Staying in the Fairy World

When I read the second chapter, "Mana cannot be restored automatically" and "Meditating cannot restore mana. Restoring mana requires additional skills and money to buy, which is quite expensive." Then what is the Qingfeng Gong you practice? Being able to develop mana can improve one's realm, but cannot restore mana? Do you know how poisonous it is to write two sentences casually? Pat your head and set it up, hey.

Still haven't learned an attack spell at the age of 59? Is the world of immortality so safe? Nowadays, children are still learning Taekwondo, but you, an ancient cultivator, don't even practice attack spells. It is simply safer than China. You might as well change your name to Wenming Xiuxian. There is no logic at all.

The author's writing style is not bad, but he just followed the trend and made the wrong mistake. Previously, the person who didn't want to play wrote a game about playing eunuchs at the beginning. There were many settings that were not covered, so if I want to write this type of game, I have to add a lot of settings, which is quite a challenge for novices.

After reading it carefully, it may be that the author is writing a book for the first time and has not straightened out many things. Whether it is imitation or copying, you need to understand that both the appearance of characters and the arrangement of the plot in the book serve to promote the plot. For example, the incident in the village surrounded by mist, and the death of a series of supporting characters in it, do they have any effect on the growth of the characters and the advancement of the plot? It basically doesn't work, so it's better to simply explain it. The supporting characters are all NPCs, and they don't stand up! Then it's all hydrology!

I like this book very much. The author should set up a group to brainstorm. Now the economic system has collapsed. Foundation building is already the highest level of the sect here. As a result, it is not easy to build the foundation. There are no benefits. On the contrary, it costs a lot of money to learn various small spells. Could it be that the immortal cultivators in Immortal City from top to bottom have worked hard to earn money and cultivate in the end, but in the end they only work for the top person? But it's useless for Sect Master Mo to be in seclusion or fight all day long if he has money. Furthermore, isn't the currency of Lingshi developed by the sect's Lingshi mine? Writing like this is equivalent to writing that spiritual stones are useless, and then the protagonist opens the golden finger and still tries hard to earn enough spiritual stones. It's so contradictory,

This author made the male protagonist too wretched. It's hard to see such a disgusting man. A sixty-year-old man also made the character look like a fat nerd. The wretched man either likes to look at beautiful women or has erotic dreams. Are you so disgusting? No matter how good the plot is, it will be ruined by this disgusting male protagonist.

The more I look at it, the more I think, are you a new vest that people should not play with others?

Later in this chapter, it is said that no one really commented. I am also a novice, just say it casually. I've seen the mysterious world before, and it's very good. I feel like it's mainly about entertaining stories. I didn't read this book until I read less than 30 chapters. Although it is a time travel, that book handles it better. At most, I can visit Chunlou. This book has an ex, amnesia, dream memories, and supporting characters' memories. In the first few chapters, my skills have not improved much, and I am still entangled with a few women. Big or small breasts take up too much text. The golden three chapters, the first three chapters are more important, in fact the first thirty chapters are also more important. You can roughly see what the author wants to express. There are too many supporting female characters. Readers generally like the protagonist to become stronger, and those who deal with the protagonist are usually relatively powerful people, refining elixirs, making talismans, etc. The description of several women is too boring. There is an ex, a 20-year-old woman, and a woman who likes to gossip. The protagonist cannot become stronger by dealing with them. They are all dispensable. Why spend a lot of pen and ink writing about these people. The 20-year-old woman appeared next to the cave, which was also inexplicable. Maybe I missed it, can that woman farm? In the previous book, the protagonist was very decisive. He took the widow when it was time to take it, and he also killed the people he wanted to kill. As for supporting characters, they are all people who are helpful to the protagonist. Let's discuss rationality. Why is that young girl allowed to enter other people's caves every day? Doesn't the protagonist want to live in peace? It's still an old man's cave. What does that young girl do? How do you make ends meet? The protagonist is an old man, why do you still write about your ex? My ex is an old woman, so there is nothing to worry about. Aren't you around 60/90? A person who is almost dead is still writing this? What is more reasonable is that they all have grandchildren. The room next to it was dark and terrifying, and no reason was given. Is there something weird in it? Still? It's not clear. Is Fangshi still dangerous? I think farming is dangerous. The farming area is so large and the houses are so far apart. There are so many people in Fang City, why is it dangerous? Moreover, the shops where transactions are carried out are all places where spiritual stones and qi practitioners gather. Farming is also written unreasonably. Not even an acre of land is called farming? Only 4 points of land. How crowded should the houses of farmers and farmers be? Maybe you really need to check how much rice is produced per acre. A cloud and rain spell can cover an acre of land at will. The protagonist is 60 years old and still so poor. What I want to ask is how did he get here before? Single digit spiritual stones. In the past when I was practicing at the first level of qi, I didn't have the money to learn the Yun Yu technique or the Kung Fu skills. How did I create something from scratch? Where did the skills learned from Lingshi come from? Why didn't you starve to death? What kind of acupuncture did I learn? The chicken lays the egg, and the egg lays the chicken. There was no spiritual stone before to learn the exercises, the cloud and rain technique, and what kind of acupuncture I learned. You definitely can't farm. Farming is in vain and it won't grow. That mysterious world at least said that he spent his money by visiting brothels. The focus is not on Shengui, but on the protagonist's success in the world of Shengui. Moreover, the description of the world is relatively reasonable and makes people feel immersed in it. The cool article has not even started yet, but I have already written about a bunch of women. There are several 60-year-old old ladies, and the neighbors next to them are also weird, with no grandchildren or children. A 60-year-old man is about to be buried

Guarantee the quality. Even if you update it once a day, the number of readers who follow it will gradually increase. If you update more than 20,000 words every day, fewer and fewer people will read it if you add water or poison at every turn. This book cannot be compared with the "Shengui" of "Playing with People". After all, "Shengui" has not been updated for so long. This book is better written than other imitation books; the number of people who will read it will gradually increase.

Damn it, I just finished reading it and it's free of charge

This book is okay. If the updates are stable and not unfinished, it can beat other proficiency cultivating immortal novels. Come on

I read Chapter 26, Fairy Village Love Story. Why do you always like to write about shit and piss?

I can't figure it out. If you write well, your grades will be unsatisfactory. If you write a newbie's cool essay, your grades will be good. I really can't help it when I comment for the first time. If you keep at it, it will definitely become popular.

The eunuch won't allow new books to be distributed! Real-name authentication! Please start like this!

Rubbish, directed at Gui, the result is a master who is extremely proficient in the Immortal Cultivation Stream. In the early stage, he was even flying on the grass. zz selling dog meat with a sheep head hanging on it

This book opens low and moves high, and the writing at the end is more exciting.

If the author doesn't update soon, and when Gou Zai Shengui World starts updating, your monthly ticket will be less

Drive low and go high, many novels about Gou Dao become worse and worse as they are written, even eunuchs. I hope I can finish this one smoothly 🙂

There are many authors who have written books on Gou Dao, and there are several good ones. The writing is good, although there are some flaws, but overall the quality is relatively stable, and there is no big gap between the content before and after. I personally feel that Gou Dao books have a problem in the middle and late stages. After hundreds of chapters, the routines are almost worn out. Just for a moment, someone else will cause trouble, and this routine will be repeated over and over again. The quality of the novel has not changed, but I am getting tired of reading too many routines.

1. The author is a newcomer and has no old readers. 2. If you don't recommend it, others won't be able to see the book you wrote. 3. The number of chapters is too few and it makes it unsatisfactory. However, the author should not be discouraged. It is good to sign the contract before the 100th chapter. Come on! In addition, you can go to Zhengui to attract some fans and advertise in novels of the same type.

I really like the author's style. Compared with other people, if you keep at it, you will definitely have a place in online literature.