I Was Forced to Go Out for Leisure

It's similar to the Empress. Once I see it, I have no desire to continue watching it.

The writing is still good, but the logic is a bit unsound. It is wrong for the Queen Mother to reuse the method of inviting people by one person. When he sees someone, he lets himself go back.

Today I went to a neighbor's house for a college entrance banquet. I saw my second grandma sitting at the door, seemingly out of touch with her surroundings, sitting blankly by herself. While I was eating, I was thinking about what the old lady would be thinking about now. This is still unknown to everyone in rural areas. At that time, I was thinking about what I would be like when I got older. Is this the same? Or even more lonely. I want to intersperse some things into the subsequent plot, starting from the novel, not just the novel. Although this book is a historical fiction, I hope that I can also possess the weight of the years. I also want to hear everyone's understanding. Please leave more messages. It starts with comments and ends with thoughts.

The writing style needs to be improved. It is a bit difficult to read. The plot is not a big problem. It is a bit fluent but I want to write well. The lack of writing skills makes it a bit nondescript. I suggest you keep writing and improve and see if there are any changes in the future.

Wrong Too many words

It feels like the logic is wrong. Whether it's for reuse or trial use, people are not hired that way. Moreover, it feels inexplicably that the protagonist just likes to feel aggrieved.

After reading more than ten chapters, I was confused and couldn't appreciate it.

The story is good, but the writing is a bit poor.

What if the author lets the protagonist experience European colonialism, American capitalism, India's caste system, and communism in his own country?

It's a very good book. I'd like to ask the author to check it several times after I finish it. There are only typos, and some sentences have to be guessed. I don't want to read it.

What period do you want Fuso to be in? Or do you want to do whatever you want? Why do you want to write the protagonist as the captain of the transportation team, Niang Xipi?