Konoha Blind Monk: I Use Flat a to Penetrate the Ninja World

God, isn't the name Hinata Lee Sin embarrassing?

This novel is attractive, but it may not retain people. 1. There are too many skill effects, character skills, and equipment skills. It is difficult to remember so many skill effects. After reading more than 20 chapters, more than 10 character skills appeared, plus equipment skills, which made me confused. 2. There is a feeling of forcibly promoting the plot. The details of the plot are not very good. Even if we all know the plot, some details will definitely be forgotten. The author must explain it clearly. Don't think that we have all seen it and know it. For fear of being criticized for the word count, the author must be good at the word count in this aspect. 3. The logic is very far-fetched. When you answered Nizu's question earlier, your forced explanation was very far-fetched. You forced Nizu not to ask how the protagonist knew these contents. Also, you just developed the clone skill before and then Hizashi's death. Hey, is it really such a coincidence?

When fighting, it's like typing on the keyboard. I've never played League and I can't get it. Good luck.

The subject matter is very attractive, and the writing is interesting, but because I am a newcomer, there are many areas for improvement. I have read Chapter 14, and I really can't stand it anymore. Let me give you a few comments. The writing system is too complicated. We all know that the system writing is best to limit the number of words, but you have too much knowledge. It should be concise and clear. In these fourteen chapters alone, the golden finger part is worth at least three or four chapters. Also, a newcomer's favorite mistake is not to flatter yourself, not to flatter yourself, not to flatter yourself, that is, don't write down your own thoughts when writing a book, and write less about your own psychological description. If you write it, it will only be a small number of words. There is no need to write it. You are a newcomer, and the first few dozen chapters of the new book are very important to you. It is important to leave a group of book friends. Don't add or reduce settings at will. You have cheats at the beginning, and then you keep adding them. Now you add a lottery, and now you add other things. It's not necessary. If there are too many things, it will easily collapse. Moreover, there is no money exchange for gold coins and reputation for completing tasks. It's too complicated. When making an outline, you need to decide on the core things, such as the setting, the protagonist's most important cheat (that is, the core skill), and then all subsequent chapters will revolve around the core services. Don't write a lot of things at once, which will end up being unused in dozens of chapters. It's like an old woman's foot wrap. It's smelly and long. If you write like this, I know it without thinking about it. I'm not sure of the core. The more you write, the more skills you'll write, the more complicated it will be, and the harder it will be to read. Moreover, the fighting scenes are too rough. Naruto's fights are best written. You can find the original scenes of fights in comics and anime, add some adjectives, and it will be your own.

His surname is Xiang and his given name is Li Qing. Day is a verb

Terrorists want world peace too much.

Is it a story setting or a game setting? If it's a game setting, I won't read it.

Bug-level novel

Ask why the blind monk was blinded→_→

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We agreed to let Nagato experience the thoughts of a socialist successor.

After reading most of it, I feel that the author is still too limited. The blind monk is not that strong. What is strong is the equipment on his body. The second stage of the Tianyin Wave is too weak and should be strengthened. For example, it should be kept several times of the movement speed, otherwise it will be a target if it is figured out. As for the golden bell cover, I suggest using a mobile game. Yes, R is just like that. An ordinary taijutsu ninja can be kicked away by a kick. The person hit may be knocked away due to the strength of the hit, so it is meaningless. It is better to write about corruption potion for ramen. If it only involves the lol game and not the background, the dog head will be 20,000. The q level may also suffer. After all, you may not be able to hit the q. The attack speed of 2.5 Is far from enough. Namikaze Minato can kill an enemy in one frame and return to the original position. For a ninja who is good at ordinary attack speed, ten swords per second is not too much. The cat jinchuriki is feasible. , Generally speaking, in terms of the equipment increase in the game, it is not necessarily better than the local wall-mounted ones. They always say that LoL is too strong. They only talk about the game and not the settings. Just the settings in the game. It is not necessarily better than the youth brother next door. As for Namikaze Minato killing DDC? Q In the past w Rasengan ae point kunai was killed in one second, but the chopped Minato was too stretched. As for the fully developed Naruto qere, the flesh was lost in seconds Since we only use the data in the game, we should strengthen it well. Although Naruto is not strong, he is not that weak either.

Although the author is really upright, but really, after reading a few chapters, I don't like this style very much. Come on, author, let me go.

Without the Grasp of Immortality, Li Qing's skills like Soul Harvest wouldn't be much stronger, no matter how strong he was. With the above talents, humans and ghosts can be very strong.

Question, what will happen to Li Sin when he is hit by Teemo's Q skill?