My Web Novel Simulator

It's pointless to suggest that the scenes of those brothers should be deleted.

Why do your Four Heavenly Kings have so many scenes? Can you clarify the main plot? It can be written with a little pen and ink, but there is no need to write it as multiple protagonists. I suggest changing the title of the book to The Four Heavenly Kings. The supporting characters are taking over the spotlight.

What kind of feelings do the Four Heavenly Kings entrust to the author? I don't know why I am obsessed with these people. If you want to expand beyond the writing circle, you only need to mention a few paragraphs to start a new branch. The key point is that your writing is too boring, too boring. Everyone's story line has certain twists and turns, but it has no emotional value, so these have no reading value. Moreover, you get money too quickly and easily. If you don't open the reverse cheat, your progress will inevitably be rapid. The focus should be on writing about the changes brought about by the insights after the simulation, rather than realizing the insights in the next simulation. This novel is bound to be short, and I wonder if the author himself knows this is obvious.

The author must have just graduated and is obsessed with brotherhood. It's a pity that we can't understand your brotherhood. Let's write it ourselves.

I have never been so speechless after reading novels for so many years. I don't even want to post this comment. This book is so speechless.

Write the content of the web article carefully. Don't describe so many supporting characters in the early stage, otherwise it will go astray.

After reading it, please share your suggestions. Reduce the plot of the Four Heavenly Kings. As for the choice of royalties, I actually think it's best to only choose once and then stop choosing. You can keep choosing insights and then choose content and royalties when you can't raise the subscription after writing. Also sometimes I can't figure out which book you are writing.

Does the plot about those brothers make sense? What we want to look at is the protagonist.

How can I put it, the simulator and the daily author group chat are okay, but I don't understand the Four Heavenly Kings at all. I only know that Guo Jie is also the author, and Geng Jie is the protagonist.

I have read more than ten chapters, and the timeline of the novel is also more than ten chapters. It is so powerful, it is really good at water. It feels like the author didn't control the main plot well. You didn't write clearly what the readers want to see. Instead, you only made a close-up of boring side stories.