The Crooked Fighter in the King of Fighters

A lot of comics writers have this problem. He was talking to himself inexplicably and his sentences were not fluent.

Author, you are so short and weak. One chapter in one day is simply not enough.

When I saw the protagonist acting as a matchmaker, I wanted to give up. The protagonist looked at the person clearly and backhanded others to assist others, but I felt unhappy. It's not impossible to give away a girl, but it's better to downplay her. The protagonist doesn't owe anyone a favor, so he only owes a few favors. Is it interesting for someone who doesn't have much communication to provide assists to others all day long? If you don't want to write about The King of Fighters, you can not write about it, but don't disgust people. There is also whether to tear down Mai Shiranui. If you don't want to tear it down, quickly downplay it. I always see her taking advantage of the protagonist to hug other men. Who can be in a good mood? Besides, the protagonist doesn't owe Mai Shiranui why he helps her everywhere. If you don't accept it, you are still there as a matchmaker. What can I say? The author likes being ntr and there is nothing to stop it.

Some plot protagonists are really superfluous. For example, in the scene with Liang Shanbo, the protagonist has no sense of existence at all and is very embarrassing.

When I read a first-person novel, I immediately gave it up because I couldn't stand it.

This author must be a poisonous person. For the nanny stories and the girl-delivery stories, please write a clear introduction. After reading the introduction, I thought it was a harem story, but when I looked at it, the reviewers were dumbfounded. Unable to complain

Author, this book is very classic, especially the introduction, you can tell at a glance that I dreamed back ten years

I came from the King of Fighters next door and saw that 81% of people have read this book, and the introduction also appealed to my taste. I thought, oh, there are two novels about the King of Fighters Palace. I personally like the King of Fighters. It has battles and beauties. Yes, I was a fan of The King of Fighters before starting from LSP. It seems to be called The King of Fighters. There is also the King of Fighters, and the opening one is unfinished. Kaixin Xiaoshuai also wrote an infinite novel related to The King of Fighters. I have read all of them. Unfortunately, the protagonist in that novel was too fake, like a eunuch, and I stopped reading halfway through. The beginning of this novel is pretty good, but you may not know how to write it even before it's halfway through, whether it's the other characters or the protagonist. . How can I put it? It's disgusting. It's like a table of dishes. The appetizer tastes good, but what comes after is just shit. I've also watched The Strongest Disciple in History. I like Miu and Shigure. If you don't criticize CP, I'm not right. I'm speechless at the same time. It doesn't matter if you like CP. But the protagonist has no sense of existence like a background board, and the plot is too dry and hard to swallow. You might as well break up the CP and forget about it. Did you watch that TV series that spent a lot of episodes setting up multiple scenes to introduce and shoot passers-by? Do you watch TV series like this? The reader is the protagonist, but you spend so much time feeding the protagonist dog food and acting as a tool. There must be people who like Miyu. What the hell is the difference between you and the Minotaurs in front of them? Bah. You're done, learn your lesson, and start over. The most taboo things in writing novels are literary youth and self-pleasure.

How should I put it, reading novels is to relax. You can segment the conversations between characters instead of putting them together. If you want more people to read it, you should consider this.

The introduction is just to deceive people. The female fighters are just there to attract people to look at. They write about having many, many good relationships, but they are actually helping other people support their wives.

In the latest chapter, I really don't understand the operation. Goeniz wants to challenge the protagonist with the three artifacts. Goniez wants to fight with the protagonist. The protagonist says to fight the three artifacts first, and then provokes the opponent himself. The three artifacts let you fight with Gonitz yourself, and said that the three artifacts don't take the opportunity to exercise To be honest, I don't think this is teasing the other party. It's just that the protagonist is mentally ill.

Trash, the harem didn't see it, only the trash

After reading it for a long time, I couldn't figure out the purpose of the protagonist's existence, especially in the volume about practicing in Liangshanbo. The role of the protagonist was just to stand up and express dissatisfaction with some plots of the original work, and nothing changed.

The title of the book is The King of Fighters. It was only after it was put on the shelves that I started writing it. Taigoula

I don't know what it means to go back and forth between two worlds, and I don't know what it means to write about food in the fighting world.

In fact, the protagonist can die or live (including the Zero series, Ninja Gaiden and Nioh, which are all in the same world view) The most closely linked is Street Fighter These two worlds can really learn something, and 12 Camis can be brought back, or the world can be expanded to include Street Fighter And The King of Fighters and Metal Slug are a world view. You can get some black technology to fight against the sound nest In fact, it is also possible to integrate Death or Life (Ninja Dragon, Nioh, Zero series) into this world The combat power of these worlds is not very different, and it is not easy to lose combat power when integrated, and it also adds a lot of content that can be written

It was all good up front, but when I got caught by Vayne, I started to talk nonsense, Bajie She's not that easy to talk to. If she doesn't join them if she gets caught, she'll be dead It feels like it's just for the sake of a (harem) forced plot. It's a bit embarrassing to watch it. If you don't know how to write the emotional line, you should not write it. It's completely brainless and the heroine is backing it. She's really brainless There is also Orochi blood. In fact, if you just want to trick the protagonist, Orochi blood is not a good choice. It has too many restrictions You could just throw the protagonist into Street Fighter and find Akuma to learn the wave of killing intent. At least it will still feel like punching to the flesh

I remember that the Orochi setting is the consciousness that protects the earth. Human beings are also part of nature, so they are also protected. Due to the increasing wanton destruction of nature by humans, the idea of ​​​​destroying humans has arisen. And I think that although Orochi said he wants to destroy humans, when he wakes up, he will say that humans will still be like this. The word "still" makes me think that Orochi will give humans a chance every time they wake up. If they succeed in stopping him, they will go to sleep. If they fail, they will destroy humans.

The writing is too confusing. There really is no main narrative line. It jumps here and there. The writing time, place, character, image, event, and many of them I don't understand what is being expressed.

I really can't understand Kenichi's part. It keeps describing Kenichi's daily life, and the male protagonist is downplayed too seriously. You are not the kind of book about a behind-the-scenes story, you need supporting characters to push events forward. It made me think that the male lead was changed🙃

It's you who update once a day. It's a rare King of Fighters novel. Wouldn't you be more worthy of yourself and everyone if you don't do 4-5 updates a day?

Why does the author like the world view of fighting games such as King of Fighters? Can I write e-sports articles? Just like the development of LOL e-sports articles, there were some articles that traveled into the LOL world in the past. Let's talk about readers' reactions. What did you rely on to break through the circle? Directly writing about real-life e-sports team games has become mainstream. How to write novels such as Street Fighter King of Fighters? Isn't it an obvious reference? Check out the event consultation and arrange the realistic plot. Isn't it another good book?

So, does the heroine have Mai Shiranui?

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First POV I endured it but then you told me you were poisoned

It seems that writing the King of Fighters article is almost finished when it reaches the sound nest. It's helpless¬_¬｀