Start with Reverse Practice to Ward Off Evil Spirits

The title of the book is very attractive, and the idea is also very attractive. However, when I saw the protagonist in the second chapter using Goldfinger to change his skills, I instantly felt that the book's appeal was reduced by half, because this is entirely the power of Goldfinger. You just wrote that the protagonist had an imaginative idea, and even started to implement it. Then the following imaginative idea actually needed Goldfinger to realize it, and the protagonist instantly became a joke. You might as well set it so that the protagonist has a perfect score in reading comprehension, so you can change the anti-evil sword technique in reverse. After all, the anti-evil sword technique all goes along the Yang channel. It is not too difficult to change it to all go along the Yin channel. You must know that the meridian points of the human body, Yin and Yang, are in opposition to each other. And with Lin Pingzhi's knowledge, the success of the protagonist's imagination is well-founded, and there is no need for a golden finger. Adding a golden finger will make the protagonist's performance drop drastically. Practicing the evil-proofing sword technique in the forward direction will generate heat, making people irritable and uneasy, and at the same time increase the desire. Practicing it in the opposite direction will naturally make people clear their minds and spirits, and their wisdom will gradually increase, which will greatly improve the protagonist's understanding and character. Therefore, all the benefits that your golden finger brings to the protagonist can theoretically be obtained by practicing the evil-proofing sword technique in reverse. Adding the golden finger is like taking off your pants and farting. By the way, after the time traveler becomes the original character, his behavior is completely different from the time traveler. Even the name and personality are that of the original owner. This can only be said that the original character has the memory of the time traveler, not the time traveler. If even the personality is different from the original character, it is a neurosis caused by mixed memories. Real time-travelers generally do not use other people's names unless they are forced to do so under special circumstances. Even if they can be changed, they will change it back as much as possible. Even if they cannot use their own names, they cannot use the original owner's behavior and way of thinking. Normal adults will have their own three views, and it is impossible to change their three views immediately after time travel. If you really change from a person who has never killed a chicken to a murderer like mowing grass as soon as you time travel, is that really you who is the time traveler? This is a fake time traveler! ps: These are suggestions based on personal preferences. They do not require that the novel must be written in a certain way. After all, some people like to read this kind of novel. It can only be said that different preferences will lead to different opinions.

After reading a few chapters, I have been struggling with why I don't want to marry Yue Lingshan. I don't understand. Isn't Yue Lingshan beautiful? What's wrong with marrying her? If you want to say that she is a bad person, then forget it, but her heart and eyes are all about you, and you are still entangled in the fact that you are not the original person, and then you are entangled, then you stay far away? Why go back to Huashan?

World of Martial Arts Adventure is a pioneering work, right? People are not so pretentious. They will go for women when they are supposed to, and if they don't like them, they will kill them with one palm. For example, Ren Yingying. Originally, you have to be happy when you are a fan. Don't look at some people in Qidian. A few of them are singles. Selling newspapers and driving is not an ordinary walk. Some people always like to criticize others on the basis of justice, but it is useless. The author needs to understand who is the main subscriber group. Why did the harem article become popular some time ago? Is it because it satisfies the yy of us LSPs!

What magical skill can make you invincible with just a little practice? The Beiming Divine Art also needs to slowly absorb people's internal energy to accumulate, the Eighteen Dragon Subduing Palms also need to wait for the internal energy to catch up before the power can be greatly increased, and the Linghu Chong Dugu Nine Swords also needs the star-absorbing method to increase the internal energy. Otherwise, you can only play with the second-rate, and when you play with the master level, you must make an agreement not to use the internal energy. Oh? Is it the author's second guess? That's okay, just play slowly.

Awkward name! Deeply embarrassing! The plot was okay, but the dialogue was too awkward, and it felt like I was trying to be pretentious but couldn't. I want to imitate Gu's dialogue, but I also want to get Jin's style.

My thoughts on the Innate Body-Breaking Invisible Sword Qi. The twelve main meridians include Yuan, Jing, Rong, Shu, Jing, He, Qie, Luo and Li, all of which can be used in martial arts. The sword energy emitted from the 12 well point is small and fast, piercing directly into the five internal organs. Rong point and Shu point are combined, and the sword energy emitted by the person who is struck by the sword is different depending on the sword energy. It flows to the corresponding time according to Ziwu, which affects internal injuries. For example, the Yin hour hurts the lungs and the Wu hour hurts the heart. The You hour hurts the kidneys and the Zi hour hurts the gallbladder. The meridian points and He points combine to release the sword energy. If a person is hit by the sword, he or she may overeat or be hungry and have no desire to eat, which will damage the stomach energy and make it difficult to recover. There are original points in the six yang meridians, 12 in total on the left and right, which are the origin of the yang meridian. Sword energy is emitted through this acupoint, and when it reaches the yang, the person who is hit by the sword will have the energy moving the five internal organs unbalanced, lingering on the bed, and life will be worse than death. The twelve main meridians also have sub-points and mother points. The truth of the disease is caused by the Zi point, and the sword energy it emits is unparalleledly sharp. The mother point makes up for the deficiency of the disease, and the sword energy it emits is simple and honest. Or the eight major acupoints may be used to emit sword energy. If a person is hit by a sword, the internal organs will be injured, the essence will be injured, the qi will be injured, the blood will be injured, the pulses will be injured, and the bones will be injured. There are also sixteen Qie acupoints. Qie is a gap. Sword energy is emitted through this acupoint. Whether it is empty or real, it is unpredictable. The fifteen collateral points are connected to the meridians of the whole body, and the sword energy emitted is just like the coordination of fingers, erratic left and right, like a formation. The Twelve Recruiting Points are the key points of the six internal organs (the five internal organs plus the pericardium). If you can exercise the internal organs, activate the five elements, and practice the five Qi, you can emit the sword energy of the five elements from this point. At this point, it can be called innate! Recently I was learning acupuncture from Master Ni, and suddenly I had a strange idea, but I just laughed it off.

The main character is indecisive, I don't like it, and it's boring.

I just watched the protagonist struggle, struggle, and struggle. Reading a novel makes me feel sullen and not satisfying at all. If you don't know how to describe psychology, don't keep writing. A problem that Yue Lingshan had struggled with in the cave for so long, she struggled with it again when she arrived at Qingyun Mountain, and she still struggled with it when she returned to Huashan Mountain. Since you don't like her, why don't you stop pulling her? Leave Huashan and give her a push. When she finds her, come back and pull her. Oh, I got sick again later and started to get confused again. Ning Zhong gave you a great opportunity to cut off your relationship and asked the protagonist if she had practiced warding off evil spirits. If she answered yes, she would confine you to Guan Yue Lingshan and stop her thoughts. What is the brain circuit of the protagonist? I need to explain more that I didn't get it right. He went back to discussing the opportunity to marry Yue Lingshan, but he was so damn entangled that he finally refused. You might as well forget it with Ning Zhongze. I will definitely subscribe to the relevant chapters.

To be honest, I used to think Yue Buqun was not good when watching TV series, but now the one I admire the most in The Swordsman is Yue Buqun. He really worked hard for Huashan. Although he failed in the end, he is much better than Linghu Chong, a white-eyed wolf.

The pig's foot is about to start. The author helps him make enemies of the world, makes countless enemies for Huashan, then pats his butt and leaves.

Do you need to have more penises on your body if you want to practice the anti-evil sword manual in reverse?

Do you write romance or martial arts?

I gave up and stopped reading. Why? This pressure made Yue Lingshan very irritated. Why is the book so popular? It's not this annoying thing.

Your fighting writing is too bad. You have to perform dozens of moves on any one of them. Look at how the people who practice evil-fighting in the original work fight. Either they can't beat it, or they are like ghosts. They can be killed instantly with just a few moves. The great thing about evil-proofing is that as long as you can't react well, it will be an instant kill. Is it still called warding off evil spirits?

I recite poems all the time. In the early stage, I only had a small meal, and I pretended to be forced. I don't have that realm and state of mind. The poems I recite do not fit the scene. Is it embarrassing? It's okay to write well. Reciting poems all the time really makes me quit.

After reading more than a dozen chapters, the emotional scenes were too slow and indecisive. I thought I was watching a Japanese harem loser named Asasi, and I couldn't stand it.

The protagonist is not a physical eunuch, but a spiritual eunuch, which is even more terrifying.

After seeing Yue Lingshan go down the mountain to seek revenge, I suddenly realized that the plot started to become dull... The reverse sword practice at the beginning was actually the highest point of the novel. It was just a martial arts world, and a newcomer had to deal with the origin of the heart and soul, the cause and effect of grudges... The starting point was high, the intention was strong, and the writing level and the author's lack of experience led to the dullness...

This is simply an insult to people's intelligence.

Where is the author? Isn't this book written?

It can be written about a middle-aged man who practices the sword technique to ward off evil spirits, and it can be read as a pornographic book.