Muscle Martial Saint: I Will Become Stronger If I Strike First

The child bride she writes about is so good-looking and virtuous, but she is okay in this troubled world. It is inconsistent and illogical.

It's a rubbish book, it's been written for so long and it hasn't killed Fatty yet, it's written about a ghost, it's not passionate at all.

Just strike first, no one knows who the enemy is.

After reading Chapter 50 or so, I was really confused. Why are you so interested in a group of unrelated women? Are those women your mother or something like that?

The plug-in doesn't work, the pig's feet are too expensive, and I can't read Chapter 10

The Bu family has so many martial arts skills, but they still go out to learn martial arts.

After reading 9 chapters, there is no climax, no turning point, the story is bland, and the system is awkward. It is recommended that this kind of work with added attributes should not be overrated. Since there is a system, you might as well make it stronger. Even if you change a few more pictures in the middle and later stages, you also need to highlight the personality of the protagonist. Are you reading novels? It's not just about the system. The personality of the protagonist is very important. Because the core of this kind of work highlights the word "cool", it does not require you to have too many transformations from ordinary people to later, or you have not written this transformation or the writing is not good-looking. The best attribute text is "Jidao Tianmo" (in my opinion). The author can study it and maybe broaden his thinking. If possible, it is best to make the protagonist and the system complement each other.

It's too little. I didn't read it until at least 200 chapters in. The introduction list looks pretty good.

Too little. Will you watch it after at least fifty chapters? What you update every day is too ordinary. In the early stage, at least five chapters will be updated a day. I will officially update it after chapter 50, but it will be too little. Check back in a month

The creativity is good and the writing is acceptable. The biggest flaw is that Kung Fu is Kung Fu and Dharma is Dharma. If you add points to practice boxing, you can increase your level, but you will not be able to increase it if you practice other points. You still need to have special exercises and martial arts to separate them. One increases the level and the other increases proficiency.

There are too many holes in the details. If I continue writing like this, it will definitely collapse later.

Just this, so short, 😏

Start building the wall first, then plant the rice seedlings.

I've been a bookworm for ten years and I think I can write pretty well.

Why is this character so awkward... So incompatible with the environment?

The book is quite good, but it spends a lot of space on the practice. The practice is very detailed and is not interesting at all. The protagonist is a scumbag who practices some Kung Fu. When he encounters a strong enemy, he explodes: "If God had not given birth to me, I will be like a blue cloud. I will hang on forever like a long night. Hang up!"