Life in the Planes of the Heavens

If Yitian is too vicious according to what you wrote in your profile, he has everything you need to send girls and recruit foreign disciples. And the order. The storm is ahead, so there is no need to force Yi Tian's martial arts skills. Zhang Sanfeng, who has 40-meter sword skills, also wants to be called daddy.

Introduction: The strength persuades you to quit. You really arranged all the top ten poisons. This is the first time I have seen such a poisonous author. It's amazing👍👍👍

Introduction: The cake in this painting is big enough! At first glance, there are only dozens of chapters, and it's really full of gimmicks. It's obvious that this is a green-skinned walnut

🙂 Dear cuties, please tell me that I am not in single player

The story has no center, it jumps around randomly, it's too messy and disorderly.

Stand-alone, you can dig more graves, just think about it carefully.

Whether the author is writing a novel or an essay, I can't tell which is the narration and which is the dialogue.

The description of Yitian in the introduction is the longest and the most poisonous. It is written in poisonous points everywhere. It is very skillful to be so accurate. I really admire it!

I was beaten to death after seeing a few pictures of the real world.

The heavens are happy to see it, but who thinks that the first 16 chapters of your article are nonsense, and what is the purpose of writing that poor little girl?

I feel like Xiao Ya is mentally ill How often does she still deal with things that are not there? She is really looking for trouble and causing trouble for others.

I feel like there is too much nonsense in each chapter. I can clearly explain it very simply, but I have to write a long paragraph.

You might as well not write an introduction. None of the old and new introductions are normal 1: The Republic of China, Hong Kong Island, fantasy, martial arts, and technology in the future. You're a hodgepodge, it's better to go all the way to the dark side. If you want to pursue martial arts, just keep martial arts 2: If you don't want to go to Fengyun, go to Yitian. It's fun to lower your dimensions and attack others to show your sage. (Of course you are stupid and pretend I didn't say it) 3. Why do you always miss your b Minmin? Now I don't want to do that. In the Yitian period, Minmin was a foreigner and had to conform to the values ​​​​of that time (otherwise you want to be a traitor?) 4. Newbie authors don't know how to write emotional dramas, so don't write them. I'm embarrassed to see your introduction; if you want to write about women, just go for it.

Readers, feel free to scold the author in the comment area. Thank you, cuties. If you scold me well, if you scold me brilliantly, if you scold me loudly, if you scold me brilliantly, I will pin it to the top of your list 🙂🙂

Poisonous setting: giving away a daughter, accepting foreigners as disciples and then poisoning the native souls, evil sect protagonist

Author, I advise you to change Yitian's introduction. It's really your strength that persuades you to quit.

Life is already very depressing. It seems like writing about such a depressing world, why not just copy the nuclear bomb? It will not feel any better.

Completely let yourself go, without any logic, just add cheats and take a look if you like.

The author has written it first. I think the writing is good. Just don't cut it again. After all, even books written by great writers have their ups and downs.