
Naruto: Fusing with the Tomie Template from the Start
木叶:开局融合富江模板
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- Completed
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- 745k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
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- ACG Fanfiction
- Updated
- 3y ago
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Honestly, seeing such incredible power, the protagonist actually resorts to stealth, creating hundreds of clones to continuously bleed themselves out of the sea. One clone becomes two, two becomes four, four becomes eight—no, they don't even need to go to the sea, they just stay in place, endlessly cutting off their own clones.
Even with a cheat code, you still need to suppress it? What kind of wish-fulfillment story are you writing? Giving blood for others to drink, then running into the sea and constantly bleeding yourself out—what kind of story is that? Tomie is afraid of death? This is the first time I've seen something like this. Tomie, who perfectly controls all her clones, is afraid of death? 666
Here's a joke: Tomie, after awakening the Mangekyou Sharingan, would lack chakra. Haha, awakening the Mangekyou Sharingan greatly upgrades mental energy, so would Tomie's body be afraid of being drained of its energy? It would be ridiculous to say she doesn't have any chakra.
The utilization rate of Tomie's ability is too low. She has already died once. When she is in the coffin, you can just stab yourself a couple more times to let her sense it, or even give a piece or two of her flesh to Snake. It's always better to be in the dark than in the light. There's also a cheat code in Naruto called the Sage of Six Paths.
How about we let Sasuke and the weasel fight, and the weasel watch helplessly as Sasuke is gradually assimilated into the protagonist, yet is powerless to stop it?
The protagonist's ability is to infinitely split into multiple entities, all of which are under his control. He's immortal, and each split comes with its own buffs; for example, if one entity has a kaleidoscope, then the other has all of them. There's no limit to the number of splits. With this ability, instead of fighting against everything, you're just playing it safe? Seriously?
I suggest the author read that unfinished Tomie story to see how Tomie's abilities should be used.
What the hell is the point of this Tomie template? Endless suicide and rebirth, enough to wipe out the entire ninja world with sheer numbers, and you still need to be so timid?
It's boring; I don't know what the main character is writing. Having acquired Tomie's abilities, one still needs to gradually cultivate chakra. Training in chakra is one thing, but the initial setup was also so overpowered. The main plot is completely incomprehensible, and it lacks any sense of anticipation.
It's too weak. If the ability is a collective consciousness, with mutual struggle and the potential to evolve and seize everything from its counterparts (which consumes resources), then it would be invincible.