Yu-Gi-Oh Comes to the World

When Zhu Lan played against Nanxia (the one using the gear deck), he had two problems. One was that if the Phoenix effect did not destroy the card, he would not be able to handle subsequent card draws. The second is that the effects of the monsters pulled out by the golden and silver gears will be stuck. The Thunderbird effect and the Last Words effect of the parts are both optional. It was Zhu Lan's turn at that time, so his effects had priority, Thunderbird C1, Parts Last Words C2C3. The retrieval of red, green, and yellow parts is "time" selection. If there are still effects to be dealt with after the special summon is successful, the effect will miss the opportunity and cannot be activated, which means that it is blocked by the effect of Thunderbird. The reason why I am telling you now is not because I deliberately held it back, but because I have been saving it before and only recently started to read it bit by bit. Of course, I didn't ask the author to correct these bugs. After all, it took a long time. I just wanted the author to know. Yu-Gi-Oh! Is inherently complicated, and verbal abuse occasionally occurs, but it's best to avoid it 🙂

In a world with card spirits, deck building, this has to be done later, and the bond with the card is the most important thing. There are also souls. I have read nearly a dozen of them. In your description, every card in this world has spirits, so it is no different from Pokémon. I suggest you this and the best Yu-Gi-Oh novel written in the past ten years. I played cards in Duel City. Mr. Yuyu, learn from it, 5 ds, you should have seen it. In Longya, when she was fighting against the Dark One, she was gradually at her wits end because he was not yet the Dragon Marker at that time. At this time, Brother Crab stood up and said, I believe in the deck you built by yourself, believe in your favorite card, as long as you believe in your deck, your deck will respond to you, in real life. It doesn't matter how you build the deck in the Yu-Gi-Oh! World. As long as you are sincere and go against your will when playing cards, you will be the Duel King. If I were in that world, I would choose the White Dragon deck. Maybe in the real world, the White Dragon deck can only be regarded as entertainment, but I still like it. If I get to that world, I believe that Keesara will definitely respond to me.

He is not a legendary fisherman, but he is a legendary cartoonist. Maybe one day in the future, he and his pet dog will meet in the world of cards.

In case you can't see it, I'm posting it again here. Let me say it first. I'm not here to argue. My opinion is a little different from yours. The first generation Duel King, Wang Xiang, his deck is simply a pile of cards. If you are missing any cards, you can just print one on the spot. For example, Elemental Hero Eternal Hero, that is a card specially printed for Teacher Daitokuji, Fudo Yusei. Her deck can be considered to have a relatively complete deck construction, but what? Do you remember? In 5 There are three or four episodes in DS where Brother Crab relies on patchwork cards to fight in a duel. The deck formed like that cannot be called any deck construction at all. Brother Crab relies on the deck that he believes in and defeats the opponent. In the duel, In the academy, I also relied on the cards given by the children to defeat the teachers in the Duel Academy, so I think that in the world of Yu-Gi-Oh, deck construction is not the first priority. The first priority should be the bond with the elves and the deck that believes in yourself. , Believe in your own deck, believe in your own elves, it is not impossible to print a card out of thin air. The most famous one is the president's floor printing card. My opinion is that elves can have it, but not everyone has it. If you want to have your own elf, but So, then fight side by side with your favorite card in battle after battle, use your heart and strength as a duelist, and keep watering it until it is born, an elf that is exclusive to you. These are all personal opinions. If you don't like it, don't comment. Thank you.

In the world of Yu-Gi-Oh, are girls important? Not important. Are carrots important? It's not important either. What's important? I played cards and read more than 20 chapters, but there was not even a serious battle. I saw you standing with the monster lord. That couldn't be called a serious duel. I really felt like I was two duelists in a duel. By the way, you also have Link Summon, Xyz Summon, Synchro Summon, Fusion Summon, and Superior Summon. If you Link Summon, you rely on the AI's Data Storm. If you Synchronize Summon, you rely on Ultra Maya Zolkin. The example of Yusei sent out, super summoning, relies on the super network composed of special forces from the astral world and the world of Astral with good intentions. Then the problem arises. With so many messy summoning methods, the world has withstood all kinds of strange energies and will not explode. We can put these aside for now and just talk about playing cards. There is no abnormality in the 20 or so cards. The battle between duelists and duelists. As a Yu-Gi-Oh fan fiction, do you think this is appropriate? Apart from making jokes, you are quite powerful, but you don't seem to have written anything else, especially duels. What age is this? You no longer engage in summoning elves to fight like in ancient Egypt! You can even play nonsense. For example, like this, I summon three Blue-Eyes White Dragons to cover two cards on my table. At the end of this round, it's my turn. I draw a card to summon Time Magician to destroy the three Blue-Eyes White Dragons on your field. Without even thinking about it, activate the magic card emergency fusion to fuse the three long Blue-Eyes White Dragons into the ultimate Blue-Eyes White Dragon. So what? My power of time is still on this table. Your white dragon will disappear as well. That's not necessarily the case. My ultimate blue-eyed white dragon absorbed your power of time and produced a new evolution. Blue-eyed dragon, you should write some serious resolutions in the Yu-Gi-Oh novel. Do not write about the battle between elves. It is impossible for elves to go to Shanghai duelists, because they will be resisted by the power of other duelists. If you want to defeat other duelists, there is only one way, use the oldest dueling ritual to defeat the opponent.

Could you please stop having so many dramatic lines? . Indeed, this may appear that the author is a veteran in his profession, but it is too dramatic. The introduction effect is just a good introduction, and he has to use parentheses from time to time, and there are a lot of complaints in the parentheses.

Keep in mind that in the world of Yu-Gi-Oh, everything can be played with cards. Playing cards is the focus of the elves and the like. It's just that the auxiliary girls are not important at all. Playing cards is the most important thing.

Why is your Yu-Gi-Oh written like Pokémon? It always feels a bit weird.

Why is your Yu-Gi-Oh written like Pokémon? It always feels a bit weird.

This protagonist is too stuck. I'm not complaining, but you want to make it enjoyable for readers. It's not appropriate to defeat the Traveling Bird first and then the Beast of the Abyss with a set of cards.        ，，，，，， . . . Finally, the protagonist's card library also has all kinds of cards of unknown origin. Cards suddenly appear. According to the settings, they should be cheap cards that can be bought at any time. Then you can browse more stores in various places and buy some useful ones. According to the settings, low-attack synchronization, super, and connecting monsters should be very cheap. You can take the opportunity to buy anacondas, cake frogs, water machines, etc. Also, according to the settings, many powerful decks should be inexpensive, such as Thunder Spirit, Sky Striker, Twelve Beasts, etc. Although they may not be found in one place, this can be the meaning and purpose of embarking on the journey.        ，，，（，）        ，，，，， And it's also a good thing to have someone to help you fight against the "organization". You can't be threatened with hypnosis every day. And in each crack, in addition to the lord, there must be cards with low attack but good use, such as Exchange Frog, Phantom Collapse Mermaid, Value-added G, Hand Pit Six Lolita, Forest Anaconda, Pancake Frog, Water Machine, Magic, Mental Brain Demon, Clockwork Hunter, Level Stealing Insect, Phosphorus Stem, Ritual Demon Liberator, Summon Witch, and Eve. . . . . . Every time the protagonist enters a crack, he collects the low-attack and powerful cards in the crack. Others don't realize that they are powerful. The sense of gain from building a deck is also one of the cool things. The Pokémon-style collection the author came up with is really genius, but it would be a pity not to use it. I used to think that the cards produced by cracks in each place are different and have their own characteristics. It would be an option to accumulate a deck of cards every time I go to a place. Of course, this is just my own idea. If the author thinks it is suitable, just use it as a reference. If it feels inappropriate, just pretend that you haven't seen it. Don't affect the author's thinking.

Why are there so many characters in Dream of Red Mansions? , Seriously?

The protagonist's elf power is so weak, the villain's elf does all kinds of tricks, the protagonist's... Is used to carry luggage?

This dialogue is so awkwardly written, and the female character is even more different

Make the rough character design a little more detailed. The ace monster also chose another one, the Hunyuan Dragon. Huazhu doesn't know how to color or draw the lower body, that's it.

Let's open a deck building, and everyone can post the decks they want to see. Let me talk about the rules a little bit. According to the plot direction, at least the process in the outline I have drawn up is this: Every time you visit a city where the duel instructor is located, it is a big stage, or it can be regarded as a copy or version. When recommending decks, please pay attention to the version. The outline that has been written so far includes: 1. The first stage. Kongyin City Chapter (Wugeyue Chapter). That is to say, in the current version, the duelist's deck mainly consists of main deck monsters, pendulums, and rituals. 2. The second stage. Bud Moon chapter. Enemies that use Fusion Summon themed decks will be unlocked. 3. The third stage. The Supreme Blue Sky Meeting Chapter. Enemies that use Synchro Summon themed decks will be unlocked. The remaining order is overload, connection, and the final city will allow the mix-and-match series (Salmomon DDD and the like) to appear. An important thing to say again, please be sure to ask about the version when recommending decks. The deck that conforms to the current version will definitely come out earlier. If you push me to write scraps or fire spirit stars in the early stage of the story, then I can only put it on hold for a while, and maybe forget about it. So... Say important things three times. Now it is a version focusing on main card monsters, pendulums, and rituals! ! ! The ones that have been pre-decided to appear include: Amazing Paradise, Kong Fang Group, Nephthys, Elemental Swordsman, Demon World Troupe, Machine Knights... If you have an idea, you can also describe the user's personality a little bit, just say a few words. If the character is outstanding, maybe he can be arranged as the villain of a chapter.

Okay, I personally think it would be another Duel City if written well.

It's not that you, a traveler, don't have that taste🐶

I had a dream when I was a kid. It was a rain of Yu-Gi-Oh cards on New Year's Eve, and everyone went out to pick up the cards.

Shuangyue's character design.

If you could travel through time, which one would you choose as the ace monster?