Big Cousin of All Worlds

It feels like the protagonist is rushing to a scene. Why is he so urgent? Is there anyone chasing him? The first world just didn't know the situation, the second world threw everything away and ran away, the second world Zhou is the empress, don't you know what the consequences will be if a dynasty has no heir? I'm really speechless. It's clear that the heroine has her heart set on the protagonist, but the protagonist is so hypocritical. Are you asking her to find a man to give birth to an heir for Da Zhou, or do you want her to be annoyed by the ministers if she doesn't get married in the future? Or should you let such an ambitious person have other ideas? If you don't marry him, you can call him a scumbag. He is simply a bitch.

I wonder, you let Yang Kang go, but you wrote Zhang Wuji like this and then killed him? If Zhu Yuanzhang usurps the throne like in the novel, he can kill him. But if someone provokes you, will he kill him when they meet? And Zhang Sanfeng, you wrote this

You can still watch the first world. After all, Mu Nianci is a woman with a tragic character and a very lovable character. But Yitian, you damned almost everyone. What do you mean? When you write a fanfic, you have to respect the background of the story, right? If you let yourself go so freely, why don't you just follow the trend and cultivate immortality in the Siheyuan?

To be honest, at the beginning, I killed Master Lingzhi with one palm without any internal power. The author should revise it. You are not a big muscle tyrant and you rely on moves to perfect it. It is impossible to kill a third-rate person with internal power with your bare hands.

After killing Zhang Wuji, he still moaned several times, which made me sick...

Although the novel is enjoyable, it has a poor sense of immersion and poor logic. If soldiers can become strong soldiers with just a few sentences, there will be no war. We should use high-level military training to create hundreds of special forces in a month or two, kill the rich and feed the poor, get some meat, and establish prestige, and then use your plot to be barely coherent.

The most advanced world is Japanese comics? I want to curse people and withdraw things that won't look at the devil. I really regret subscribing to this book

The author is worth half a million! These three views, this butt is crooked into the pig pen!

The part about killing Mei Chaofeng was a bit outrageous. The punches from a person without internal strength only had a few hundred kilograms of strength to hold her up, and she was killed in two blows.

Regardless of your stance, Zhang Sanfeng, Zhang Wuji, and Zhao Min are all popular characters, right? Are you so shady because you think your grades are too good?

My values ​​are confusing, I originally thought I had some holistic thoughts. But after looking at it, I found that the protagonist simply "don't pluck a hair", but he doesn't know not to take a hair. There are not many problems with the book, and the writing style is not bad, but the three views are too confusing. Those who like to subvert history can read it. After all, melons are not sweet, but they can also quench thirst.

... I finally understand why water friends say that only the Mu Nianci chapter can be read

The Condor Chapter, the poisonous point, was the order of parents in ancient times. What happened to the matchmaking competition? The pig's feet relied on the system to provide identity to pretend to be garlic, and it was in public. I only saw this and didn't read anything else The Yitian Chapter, Zhang Sanfeng is in He may not be a legitimate figure in real history, but in Jin Yong's martial arts world, he is a well-known righteous figure and a pioneer against the Yuan Dynasty. You are writing about Jin Yong's world, not the real world. Forget it, I can't stand it. I only read a few chapters of She Condor and Yi Tian. There are too many poisonous points.

It is extremely poisonous. You can judge for yourself whether you can read it without using your brain. Let me just say one thing: The Legend of Heaven and Dragon Slaying. It is set in the late Yuan Dynasty and early Ming Dynasty. There are still soldiers who follow Zhou Zhiruo to conquer the world, and they can even be registered as empresses.

There is a system in place to start the game, but you still want to steal the Nine Yin Manual. The author has a pit in his head. He can obviously kill all the way from low to high. Isn't it good to be an upright person? Obviously your protagonist's character is a warm guy

I can't stand it anymore when I see Chen Xuanfeng pretending to be him. To be honest, it's too embarrassing.

Change the name to Wanjie I am a licking dog

The first two volumes were okay, but by the third volume it was inexplicably foggy. Can't understand. Goodbye to you

The front is okay, but the back is very hip

I have to say that the structure of the story is quite good, but it doesn't agree with the author's views, and some parts were uncomfortable to watch, so I said goodbye. Well, I still want to secretly read Zhu Xian Scroll again.

According to the rhythm. The protagonist is about to achieve the realm of God/also known as the multiverse level powerhouse/it can also be said that he will become the first level of the Creator God. The book will be finished soon. Oops... Slipped away. Not interesting. Got it

Yang Shen's writing is pretty good so far, keep it up

I think the author's writing style at the beginning and system settings is fine. The love and affection of the male protagonist in the first part of the story are really not written out. A story of less than 30 chapters. The quick travel article looks very good. But I can't write about love and liking at all. If I insist on writing it like that, it will be too boring to chew on. Also, don't write about emotions based on the martial arts background story. Personally, I don't think it is necessary. Everyone has a different sense of understanding and understanding of the characters in a book. So there is no need to spray.

The Fierce Ghost Chapter turned out to be a gentleman's novel...... The treasure was discovered😍

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