one else!

The protagonist was speechless when the teleportation was played like this. He was clearly invincible in the early stage, but he was forced to be unable to get close. Thinking about how the Flying Thunder God is played, how the surgery fruit is played, and how Sasuke's God's Power is played, the protagonist is used as an auxiliary, teleporting people. The plot can be simple, but I'm afraid it will be brainless.

It's the same as all the American comics. The protagonist always dislikes specialization and likes to play fancy. The protagonist's first super power is infinite teleportation, which is almost 10,000 times stronger than Naruto's space magic skill Flying Thunder God. After all, Flying Thunder God requires spatial positioning and teleportation can be activated directly by thinking. As long as the protagonist develops this ability to a high level, he will be invincible. Within the protagonist's perception range, the protagonist can be infinitely exiled, transferring attacks, energy, materials, and characters to other worlds, space, the bottom of the sea, the sun, etc. It will return on its own in less than a second. Then the protagonist gained a second ability, space magic, which can fold the real space. Isn't it said that space is respected, time is king, space slaying, dimensional slaying, and space enchantment are developed, don't you want it to be another invincible ability? The protagonist has gained the thunder power of Thor again. Too lazy to say this. However, the protagonists all like to exercise their head iron abilities. I have the slow alloy body of love again. Soon met the pseudo-Superman. The protagonist has a lot of skills, and without even thinking about it, he feels that he will definitely not be able to defeat the pseudo-Superman. If it were me, fold a space loop space and let Pseudo Chao try it? The protagonist can already use the real space as a mirror space to rub building blocks. Could it be that the pseudo-super can also turn the space into a black hole? …….. Here comes the point, let's talk about it. All authors like to write the abilities they have acquired as weak and the abilities they do not have as strong. Because if you don't write it down, the protagonist will be too strong and there will be no point in improving his strength. This is the case for most American comic book authors. There is nothing wrong with this book. It is quite good to see such a beautiful comic. After all, there are fewer and fewer people writing such comics nowadays. I only saw the free part, and I don't know how it will develop later. I would like to say a few words to the author. Traveling by yourself can give readers a sense of immersion. Maybe you like to take people through time and be bright and selfless, but most readers don't like the protagonist to travel in groups or take people through time. There is a great Zhu Tianwen who likes to bring the supporting characters in the book together. Many people abandoned the book. Later, the author had to restrain himself a lot and write less such plots. Another question, the protagonist fell in love with an ordinary female reporter at the beginning, but there was not much description, and the female reporter had very few scenes. The protagonist follows him through time travel several times, and finally takes the heroine from another world with him. Maybe I'm overthinking it, but this is not a harem novel. Half and half like the harem article and dislike it. Qidian harem novels are not very popular. .... So far, this book is quite good. Although I have only seen the free part, the writing is decent and the power setting is not a big problem.

Is the author writing about the heavens? Does the author understand what the heavens are? The title of the book might as well be called Marvel Various Licks

To be honest, in order to force you to follow the plot, there are many places where you are forcibly subdued and have all kinds of contradictions. Novel is not a TV series. People can easily ignore the unreasonable parts of a TV series by just continuing to play them. The unreasonable parts of the novel leave people with a lump in their throats, and they will watch that section over and over again, which can poison people to death. Fortunately, I have high poison resistance.

I watched a few of them to complain about~ The main character who was very good in the previous part is practicing in a low-key manner, but he jumps as soon as he travels through time. When he just arrives in the new world and doesn't understand the situation, he goes on stage to make trouble. It's completely seeking death. Why should he be low-key and cautious? Not at all. Are you really worried that no one will notice when you perform a magic trick without concealing it?

After watching it, my spirit is aroused 😏

After reading more than 80 chapters, I found that the combat power of Pig's Feet is really a mystery. I don't know what it is like. You must know that your current strength is much more powerful than Thor with the Storm Ax in Marvel. However, when you arrive at the black robe picket, the weak superman beats you like a son, and your energy level is higher than Thor's god level. You have also copied one-tenth of this superman's ability. If you copy the ability, won't your combat power increase? Originally 1 Is your combat power still 1 after evolution? Your body can still turn into Adamantium alloy and teleport. This superman has 0 magic resistance according to the author's writing of the weak superman. You have become an enhanced version of Thor, releasing magic discharges. Author, please tell me. How can I, a weak superman, hit a pig's foot like a son? Just because I can discharge electricity, let alone beating this weak superman, can I PK with the original one? How do you write your combat power later? Please tell me, author.

A small suggestion, don't revolve around the so-called free-spirited hero. This kind of plot is really boring. Why did you come to the world of Iron Man? Is it necessary to save him? To be honest, those of you who write movies and TV shows at Marvel are all doing this. Once you have superpowers, you will revolve around the so-called heroes and save the world. Please tell me what those worlds have to do with you. If people are in danger, you will rush to save them.

Works by patients with secondary cancer, who pretend to be B whenever they disagree. It looks so embarrassing! It's like shouting before a fight: Hey grandson! Accept the sanction of justice! The writing is also very poor. It was okay at first, but then it got worse as it went on! Many sentences have mismatched prefaces and follow-up sentences, and frequent typos and incorrect sentences. Also, why do all the characters like to say "hehe"? Are you speechless after the last sentence? Who could have imagined that a character like Iron Man and Captain America would ridicule him whenever he disagrees?

It is recommended to change the name to American comics begin to lick the world

In fact, we could add a Scarlet Witch as the heroine, who is very dedicated. Very capable. That Louis felt like he had no sense of existence.

I've only read a few chapters and can't stand it at all. The plot is awkward. The protagonist has no scheming and pretends to be very scheming. The most serious thing is that even though she kneels down and licks the black and white skin, she is still a virgin.

I really didn't expect that the author would directly weaken the protagonist's strength in order to fill the story. So in the article, one moment I saw that the protagonist was very strong, and the next moment he was very weak.