
Konoha: This Ninja Is Covered in Liver
木叶:这个忍者浑身是肝
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- 2.8M Words
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- Light Novel
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- Male
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- Fan Fiction
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- 2y ago
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- Qidian
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While smearing Itachi and Sasuke... To cater to the public, at the same time he is slandering Uchiha... While smearing Itachi, can you think about why Itachi did what he did? Does he really think so much...? Very happy? There used to be so many dilemmas between loyalty and filial piety in the scripts, but later most of the people who chose the country did not even try to criticize any of them... A typical double standard! It is estimated that only a stupid and careless person like Naruto who cares about the village will not be hacked...
I've never heard of the Uchiha clan abusing orphans. Obito's eyes are wide open, and I've never heard of anyone abusing him. The Uchiha clan generally becomes stronger directly through hatred. If they abuse a three-magatama or a mangekyo, they'll be out of luck! The Uchiha clan usually provides a living allowance and a residence for orphans. A thousand-year-old clan will not haggle over trivial matters.
The most vicious thing about this novel is that taijutsu is just taijutsu. It has to be trained on the skin, bones, and internal organs. It is forced to this aspect. Hokage taijutsu, including ninja taijutsu, has nothing to do with this qi and blood martial arts. It is completely different.
Why do Shisui and Itachi like the protagonist so much? Good guy, in the chapter where Danzo meets the protagonist in the Hokage Building, Shisui and Itachi vow to protect the protagonist from leaving the village at all costs, even if they kill their ANBU teammates. Dare I ask what the protagonist has done to make these two so devoted to him? Strength? Talent? If I remember correctly, Shisui and Itachi are resolute "anti-Madara factions". The most taboo thing is the unreasonable tyrant like Uchiha Madara who is supreme in strength. The only way to conquer these two is to start with ideological theory. Now here comes the question. Dare I ask what thoughts and theories the protagonist proposed? From which aspect and angle, did Shisui and Itachi profoundly analyze the fundamental problem of the Uchiha clan? Or they may take a long-term view, looking at the entire ninja world from the productive relations of production, questioning and criticizing the rationality of the ninja system, summarizing policies, implementing guiding ideology, and planning a future blueprint that can subvert the millennium system of the ninja world. If there is no such spirit and pattern of "smashing the old world to create a new one" and "stepping barefoot on the smooth road between the mountains and lofty mountains", I don't think the protagonist is qualified to be treated like this by Shisui and Itachi, because in the eyes of Shisui and Itachi, Uchiha's problem is not his strength, but his brain! Uchiha needs a clan leader with brains and courage to adjust the conflicts between the village and the family, and at the same time find a long-term and stable way for the Uchiha clan to survive. But at least for now, it seems that the protagonist is not qualified. At most, he is a tribesman with good talents. Even if the author added that Itachi thought that the protagonist's talent was comparable to Uchiha Madara, it did not show the protagonist's gaze pattern. How could these two people not hesitate to rebel against the village in order to protect him? The sixteen-year-old Kaguya Mizukage next door, the way to convince Shisui is to let him participate openly in the reform policy and development policy of Kirigakure Village, and to practice the theory with practice, so that you have to convince him. In the early years of the fandom (Eunuch), there was a protagonist named Uchiha Kyo, who used the Seven Heroes of the Warring States Period to interpret the five major countries and the small countries, analyzing them one by one from the ground, humanities, politics, history, economy... And other aspects, bringing Uchiha Itachi a different perspective of the ninja world. , And finally gave Itachi a heads-up, telling Itachi that "If you seek peace through struggle, you will survive in peace, and if you seek peace through compromise, you will perish in peace." He was more radical than Uchiha Madara, but more than radical, what impressed Uchiha Itachi was Uchiha Kyo's courage and courage, as well as his mature revolutionary theory and guiding ideology. In addition, there are many more fans. In terms of convincing Shisui and Itachi, some are well written, some are poorly written, some are overwhelmed by the collision of ideas, and some are simply mouth escapes, which are even more outrageous than Naruto's mouth Nagato. But it is no surprise that any author who wants to keep these two for their protagonists is writing, and they are taking the path of attacking the mind and changing the outlook. No one is stupid enough to think that if the Uchiha has a genius who can fight so much, they can make these two surrender. Because no matter how hard you fight, the most you can do is kill them. Without persuasion, you can never conquer them. But this book opened my eyes, you are the first author! 👍
When I was looking for a book, I saw it twice. I clicked in every time and read it. But every time I read two pages, I couldn't stand it anymore. The subject matter is good and attractive, but the writing is a bit too rough.
To be honest, the front is really about forcing hatred. Regarding the attitude of Uchiha orphans, just look at Obito. He is also a low-key person, but he had a bright heart before turning black. If Uchiha bullied the orphans in the clan, it would be impossible. . . Author, you said you wouldn't clean up Itachi, but the plot you wrote was to highlight Itachi's big pattern, while other Uchiha are narrow-minded, and they are still kind to the protagonist. What will happen when the clan is exterminated? When the protagonist is treated like this, he probably wants to exterminate his family. . . Those who write about Uchiha being ugly should also treat outsiders. . .
I saw the protagonist and Jiraiya sparring in Chapter 222 Jiraiya performed a fire release, and the area within a 50-mile radius was affected The protagonist was a Konoha Shenron, and the 12 Xiaoqiang who were watching from 50 miles away could feel the violent wind This horse-riding guy, what kind of god fights? The direct killing range of the Hiroshima atomic bomb is only 1.7Km 15 kilometers away, harmless to humans and animals There are also 12 Xiaoqiang who are watching from 50 miles away.
In 2018, the author was selected as the third among the top ten emerging talents by the author circle. I thought that he would rise rapidly, but I didn't expect that the author had been silent for several years due to real life! This new work has been in the works for several years and it is absolutely beautiful.
😒Why are the recent Naruto novels always engaging in politics as they are written? Annoyed
Bull! Ten people from Shimura invaded the Uchiha clan, and they had to sound the alarm to get support!
The author said it was a shock to people. How should I put it? Hard work and reward are two different things. If hard work pays off, then the richest man in China should be the donkey pulling the strings.
Uchiha Baiyu... This name is just like calling Tom Lee or Wang Jack. It's a thief. If readers really have nothing to read, you can think about some books where the protagonist is named Uchiha Li Xuan. It's not unacceptable to call him Uchiha Baiyu.
The main character is less than 10 years old and has a kaleidoscope, which really persuades him to quit. Everything else is okay, but the main character is too young and is very inconsistent.
The protagonist at the beginning is an orphan of the Uchiha clan, but he doesn't even have living expenses, which is a bit outrageous. You must know that Uchiha is a wealthy family. It is impossible to say that you become an orphan and are not provided with living expenses, otherwise Uchiha would not be able to exist.
There is no reason for my poor grades. After reading dozens of chapters, I can't see any bright spots at all.
I temporarily tolerated Uchiha charging the protagonist, an orphan, because he was targeted by the clan because he was a skewer. But what's the point of forcibly recruiting cannon fodder for war? They are all orphans who are not qualified in the three body arts. What can these children who are under 8 years old and do not know ninjutsu do? Can any genin kill him? During the most difficult period of the Third World War, they only lowered the number of years for graduation and allowed graduates to go to the battlefield. And author, do you know why soldiers are given pensions when they die? It's for living people to see. You caught these orphans who know nothing and sent them to the battlefield today. If I die in the battle tomorrow, will my children still be sent to be cannon fodder without learning anything? After this wave of operations was demonstrated, people's hearts suddenly dispersed. In addition, the water blast that Ino gave to the protagonist is an advanced skill that requires very, very high chakra requirements. Who would teach a child under eight years old this technique? There is also the psychic beast that ran away at the beginning. The psychic beast went back after its owner died. How could it be wandering around the village without anyone instructing it? Why did the tiger take hostages? A six-meter-tall tiger held a six- or seven-year-old girl in its mouth and ate it casually without chewing it, so why keep it? Take it back to be the bride? What's even more outrageous is that this is the heir to the core family of the third-generation faction like Inoludie. Your ANBU is not the root. If you watch her die, how will you ask the third generation to explain to Inoludie later? Are you trying to argue that you weren't there? Haha, the jinchūriki are all here, how could it be possible that there aren't ANBU watching nearby?
Is it so outrageous to send you to the battlefield at the age of six? Have you graduated early? Besides, your current time period is very peaceful, okay? 🤔 You should at least consider the background and humanities.
Five or six-year-old children go to the front line to do logistics. Don't forget the will of fire of the third generation. Although the will of fire seems to be a bit poisonous, it is impossible for the third generation to do this openly. It will only let the roots recruit people secretly. Otherwise, the villagers and the village will think that there is no one in Konoha when they see it.
In terms of sending unqualified personnel from the ninja school to the front line, it basically negates part of Konoha's village-building national policy, because the school was established by the second generation Hokage in order to break the ninja clan's ninjutsu monopoly and increase the number and level of Konoha ninjas. So there are not only civilian ninjas, but also ninjas from the ninja clan. Let me ask, do you want to send the children of the Sarutobi clan to the front line, or do you want to send the children of the Nara clan, the leader of the Jonin class, to the front line? Do you think Danzo, as a person who has been squatting for so long, has such low political ability?
The timeline is so messed up. There has been no war since the Nine-Tails Rebellion. They even go to the battlefield. At the beginning, it is said that the Uchiha clan has been annihilated, and later it is said that they have not been annihilated. This is such nonsense. Do you really think that you are reading fan fiction without thinking?
[The Naruto timeline referenced in this book] compiled by a certain boss
Timeline referenced in this book
It's a bit beautifying Uchiha. Uchiha is not a peaceful bird. Let's not talk about the paranoid people in the family who don't listen to others' advice and don't consider other people's feelings. When Madara defected, he was already a tainted family, and from the founding of the village to the annihilation of the clan, he had been in conflict with Konoha. The Fugaku family and Uchiha Kagami were among the very few moderates, and they were still playing the cards of being a police force.
Plot discussion post (if you are dissatisfied, please complain here)
[The core plot of this book: the protagonist leads the Uchiha to resist Konoha] [Statement]: 1. In order for the book review area to be beautiful, peaceful, and less violent, readers who are dissatisfied with the plot, please come here to speak, and speak uniformly here, and will not be deleted. If you post it outside, you will directly start a rant. It means that you are not my reader group, so I can only say sorry in advance. 2. Ten Geng is a novice author of Naruto fanfics. I am happy for everyone to point out the bad points and learn from experience, but I will never allow comments that have not read the book to be black for the sake of being black. 3. You can leave here what you think is the poisonous point in Naruto, or the name of the protagonist that sounds good, thank you!
The liver experience setting is attractive, but the plot is very poisonous. The protagonist comes up and has his soul searched directly to eliminate the suspicion of being a spy? How do you do it without Occlumency? I looked at it over and over again, it was so big! Bite the bullet and keep watching. Then Magatama-chan went to spoil the future for Shisui, so you believed it? If someone suddenly comes out and says that I will be an emperor in the future, I will think that he is a liar. Even if my brother said that he was reborn, I would not believe it unless he told me the lottery number so that I could win. What's more, Uchiha are all mentally ill and brainless, so they believed it in just one second? There is no evidence. Some people say that the prime minister of the country wants to kill me, so I believe it? And then the whole clan believed it? Finally, I was short on books, so I read it hard and saw the protagonist leading the Uchiha clan, killing Danzo in front of Sarutobi Hiruzen, and spreading Danzo's past. Uchiha and Konoha sat together to discuss how to deal with the Shimura clan? Didn't you say that the whole family was going to run away? The protagonist shouted himself, saying that the situation was such that Uchiha and Konoha could no longer coexist, and they began to discuss a fake civil war and run away slowly? I thought the protagonist had taken care of the Sky Ninja Floating City, but ended up not clearing the road anywhere? What about playing? You can use counter-spiritual techniques and run away immediately after the fight. I can tolerate it even if you just go to a corner of the Land of Fire and pretend to be a civilian! Or maybe there are so many Gundams, they bid farewell to the Gods on the spot, and directly came to power in a coup. I can't bear it. Isn't it a bit outrageous for you to want to run away slowly after you have made a Qingjun? This Sarutobi Hiruzen is the kindest Hokage. The first reward given to the protagonist is multiple shadow clones. He allows the protagonist to contact Naruto at will, and then directly gives the protagonist the thunder god. In the end, he watches the protagonist promote Danzo's past "heroic deeds" and kill Danzo. Such a kind-hearted Hokage who has done nothing at all, the protagonist does not trust and thinks Sarutobi is hypocritical, and there is no point in continuing to cooperate? The Flying Thunder God has been given to the protagonist, what else is there to do? I gave you my gun, but you still don't trust me. Isn't it a bit too much? No way, I was killed.
I can't watch it anymore, as there are too many places that don't match the feel of the original work. Many times the author thinks he is very humorous, but when the humor is inappropriate, it becomes embarrassing. Then they gave the protagonist an inexplicable greed for money. In order to highlight this unnecessary embarrassing setting, various embarrassing plots were created. There are almost no companions there, and the protagonist here is still messing around for a few dollars. The most important thing is that Naruto is also with the protagonist. Isn't it urgent?
How should I put it, the earthy flavor is a bit heavy, and there are too many forced Chinese thinking, which seems out of place in the world of animation works. The unique characteristics occasionally emphasized are actually quite strange. Perhaps if you travel more and broaden your horizons, you can reduce the stereotypes.
Come on, brother, I've decided everything but it's not enough.
I feel like your plot setting is a bit awkward
When I saw the part where the protagonist proves his innocence, it felt too stiff and not very smooth! The third generation should not accompany Danzo to fool around; First of all, the third generation must be sensible and sit in the position of the shadow of the village. Affirm top-down thinking, not Danzo's bottom-up egoistic version of "The Will of Fire." The third generation in the formula book is the image of devoting himself to the village and dedicating his whole life to the village; although it is inferred from the Naruto incident, the White Fang incident, and the Sarutobi 3000 Ninja incident that the third generation is not a good person, but at least he has a deep understanding of the city. If he wants to do something that goes against his own conscience, at least it must be beneficial or to achieve some purpose. Then what is the purpose of playing the leading role with Danzo? Is it to beat Uchiha? Or is it to win over the protagonist? If it is to beat Uchiha, then it should be more administrative suppression, so as to weaken Uchiha invisibly, rather than playing a protagonist spy to prove the game, which is a bit child's play. Uchiha does not lack this reputation. One is their arrogant character, and the other is that their reputation is not good, so they don't care about this. If you want to take the protagonist for your own use, then according to the three-generation routine, you should first use the "Will of Fire" to brainwash, and then use Danzo to alienate and instigate rebellion. This is what they do in line with their status. Of course, whether the protagonist is suitable for the trick is another matter. Otherwise, Danzo in your novel will be like a mad dog. I don't think he is that stupid yet. Regardless of whether it is comics or anime, Danzo does have the meaning of being a troublemaker, but I have to say that he still has the charm of a villain. He has his own dark justice and is good at grasping the weaknesses of people's hearts. You can see that when he recruited Kakashi, he followed the guidance and was good at it. He was not killed with a shot!
Don't forget about the quality when updating, it's really fun to watch
Song Jiang in Xunyanglou wrote an anti-poem, but Huang Wenbing took advantage of it and wanted to arrest him and hold him accountable. "Don't worry, brother, Wu Yongnai and I have been friends for many years. His name is Zhiduoxing, and I am the King of Ideas. We have a good relationship for a while. As long as I use a little trick, I can help my brother out of trouble!" Dai Zong laughed. "What's the plan?" "Brother can mess up his hair, splash his urine on the ground, pour it in, and pretend to be a wind demon." "High!" One day later. Song Jiang was in the lobby of the government office. One Buddha was born after being beaten, and the other two Buddhas passed into nirvana. Their skin was torn and their flesh was dripping with blood. Unable to fight, he had no choice but to take action and was taken to death row, waiting to be executed. Dai Zong went straight to Liangshan for help. "Don't worry, dear brother, as long as I use a little trick, I can help Brother Song Jiang get out of trouble!" Wu Yong laughed. "What's the plan?" "Write a false reply. When the wise brother goes back, he will say that the Grand Master will send Song Jiang to Tokyo, and we will be robbed nearby." "Wonderful." Three days later. Dai Zong was tied up and beaten until his skin and flesh were torn, and blood flowed out. He really couldn't stand the torture, so he had no choice but to surrender. He was put in a big yoke and thrown into prison. "Don't worry, brother, I have a plan to keep me waiting for a few days." In prison, Dai Zong comforted Song Jiangdao. "The plan is out?" "I have a good friend Huang Kongmu..." Six days later. Song Jiang and Dai Zong had plaques tied on their necks, glue was applied to their hair, and a red silk paper flower was inserted into their heads. Having a long break and saying goodbye to wine. "Don't worry, brother, I have another plan..." "Brother, I want to be quiet, you'd better stop talking."