I Loaded the Youth Disqualification Game in Kanagawa

Can you please stop letting this childhood sweetheart show up? Once you get over it, let it go. Why do you keep coming out to disgust people?

Chapter about childhood sweethearts. First of all, I'm sorry. I thought it was a pretty good story, but I didn't expect it to fall apart. I thought about it for a long time and found that there was indeed a big problem with the plot, and the focus was wrong. The reason why it stayed on that day was entirely due to the male protagonist's repentance and passive inaction due to the rumors at the time. The key point is Yukino Yukito's hope of being forgiven when he grows up. And what she did did not grow at all, which conflicted with the outline. (Actually, my outline is very rough and there is no detailed outline at all.) The outline states that Yukito learned a lot from the confession incident in junior high school. However, I still described it like a little girl. This is different from the character in my outline. It is my problem and my lack of experience. The childhood sweethearts chapter has been re-edited in order to fit the character design of Yukito Tsukino in the outline. Readers who have read the later chapters can re-read it, and the overall plot will have little impact. I'm sorry for making readers feel disgusted. In fact, I have been listening to readers' opinions. This childhood sweetheart plot is my own problem. Because of the obvious discrepancy between the description and the outline, it was abrupt and even made readers hate Yukino Yukito. I punished myself by not drinking iced Coke for three days. I will never make such stupid mistakes in the future.

This novel is like a chocolate with a 💩 appearance. The childhood sweetheart is really a failure. The last one that made me very uncomfortable was the heroine who wrote more than 300 chapters. She suddenly became the female partner, and then let Huang Mao fall in love with her. This novel is different. Although the childhood sweetheart only dated the senior for one day, whether it was her feelings for the male protagonist or In terms of time, I probably didn't do those things, but it just made me feel uncomfortable. Maybe my life is not perfect. I wanted to read the novel to make myself happy, not to make myself uncomfortable. In short, I read it with a very disgusting mentality. Don't write like this next time. Most people will be persuaded to quit, and Shen Nong will be poisoned to death.

(Internet, intrusion and deletion) Yukino Snow Rabbit

Before reading the book, I habitually browsed through the comment section, and found that Qingmei was a hot topic. I didn't pay much attention to this at first, but later I saw that the plot was really entertaining me. With a glance, I identified Qingmei as a pure fun person. Her behavior of "because I was afraid that you wouldn't like me, so I agreed to the senior's confession" was just looking for fun in my opinion. It's a pity that this sister can't afford to have fun. She wants to have fun but doesn't dare to bear the consequences. She watches the male protagonist survive alone, and finally disgusts the male protagonist. Are you a piece of cake? If you really like him, why don't you stand up for him in his most difficult time? You really like him, why don't you agree to his confession? If you really like him, why do you accept other people's confessions? You are a pure injustice! If you really get married to the male protagonist, after two or three years of marriage, will you one day feel that the male protagonist may not love you anymore and then have sex with another man to test the male protagonist? The male protagonist is being forced by you to get divorced. Now, why don't you say that wearing it doesn't count as giving? Happy

The plot of the author's childhood sweethearts was a bit disgusting, but it was my senior sister who made me keep reading. In serious novels, reading this kind of "For your own good, I have to do it!" And then agreeing to be threatened, this self-righteous female partner feels like a minotaur. If this book started with the senior sister content and it was just the senior sister, I think it would be almost full marks. I feel that the author likes to write about this kind of polyamorous relationship, such as gay friends, and the heroine Yoshida occasionally being attracted to men. Is this the author's bad taste? The subject matter you write about is not very popular, and with this content, it feels like you are deliberately screening out readers... I can't say.

I really couldn't help it, and I'm not targeting the author, but I feel like the book would have been better without a certain character.

I recommended this book to a female friend who doesn't read Hitsugari. She said she would make fun of the author's part about Ome if he had a psychological problem (no malice).

I have to say that the author's writing style is very good, and other treatments are also very good. However, although the childhood sweetheart story has been changed, the feeling of being threatened ntr is really off-putting and completely ruins the sense of reading.

You should all be aware that this book focuses on daily life and stories. Many readers like to save it and wait until the number of words is high before finishing it. They read one person's story in one breath. However, this is very difficult for a new book. I hope everyone can read the latest chapters. The author does not dare to ask the old man to do things, but just hopes to support him. This is very important to get recommendations in the new book period.

It's well written, but the plot has a bit of a sleazy feel to it, and I still can't accept it.

Although the Qingmei part has been reformed, it is still very alienating. In the Qingmei part, I thought I was watching some NTR plot. I randomly found a man to stimulate the male protagonist. The male protagonist was misunderstood and did not dare to stand up. It really disgusted me. Every time I met, I showed a sympathetic face to the male protagonist. I didn't know how much I had to sacrifice. The male protagonist did not know the misunderstanding. I feel like that, if I am really together with the male protagonist, if I have a conflict with the male protagonist one day or if I think too much that the male protagonist doesn't love me that much, I will directly cheat on the male protagonist to see if he will be angry. It's really outrageous The part of the friendship is the most disgusting to me. If the male protagonist hadn't gone, Qingmei would have been with her for more than two years. She is still entangled with the man. Qingmei will definitely not be able to refuse this time, and this is not the first time she has gone to the friendship. The male protagonist was framed, but she went to the friendship to find another man. This time the male protagonist came and she bravely decided to sever the relationship. Then they have been compromising in the past two years. Even if the author said nothing happened, I feel that after two years of compromise Gu Ying, it's just a Tauren-yellow plot, and I kept crying and apologizing in the end. I felt angry and disgusted The above are some of my vents about Qingmei's plot. I thought it was some kind of plot. In fact, I skipped it and watched the later part. It was quite interesting. The interaction with the senior sister was also quite sweet. I hope the author will work harder.

Tsukino Yukito

Senior sister, 100 points Childhood sweetheart 0 points I don't understand this childhood sweetheart's brain circuit, please let her die quickly, thank you.

I feel like it's better to just write a Qingzhu fanfic🤔

Oh oh

I have a strong sense of seeing a green pig, what about you in another world🤔

Is the childhood sweetheart the heroine? I hate her so much

The writing is flawless, and Riqing's taste is very good, but this green plum is too disgusting. If this is not a bitch... Forget it, I can't catch up after chapter 25, and I look forward to the author's new book.

When I read so many reviews and said that the author did not think that the rabbit was the heroine, I decided not to read it. Writing this kind of plot in light novels is asking for death. If you can't write it well, forget it. If you write a heroine who is not the heroine, what is the purpose of writing Qingmei?

Take it off the shelves, this book will make people sick if it continues to exist.

When I read the book reviews, I felt that it would be stressful to read. 😥 I felt scared when I read the reviews. I'll watch it when I feel better that day.

Author, the character you wrote is very similar to "Women who once caused mental trauma to me started to pay attention to me again".

Author, the plot at the beginning of your book should be based on Riqing, right? The Nine-layered Snow Rabbit is so classic.

It's a pretty bad book. The author's characterization of the characters is unreasonable and the scale between the characters is unclear. The male protagonist's IQ is as if it has been gnawed by a dog. The author imitated two pure Japanese light novels (the names will not be repeated too much) and one "I Loaded the Love Game". In the end, he learned three different things. He did not learn the essence of these three books, but forcibly imitated the plots. Maybe the author felt that he wrote well? If the writing is not enough, don't force the drama. The plot is purely Japanese style, which is why the male protagonist looks stupid.

Maybe it's because I don't have enough poison resistance. I heard that the author changed it, but I still can't stand it after reading it 😐😐. I'm waiting for the new book.

Make a borderline game and look at it, it makes me want to vomit~

It's gone... #, So why is there no Kiroshita Chiki in the end?

Do it! Who stole my first place? !

This time it's one step further back than last time... Come on, Maltose! 😊