My Web Novel Simulator
我的网文模拟器
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 471k Words
- Genre
- Urban
- Subgenre
- Urban Life
- Updated
- 4y ago
- English
- Request a translation
Synopsis
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223Chapters
2.6kRecommendations
8.9kFans
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[Mixed Picks] Urban Entertainment for All, Plus Quick Transmigration
This list is a bit of everything: books for male and female readers, urban fiction, entertainment-industry stories, and quick transmigration. ① This is my first list, so I'm open to criticism and will make improvements. ② Likes, comments, and flowers are appreciated.
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I suggest cutting the scenes of those brothers; it's pointless.
Why do your Four Heavenly Kings characters have so much screen time? Can you please get the main plot straight? It's fine to dedicate some space to them, but there's no need to treat them all as multiple main characters. I suggest changing the book's title to "The Four Heavenly Kings"—the supporting characters are stealing the show!
What emotions did the author embody in the Four Heavenly Kings? I don't know why the author is so fixated on these characters. If the author wanted to expand beyond the realm of writing, a simple mention or a few paragraphs would suffice to develop a new subplot. The key issue is that the writing is incredibly dull, utterly uninteresting.
The author must be a recent graduate, so fixated on brotherhood. Unfortunately, we can't understand your brotherhood; write your own.
Having read novels for so many years, I've never been so speechless. I didn't even want to post this review; this book is just too absurd.
Focus on writing the main content of your web novel. Don't focus too much on the supporting characters in the early stages; it will veer off-topic.
Now that I've read it, here are my suggestions. Reduce the number of storylines involving the Four Heavenly Kings. I think it's best to only allow one selection of the payment option and then not be able to select it again. You can keep selecting "insights" and then, when the average subscription rate stops increasing, select "content" and "payment". Sometimes I don't even know which book you're writing.
Do the storylines about those brothers even matter? We should be watching the main characters.
Well, the emulator and the daily author group chat are okay, but I didn't understand any of this "Four Heavenly Kings" thing. All I know is that Guo Jie is also an author, and Geng Jie is the protagonist.
I've read over ten chapters, and the novel's timeline also spans about ten chapters—it's incredibly padded. It feels like the author hasn't managed the main plot well; they haven't clearly explained what readers want to see, instead focusing heavily on trivial, uninteresting details.