I'm Bugging the Jianghu

When writing a book, don't overwhelm the protagonist. We will get depressed when we read it. Secondly, the strength of which realm is given must be determined. Don't randomly add two supporting players of the same realm. You can play a few chapters. There should be as few inconsistencies as possible to prevent us from seeing it awkwardly. For example, at the beginning, you are given an identification technique that can identify all items As a result, look at this unknown, look at that unknown,

I don't quite understand it. It's obviously a good new book, but out of 7.8 Comments, 3 said there were flaws? The protagonist has synthesized earth-level skills, and one layer of energy is more powerful than the average person's 3 layers? Not strong? After hitting two or three levels, if you rely on force to kill him naturally, the problem is that the protagonist has just started and reaches level 3 in an instant. There is still a problem with the origin of the technique. Can't he disguise it first? The headmaster believes that the protagonist is a child of luck, but is afraid that the protagonist's big tree will attract wind, so he doesn't show it clearly. The protagonist doesn't know his own status, and he just relies on bugs to develop first. There is nothing wrong with his thinking, right? The problem is probably that the headmaster clearly felt that the protagonist was lucky, but he didn't pay the attention he deserved. He didn't even pay attention when the two and three levels came.

The author should be steady, don't mess around with the plot, and don't overwhelm the combat power. Of course, I suggest you write from martial arts to Xianxia. The title of the book is From Wuxia Card to Xianxia. Of course, I don't like the plot of Xianxia. I hope the author can be original and of course can work together.

I thought about Pig's Feet traveling through the game world, and that's the reality. When playing games, you have to join a faction to complete tasks. You can't join several sects at the same time in the game, and you need to fight between factions. But if you travel through time, that's reality, and the gameplay is different. Why do you have to follow the game's gameplay? For example, you can join several nearby sects at the same time from the beginning. You can synthesize basic martial arts in the library and complete daily tasks of several sects at the same time. It is not a long time to gain experience. Also, why must you fight against the catastrophe in the martial arts world? Save this person, protect that sect, and save the world. You came from time-travel, so why are you suddenly so responsible? You can choose to become a part of the catastrophe, or you can become a force yourself.

Don't stuck bugs start with the biggest ones? They are all small bugs, so suppressing the protagonist is really meaningless.

I read the introduction and it was quite attractive, so I clicked in. After reading a few chapters, I felt that the writing was not very vivid. I thought the protagonist was going to be playful, but it turned out to be an ordinary upgrade flow.

Didn't the author have an accident? Otherwise, he would have screamed twice if something happened.

Yesterday I said that I was invincible in the Qi and Blood realm, and it took me two chapters to get two Qi and blood today; you are really good at water.

The writing is quite good, it's basically the fairy grass in Qidian's new book now.

What the hell, it's just been released. Is this book about to get cold? Forget it if you don't watch pirated copies for three days