Swallow the Starry Sky to Upgrade and Get a Prize

Can you update 40,000 to 50,000 words a day? It's too slow

The book is quite interesting, but it is too slow.

A little watery but still visible

Can it be faster? Updates are too slow

That's awesome. Before, Genius Zhan said you were wretched and you said you weren't safe under the watchful eye of the Chaos City Lord. I accepted it. Now that we're already at home, you still cowardly act like this. Your portrayal of the protagonist is really rubbish. Let me say it one last time, I'm a coward! It grosses me out.

Why does the protagonist do all sorts of tricks and end up inferior to Luo Feng in every aspect? Why should I read this book if it is not as good as the original protagonist? Might as well read the original work. The divine body is not a hundred thousand times larger, and the small universe is not a billion light-years old. It starts at the first level compared to Luo Feng. Luo Feng was ahead of Luo Feng in various ways in the early stage, but was overtaken in the end?

I started to deliberately make friends with Luo Feng. I hope I won't lick Luo Feng like other fans. I know the plot and have a golden finger. If I think I can't surpass Luo Feng, why would I deliberately make friends with Luo Feng? Why would I want to become a strong person or travel to the past?

So far it seems okay. People are born lonely. Everyone has their own way to go. In the devouring world, such a huge world, make your own way in life! About the relationship with the protagonist: You can be inferior to the original owner, but don't lick, you will have nothing left until the end. Licking again, are Luo Feng's parents, wife and children as close as they are? Didn't you see that Hong also made his own way through his own efforts? What I want to see is the journey of a wandering soul in this wonderful world; About chance: Greed is the original sin, don't be blinded by desire, a real man should do something and not do something. Don't grab every opportunity. In such a big world, traveling through time and bringing your own cheats are the biggest opportunities. About slaves: When you step out of the earth, what you see is the harsh law of the jungle. Slaves are sold by the pound. You are worried about the future of the people on earth. But you buy and sell slaves with peace of mind, even human slaves. I don't know what others think, but I can't accept this kind of schizophrenia. To defend the earth, if you know the plot, there are many ways you can think of. Why are humans so embarrassed? This is also where I disagree with the original Devouring. Regarding the issue of humans on earth: Don't do everything, just provide some help. Humans on earth will eventually have to face the outside world on their own. The above are some of my opinions, shared with authors and book friends.

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The most frustrating chapter is here, Chapter 508. The protagonist has just broken through to the true god. The author directly arranged for the mastermind behind the system to appear and directly canceled the golden finger! He is Lord Hunyuan at the same level as Yuan, and he said that he would repay him when the protagonist becomes stronger in the future. . . I'm really going to die laughing. If I'm not at the level of Hunyuan Life, why would Lord Hunyuan remember to repay him? Moreover, the True God has just opened up the small universe, and is probably equivalent to the True Immortal in Perfection. As a Hunyuan Lord, Wuyin is equivalent to the Lujin-level Immortal Emperor. Look at what the author wrote. The Immortal Emperor said to a True Immortal: "I risk being killed by another Immortal Emperor." The risk of knocking on the door went out of his way to find you in his original world. Although I just leaked a little bit of rain between my fingers to give it to you, when you become stronger in the future, you must repay the favor you owe me. If you don't repay it, see how I deal with you!" . . The author is really talented to write something like this! Simply rely on the defense!

Very cool. It's just that the emotional line is so embarrassing. The protagonist is an unparalleled genius who stands at the top of the trillions of universes and has been practicing for thousands of years. The result is that such a fierce man can actually blush after saying a few words to a beautiful woman?

Before I leave, I would like to give a warning to future generations. This novel will make you want to vomit. It is very frustrating and abusing the readers. The protagonist is very weak and has a bad personality. There is no bright spot. He keeps pretending to be a pig from the beginning to the end. I feel that there is no need to pretend, because he is really worse than a pig.

Too poisonous, slip away. . . Genius Zhan, if you still understand that the main city of Chaos is the base camp of mankind, you might as well find an uninhabited planet and bury yourself directly.

Alas, the biggest flaw of this book is that it is low-key and afraid of death. It is understandable that geniuses do not show their fear of death. But when it comes to Chaos City, they are still afraid of death and choose to keep a low profile. I really don't want to say anything else.

After seeing the battle between geniuses, I can't stand it anymore. I've really become a 🐷. I'm not a coward at all. Why would you leave the earth if you're so cowardly? If it's not the end of the world if you stay on the earth, why go out and show your talents? It's just to practice faster and slower.

Seeing Chapter 7, this system requires external certification and professional title evaluation to issue rewards. This means that even if you become the overlord of the universe, no organization will certify you. If you don't have a certificate, you will be nothing in the system!

This kind of Taoist style is not suitable for use in Swallowed Starry Sky. The better the Swallowed Starry Sky is, the more resources it gets. The author's spirit of practicing Taoism is uncomfortable and illogical in terms of the concepts in Swallowed Starry Sky.

Let's put it this way, there are a lot of frustrating plots, if you think real life is too good xd you can watch it 🙂

Is it because my IQ is not enough or is it because I am trying to create conflicts? Is everyone a fool? The Lord of Chaos City accepted a fw as his personal successor? Hundreds of years of old-fashioned writing routines are used here. It's so poisonous.

Well, the main character is a coward and the writing is terrible, just my personal opinion. It makes me angry to see

Development in a low-key manner in Devouring World. . . There is no way to develop at all. The human race only focuses on cultivating geniuses. The more talented people are, the more resources they have and the more attention they pay. Being low-key is useless.

Just pretending in front of you is fine. Are you still pretending to be stupid and deceiving yourself and others even in Chaos City?

It's really poisonous, the first few pictures are a bunch of mentally retarded plots, the main character is pure and innocent

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Let's talk about it first, I watched it on QQ, where membership is cheaper After watching part of it, let's complain about it, 1. First of all, there is not much difference between genes and intelligence. As soon as it starts to change by 10 times, you will immediately learn the rules? ? ? 2. Then, I changed the rare item to the peak soul treasure, which felt a bit like a loss. I shouldn't have added more. 3. It seems a bit outrageous that the supreme rule appears when genes are 90,000 times higher, although the original Luo Feng's 89,999 jumps directly to 100,000. 4. The highest level in the original universe was level 6. When fighting the Demon God, why did it suddenly change to level 7? ? ? ? No matter how hard you burn the divine body, it is only level 6, and the rules cannot be broken by you, the strongest person in the universe 5. It seems wrong for Karu to jump to the top universe overlord in one go. Generally speaking, the universe master can reach 100 times the gene, even if he adds blood Luo crystal, it is a thousand times. It should not be able to reach the top cosmic overlord. The top cosmic overlord can kill the cosmic overlord without the treasure armor with a few moves. Therefore, Karu's breakthrough should be at least thousands of times more powerful than the top cosmic overlord 6. System background, without reason, a Hunyuan lord and a true god? ? ? Would you talk to the true God like this? ? ? ? This is on the same level as Lord Snow Eagle's domination realm. Have you seen that lord say this to the dominator? ? ? ? 7. The treasure was given to Luo Feng casually, and Luo Feng didn't say anything. According to Luo Feng's character, he would want to compensate for it. 8. The spiritual teacher of Luo Feng in the original work didn't even tell his parents, so why do you think he would tell you? 9. Wu Wu Yuyi is the eternal level, not the chaos level 10. The fighting is a bit outrageous. The immortal Lord of the universe is not made of flesh and blood, but he can still be beaten and swollen? ? 11. The original universe suppresses the divine body, and the genes only have perfect level of combat power. If you exceed it without adding much combat power, you will be suppressed 90,000 times. It is impossible to reach the strongest all at once. In the later stage, you rely on secret methods and treasures, and the divine body is of little use 12. Tongtian Bridge is also written randomly, as if the title of a prince requires 15 levels, and you have 13 levels.

Like the title, it's just a piece of shit. Whether it's the setting, the plot, or the characterization of the protagonist, it's all shit.

Author, if you write Devouring Fans again, can you please stop writing in such a weak and painful way, like being forced to expose yourself involuntarily by Chaos Lao Deng in Chaos City, and making people laugh at you? You can write Gou, but you can't suffer a loss. Gou Dao will never do anything he is not sure about. It feels very frustrating to read.

What does it mean that this person who keeps pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger is feeling aggrieved? Just know Gou, you have traveled through time, you have a system, you are invincible on earth, you can do it, you can do it even if you are the most talented fighter, you have already gone to Chaos City, why don't you do it.

Poisoned to death. The first level was actually okay, until here the author said that the difference between the first level and the ninth level of the world master was about 10 times, which finally poisoned me to death. Previously, the protagonist had 110 times the genes and reached the fifth level of the universe. He only used 50 resources to reach the peak of the ninth level of the universe. I thought the author was not very good at arithmetic. It turned out that the author had made all the basic settings wrong. For me, the most poisonous thing about fandom is that they do not abide by the original settings. It is really intolerable.

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