Devour: Emperor Yan

It's a beautiful idea. The blood of the Yan God clan joins the five core forces of the cosmic human race. You appear to save the world and are made into blood potions. Why do you think Emperor Yan puts his people in the secret realm of the universe? Isn't it because the Yan God clan is the best body-wrestling body? Why does Emperor Yan want to betray the human race of the universe? It's because in the eyes of the human race of the universe, Emperor Yan should voluntarily contribute his own people to provide the talented geniuses with the soul of the universe with blood bodies.

When I read the title of the book, I thought it was about Xiao Yan traveling through the Devouring Starry Sky, but I didn't expect that it was obviously not the earth-based opening that I was tired of seeing, but in the end, I ended up looking for him to be a nanny. It was boring.

No, buddy, what do you think? Do you have to write the mercenary assessment so carefully? At the beginning of a new era, don't wait until later when there are no recommended resources and complain that no one is watching. In the early stages of Swallowing Starry Sky, you either had to write about the Earth, or you were rapidly developing into a genius battle, but you found another way to work as a nanny for Luo Feng and write the mercenary assessment, and you still wrote so much.

I haven't seen you for more than half a year. I miss you all very much. I also warmly welcome new friends. It's a pleasure to meet you. After taking a break for more than half a year this time, it is inevitable that I feel a little rusty when writing, and I don't have a good grasp of the rhythm. I have been working hard to find the feeling and state recently. I will read everyone's opinions and work hard to correct them. Thank you brothers for your support! 🙂

1. Golden-horned behemoths are already the pinnacle of their bloodline. If the Yan God Clan really brings its own Secret Book of Nine Tribulations, its genes can evolve, its body shape can evolve, and its fertility is higher than that of the golden-horned behemoths. I am afraid that even a hundred Yan Emperors cannot save it. Not to mention hiding in the secret realm of the universe, even if you are hiding in the Kingdom of God, there are plenty of ways to find it out. 2. If this is really the case, will the high-level human beings foolishly let the Yan God Clan leave? Wouldn't it be nice to catch a bunch of them and keep them as pets, and then let your own genius take over their homes? 3. Everyone has ignored the abilities of the leaders of the Yan God Clan and the leaders of the Earthlings. They are the ones who can truly possess the ability to genetically evolve. The others are considered ordinary people. At most they have advantages in some aspects, but they are definitely no better than those born with 10 times the life genes of the Golden Horned Behemoth. 4. There are also soldier armors, general armors, king armors, emperor armors, and robbery armors. They are destined not to be worn by ordinary Yan Shen clan members just by grabbing one. For the same reason, the top human beings are not stupid. If they could get it so easily, wouldn't they be able to catch or forcibly detain a group of Yanshen tribe members? I think this is relatively normal logic. 5. The secret realm of the universe, haha, this needs to be mentioned even more. Like the Earth, Hu Yanbo can use the secret method of space to cover up the coordinates of the dark universe. Even if you fly there normally without passing through the dark universe, you should be affected by the secret method of space. Is there a secret realm in the universe where the Lord of the Universe sits? Not to mention the protection of space secrets, even teleportation cannot be done. For tasks like Luo Feng and others, they need special spaceships to transport them. This does not save you money, but you do not have the corresponding coordinate map of the dark universe. Just like Babata can enter the earth from the outside, he must have a professional counterpart to travel through space. 6. Emperor Yan sensed it in advance before Luo Feng entered the secret realm of the universe. Even if he was not here, leaving an incarnation of divine power to coordinate with the layout of his lair, he couldn't even see his own genius? And there are only so many people in the Yan Shen tribe, and three continents are enough to live in them... That's all I can think of for the time being. It's just a partial discussion of the original work. I hope the author won't ban me.

I found that this author is a stubborn person. If others point out his mistakes, he will not correct them. Some logical relationships are confusing.

The water is endless. Thirty of the forty chapters are Devouring. The original text was revised and then posted. The world within a world is even more speechless. The original text is copied and pasted.

The author is so good, he really just followed the original work.

The first few chapters are pretty good, but what the heck is the original story behind?

I have basically read all the Devouring fanfics I can find, but now fewer and fewer people write them. Although these are very weak at the moment, there are still some unreasonable aspects, such as the percentage. It is best to change it to a level: imitating a cat and a tiger, understanding the root cause, and comprehending the secret/all the laws, but it is barely reasonable. After all, I can understand it just at the beginning. But if the author wants to create something of his own, of course, don't always think about overpowering others. Just be strong enough. There is a lot of things for a stranger. If you really want to, it is easy to improve your talent. But the author has now made the protagonist too strong. If you are named Emperor Yan, it is normal for you to have strong fire attributes. I even think that the current performance of fire is not strong enough, because the law is mainly about understanding. Now that the fire attribute body is available, the talent should be more prominent, and it is best to use fire to overwhelm other people's space. Instead, the space is wrong, a bit too strong, and it's also annoying to explain. Of course, there are universal talents such as time travel and time and space attributes. The most important thing is that the protagonist must have his own path. This world is actually far more than one that can be transcended. Yuan relies on superhuman understanding to understand half of the rules of the world. It is simple to say but not something that humans can do. Although Luo Feng didn't say it, he most likely has a powerful body. From the strength of the future clone, it can be seen that the frontal combat power is very powerful. Snow Eagle relies on the soul, or the heart. So what does our protagonist Yan Emperor rely on? As for fire, it can ignite everything. The protagonist's fire is very strong, so strong that it far exceeds space and time. In the later stage, it will even ignite space, time or everything else. The law will probably be integrated here, and strange fires can even be created as moves, such as wood, fire, earth, green lotus, earth core fire, and time fire, pure lotus demon fire. If you want to surpass the protagonist in the later stage, you must understand the source of fire. At this time, you can find Lao Deng explosive equipment. It doesn't mean that it must be 100,000 times the gene, but the protagonist's fire must be as strong as someone with 90,000 times the gene, or even 100,000 times the gene.

Just a single member of the Yan God Clan, and without the secret method of cloning, would be overtaken by Luo Feng, or even unable to keep up, and Luo Feng's talent would become stronger as he went to the back 🤭

To be honest, it's so boring. Everything was fine, but why did you follow them to that place to experience it? It's no different than being a nanny

Is it necessary to write such detailed descriptions of a world within a world?

I thought it was about the rise of the Yan God Clan against the heavens, but judging from the title, it's still a mixed human being. This doesn't make sense logically, so I won't read it.

This is the type I want to watch. The characteristic of Swallowing Starry Sky is that it can seize bodies, and has rich and colorful special lives. It can change fate against the will of heaven. If it is not dead, it will not be able to seize the world tree. The Sea of ​​Nine Nethers has top secret techniques. The Sheyan Divine Clan is definitely the top one. The products produced by God King are not bad, but few people have written about them.

The main character seems to be part of the group, and basically nothing has changed. It feels like he has watched the Swallowing Starry Sky, but has not really watched it, so he doesn't dare to change.

1. For grain and grass, you can expect high-quality products. Slightly imperfect, but basically non-toxic. Currently, it doesn't seem like a fast-paced plot type of fanfic. People who are used to rapid development may find it a bit watery, but I personally think it's fine, but I found it was a bit short too early. The author writes well and doesn't collapse later. 2. Not a nanny. Some people think that getting along with three people on the earth is like a nanny, but I personally think that if I go back to the past and start a business with Huateng Qiangdong and millions of dollars in wealth, I spent 10,000 yuan on them, am I a nanny? I'm not a nanny, right? 3. The protagonist is very talented. The protagonist's initial talent is very good, maybe even better than Hong's. The protagonist's eighth-level bloodline is one level higher than Hong, and is about equal to nothing. The soul of Hong Earth, comprehended the realm at the age of several decades, and reached the sixth level of the planet when he was about eighty years old; the soul of the protagonist's time traveler was reincarnated, broke through the star level at the age of 180, and comprehended the realm, and reached the sixth level of the star at the age of more than 300 years. Without the influence of other external forces, it is difficult to say who is higher and who is lower. In terms of resources, Hong has few resources on the earth, but all the resources on the earth are given priority by him. Before Luo Feng, they should be approximately equivalent to star-level resources. The protagonist was born as a civilian and had to make money washing dishes in a restaurant. He earned all the resources by himself, but he had access to the virtual universe. Everyone has their own opinions on who is higher and who is lower. After the protagonist seizes the body, his talent has been greatly improved. To be honest, judging from the current situation, maybe because he has no inheritance, his combat power is not as good as Bolan's, but he is firmly in the top five (hundreds of phantom bodies). So, the protagonist's talent is actually very good, but there is currently no inheritance and teaching, and he lacks knowledge. I hope he will not collapse in the future and can maintain the mentality of a good genius. 4. About the state of mind. Personally, I think that the state of mind cannot be achieved by deciding which direction to practice. At most, you have a direction to work towards, but you may not be able to achieve it. For example, Thor has never been able to reach the third realm. Everyone's temperament, talent, and experience are different. The vast majority of people in the universe cannot even reach these three states of mind. Even if the earth has a bonus, it is just more likely. The vast majority are ordinary people who do nothing. I can only say, firm your faith and let nature take its course. 5. A small flaw. Information about the Yan Divine Clan should not be circulated among the lowest levels of humanity. For details, please refer to when Luo Feng learned about the Yan Divine Clan. The protagonist's sudden decision to go to the mysterious realm of Yan to kidnap people and their bodies is indeed a bit unexpected in the original universe, but of course it is a normal idea in our eyes. Maybe you can set up a small opportunity to get some starting capital and information about the Yan God Clan, or if you don't want to bother, mention the information obtained from the few universe-level people who picked up the corpses. Of course, I personally think that a little chance looks better, and you can also lay a foreshadowing. For example, if you need any talents or special resources later, you can have a place to come from. The fist fight between twelve meters and two meters and one meter eight is indeed a bit abrupt, but it is not a big problem and can be regarded as a little humor. 6. Seize the Sheyan Divine Clan. Personally, there is no problem in human territory. The original work does not mention the example of the Duo Sheyan Protoss, but it may not exist. The original universe is a dark forest. The reason why such a character did not appear may be that he was not outstanding enough, it may be that he was found and killed by the Yan God Clan after taking his body, it may also be to give face to the mountain guest, or he was born in the secret realm of the universe and his talent was reduced. It is all possible, and it is not a problem. Will the human race Duosheyan Divine Race be unable to survive in the human territory? This has nothing to do with what body is seized, it only depends on strength and background. The original work clearly stated that the human race does not look at the body, but the soul, and seizing the body is universal. After seizing the body, the essence of the soul is still a human being. This can be seen from the fact that Luo Feng has always been a human being on earth in the virtual universe. The above is purely personal opinion and is for reference only by book lovers.

It's too watery, a lot of things can be covered in one go

If you weren't a level 4 account, you wouldn't be able to get listed on the shelves. Now there is a threshold for listing in the fandom area, and it's higher than the original version.

Most of them were copied and the cost of burying them was not high.

I would like to take this opportunity to recommend my Devouring article, "Swallowing the Starry Sky, Starting from the Weakest Special Life", the beginning of Prison Clan. I hope you can collect and read more. I am grateful.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

It's a good start and the idea is good. It's a pity that the subsequent plot is too ordinary, it keeps following the original work, and it's also very watery. Change these two points and go straight to the top of the Devouring Fans list.

I want to raise books 🙂

Let's talk about Emperor Yan. To be honest, the original book said that he betrayed the human race for a treasure. I'm afraid there are very few people who believe the truth. It's not Emperor Yan who is stronger, but the race of the Gods Yan. Emperor Yan appears as the Lord of the Universe with 10,000 times the life gene. He has a robbery armor and Bing Xin that are comparable to the most powerful treasures, a top treasure palace, and top treasure weapons. However, it is completely unimaginable for him to be a third-level Master of the Universe. It means that Emperor Yan is a blank slate. Many Lords have the power of first or second level Lords of the Universe. How can we say that Emperor Yan is lucky to be the first Lord of the Universe of the Yan God Clan and a disciple of the Mountain Guest, otherwise he is nothing. However, I am afraid that no one will believe him when he betrays the human race for a treasure. In the original human race, the one who seems to be the most just is actually the Lord of Chaos City. The bad thing is the Virtual Universe Company. The human race actually relies on giant axes to maintain the treasure house. 90% Of it is contributed by giant axes. With the methods of the Virtual Universe Company, if the Lord of Chaos City was not Luo Feng's teacher, he would have been destroyed by Luo Feng. The original Ancestral God Sect even asked the original universe to check Luo Feng's status and felt that Luo Feng had been taken away. Later, Luo Feng was also told to be careful of the original ancestors. This was a warning from an alien race. I felt that it was misleading Luo Feng. He didn't have to believe it. However, when Hong Chuang reincarnated, he also warned Luo Feng to be careful of the original ancestors. The giant ax died and Hong didn't show up. Even Hong never interacted with the Virtual Universe Company. You will find that the giant ax family does not trust the virtual universe company very much.