From Conning Wang Duoyu to a New Career in Film and TV

The theme is unclear. You become stronger by changing the fate of others, not by becoming a businessman, director or boss. In a word, the quality is too low. The manipulator of fate, you can say the same thing about the mastermind behind the scenes. With the character you wrote about Charlotte, if you hold him up and beat him to death, it will have no effect on you. He won't listen to your arrangements. If you don't, just give him dignity. Charlotte is so shameless. Your golden finger is your destiny. I'm not asking you to be a dog licker, just like an old lady, and find a few regular lovers. I almost lost interest in watching it. If this is still the mode of entertainment writing, this book won't go far.

The two protagonists of "Golden Years" asked you to paint them as white lotus flowers. Wang Yongzheng asked you to be a humble gentleman, and Zhang Anren asked you to be a hypocrite.

Brother, the more I think about it, the more I don't understand it. The editor gave you a daily recommendation, so you immediately lowered the reading limit for the latest chapters, and started writing single chapters consecutively to write supporting characters. This rhythm of yours, hahahaha, what do you think?

The idea is good, but the plot arrangement is really bad. You have to understand that the point of this book is to use characters from movies and TV shows to act in movies and TV shows, or to use them to achieve certain goals and bring a sense of satisfaction. Instead of endlessly talking about some childish and outrageous business practices. Ma Dongmei plays Ma Li and Xia Luo plays Hao Jian in the Spring Festival Gala together. Isn't it more interesting than talking about business? The Jiang family is bankrupt. Isn't it too much to arrange for Jiang Nansun to act as a palace with an IOU? Let's sing about love's lack of oxygen. Wang Duoyu and Xia Luo are so similar, so there's nothing wrong with one playing the fourth child and the other playing the fourteenth child, right? There's nothing wrong with Dachun appearing to be a fool, but actually being a killer named Karl, right?

When writing about Charlotte, at least watch the movie carefully. "Just Once" was written by Charlotte himself, and he can play the guitar. He may not be able to play other instruments, but being able to play the guitar has proven that he can read music. You have to be able to get by with the basic character settings.

Pretend to be cool and get into trouble all because of Charlotte, then give up and do it yourself, otherwise, why don't you watch the supporting actors acting in live-action movies for you? What's the point of this?

Change Charlotte to the protagonist. Charlotte is more like the protagonist.

It's okay. I've finally deleted the worst chapters, which is acceptable. You have to know that you started off as a comedy movie, with urban scenes mixed in. Even if you transition, you can't directly transition to a bloody drama. Even if you combine the world of movies and TV series, just describe it a little. Don't be afraid of describing too much, because you have more than 80 chapters, and readers who want to read it won't be able to follow that long.

I was attracted by the introduction, and I wanted to see the characters in the movie filmed by the actors who played them. Or movies they haven't acted in. After all, there are many movies with terrible casting that netizens have recommended. Instead of looking at the bloody business war emotions. How to sleep with a woman with the protagonist

I can't stand it anymore. It's really not like you're behind the scenes. You keep writing about Charlotte.