
Battle Through the Heavens: Taking Yun Yun as My Maid from the Start
斗破:开局收云韵为女仆
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 664k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- ACG Fanfiction
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- Qidian
Synopsis
320Chapters
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124Recs
20Fans
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I really don't understand these people. Why do they always write stuff about Pirate Naruto on Dou Po Douluo? It's disgusting to look at it.
Why do I always write about my childhood in domestic novels? Either Naruto or a pirate, either a Shinigami or a Demon Slayer. 😨🤮🤮🤮
Naruto is fighting for nothing.
What kind of garbage is Naruto? The combat power is so low that some authors just like to bully it up. Tailed beasts are useless. A real strong man will crush you to death with just one hand.
The poison attribute fighting skills of the Little Medical Immortal "Seven Colors Poison Sutra" is a poison sutra that records how to prepare poisons. It briefly introduces the poisonous body of the disaster "Tianyou Poison Canon" records various strange poisons created in Tianyou Poison Sanctuary, some of which are so poisonous that even if Dou Zun is exposed to them, it will be quite miserable Fighting Skills "Thousand Fantasy Poison Spring" Countless viscous gray rays of highly poisonous light pour out of the body and shoot towards it. Enemy "Sky Poison Prison World" distorts the surrounding ten feet of space to form an invisible cage. The Little Medical Fairy releases poisonous gas to pollute the energy of the world in this sealed space, making the enemy dare not absorb external energy at will "Poison Eclipse Demon Hand" The poisonous fighting gas turns into a huge gray-purple hand "Sky Eclipse Rain" The poisonous fighting gas condenses into a gray cloud, and drops countless dark gray poisons The raindrops quietly dissipate when they fall to a certain distance, turning into a wisp of poisonous gas, rising slowly, getting into the gray clouds, and then turning into raindrops and pouring down again, and then repeating this cycle endlessly "Tianyin Poisonous Hands" The poisonous fighting spirit condensed into two huge fighting spirit giant hands "Ernan Poison Strength" The poisonous fighting spirit condensed into a poison pill, and a venom was swept out from the poison pill Izumo Empire Netherworld Sect Netherworld Town Netherworld Swamp Poison Fire Method Netherworld Poison Fire Xuan-level advanced skills "Tian Yan Poison Sutra" Xuan-level intermediate fighting skills "Phantom Spirit Mist" Mysterious level intermediate fighting skill "Poisonous Dragon Claw" Mystic level intermediate fighting skill "Poisonous Sand Palm" Xuan level advanced body fighting skill "Shadow Body" Earth level low level fighting skill "Tianyou Poison Palm"
The distance between the Black Corner Territory and Zhongzhou would take at least half a year for even a strong Douzong expert to cross. However, if it were to go through the space wormhole, it would only take a month. However, the construction of the space wormhole is quite difficult, and it must be repaired frequently, and the strength of the maintenance personnel must be at least around Douzong. Therefore, except for places like Zhongzhou, there are few other areas. It will happen..." Tianya City is located in a mountain range called Tianqing thousands of miles away from the Black Horn Territory. As the only city within a thousand miles with a space wormhole leading to Zhongzhou, Tianya City's prosperity within this thousand miles is second to none. At the speed of the gryphon beast, it will take at least nearly half a month to reach Tianya City from the Black Horn Territory in the Tianqing Mountains.
There are three things I am unhappy with about this book: Firstly, there is no need to create a Tianyuan Pavilion, just base it on the Yunlan Sect. Why do you have to recruit some rubbish and rubbish to recruit so many juniors to use as hammers? Just use Yun Yun as the sect leader and some other female protagonists, plus those tailed beasts, and at most add Hai Bodong. Secondly, just write Furukawa to death and be done with it. There is no need to give him a role. The third thing is that Qing Lin and Medusa have too few scenes, just like supporting roles, without any sense of existence.
If the protagonist of a problem can see it, the character in the body can also see it. Doesn't that mean the Minotaur has killed him?
The style doesn't suit me, I prefer cool writing
If it were any other person, it wouldn't be so poisonous in the protagonist's body. Why does it have to be the one in Naruto?