Sister Sword Used Her as the Background in the Novel About Cultivating Immortals

There is no cp in this article, please feel free to download

There is too little CP at the starting point, come on

There is the most serious problem. Upgrading is like drinking water. You just go up and down, and you cannot leave an impression on others. This is also a common problem of female videos. If you write upgrades better, you can enrich the content of each level instead of making it an assembly line.

There are too many dialogues and too few descriptions of the heroine and details, like a running account. For example, for Qingluo Fruit, it should be about how the heroine acted alone, how she discovered Qingluo Fruit, and how she obtained Qingluo Fruit... Instead of directly writing about the heroine coming back from outside in ragged clothes, saying that she met several monsters and won a jackpot, and then she took out a Qingluo Fruit. It's really hard to feel immersed and immersed in this way.

Isn't the heroine a local woman? Why are some words so modern, what are the anti-addiction settings, and the ID of the monk on Qiankun Jade is Meimeida? She has some ideas, but she is not a time-travelling girl. And the plot is a bit dull. When can I go out to travel and explore the secret realm? I hope it can be more exciting later on.

There are too few female channels without CP, and even fewer who are cultivators The plot is smooth, the characters are vivid, a little tolerant can be used as fodder, and there is potential in serialization. In short, if you can persevere, you can still get ahead in this section. Experienced writing can be honed and grown, and amazing plots can be accumulated. Not every great god can become a god in one book. The author's writing power has begun to take shape. I can feel the author's inner expectations in the plot that is not amazing . Which reader has not fantasized about becoming an author? It's good to be able to write it fluently (￢㉨￢). When writing about immortals, you must make sure that the context and context echo each other. I'm not very good at writing in this area, so I must write down what's great about it! (Guide: If you want to be a fairy, just look for Chinese classics! Those are the ones recommended by your teachers when you were in school. Foreign ones are also acceptable. Pay attention to taking notes.(¯ㅂ¯Crimin))

Raise it for a while, and then take a look again when it is fatter.

Looking at the copywriting, the enemy is a woman and the male supporting actor is outstanding. This routine...

Is this the author's first book? The writing is very simple, and there is no description about the process of practice. It only writes that the heroine and her friends will build the foundation after a few years. N years later, it does not describe the problems encountered during the practice and how to improve it. There is also very little description of the fighting process. Either throwing seeds to tie up the enemy or throwing seeds. Isn't the heroine Lei Linggen? So weak, it gives people a strange feeling. She is injured after one hit, and is saved by others. Isn't the heroine born with a fairy body? Why is she so ordinary? At least she is faster than others in cultivation. Why is she always suppressed by Zhao and other partners? Can't she cast spells several times faster than others? Can't her spiritual power be purer than others? The heroine is not good at swordsmanship, so she should be good at magic to give her a sense of uniqueness. Then what the author wants to write is that the heroine is more awesome, but I can't see why she is so awesome, which makes me feel very uncomfortable. It's all about her and her male partners being ambiguous. It's very poisonous. Is this a NP fairy in a non-CP skin? ? ? I hope the author can improve these problems in the future. I only clicked in to read the heroine's name and the plot in the introduction. This makes me really sad for the author 😭😭😭😭😭

It will be put on the shelves in the next two days. I hope you will support me a lot. If you haven't finished the free chapters yet, please read them as soon as possible.

Non-CP enthusiasts, please gain some weight before reading.

Find one without a male protagonist and take a longer look.

Without CP, I can finally pursue it with confidence.

I think that the heroine has her own skills and can control the slightest bit of lightning. The heroine is a cultivator and her body is weaker than that of ordinary monks. Can we assume that one day the heroine suddenly realizes that she is a cultivator? If one day her fighting spirit is exhausted and her body is weaker than that of ordinary people, isn't that very dangerous? Then referring to the fact that every time a monk survives a thunder tribulation, his body will become stronger. He is the thunder spirit root and can control the thunder spirit power. Can he use it to train his body? Then the heroine will control a little bit of thunder and lightning to strengthen his body until he is invincible in the same realm and can even cross levels to challenge 😃😃

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