Uchiha Apocalypse of Konoha

If Ying is so awesome, why should he listen to that loser Daimyo? Wouldn't it be nice to be the emperor and take control of a country? How great it would be to have nobles support ninjas! Are the Japanese mentally ill? I have to be a dog for the daimyo, but the protagonist has traveled through time! Not even a pattern

I feel like I often write too anxiously and don't write fluently enough. For example, when recruiting people to join Uchiha, Matt Dai is from Senju Tobirama's era, but the protagonist is from the Warring States Period, and they don't know him, but at this time, he is recruiting him to join Uchiha in front of his tribe! It's a little weird, it's so sudden!

When the author is coding, you might as well read it yourself, and you will find that many sentences are not smooth enough! Of course, the first dozen or twenty chapters are not big problems, but the author still needs to be more cautious in the following chapters. Too many words will affect reading.

This lousy book will also have stupid investment, I laughed, the writing is poor, the layout is like shit, the plot is so damn that no one read it ten years ago.

I can't stand it anymore, it's the author's own pleasure.

It's a mess, a whole self-pleasure, Shisui is alive, Danzo has a kaleidoscope, not to mention the second Uchiha mirror, it doesn't match up with the original plot behind it.

The smell is so strong that I can't bear it. You can read it without thinking. It's a cool article.

Um, now that I've woken up, shouldn't I just conquer Konoha? It feels so boring.

This ancestor looks a bit awkward. Can the author change his name...

Personally, I feel like I'm writing a running account, with not enough details, and there are a lot of sentences that are hard to understand.

It's the Teeth Whitening story again. The Naruto animation was specially made for the Teeth Whitening issue. White Fang traded important information for his captured companions and abandoned the mission, leading to a ten-year tug-of-war with Kumogakure and causing heavy losses to the Fire Nation. Those who accused White Fang were ninjas who returned to the village from the battlefield, and White Fang committed suicide out of guilt. It's okay if you don't get it, but if you get it, if you exchange countless people for one person, shouldn't you die?

The urban crooked dragon king flavor hits your face. . .

I asked why it hasn't been updated recently. Come on

Don't you want to unify the ninja world? Use the entire ninja world to fight against the Otsutsuki alien invasion? Unifying the ninja world is conducive to the development of technology and industry. After the unification of the ninja world and the development of Boruto, the technology will definitely surpass our modern technology level, and it is also possible to create interstellar battleships.

The inner scenes are a bit dull, and the fighting scenes cannot be said to be underpowered, but rather lacking in skill...

Mentally retarded protagonist😅

The author writes a little hastily. It's not that the plot is urgent, but that the writing is urgent

Post a few more pictures every day! Don't squeeze in a little bit every day

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

I won't say anything else about your poor writing skills. You can even use your color writing skills to dig out three bedrooms and one living room with your feet. I'm really convinced.

I read it all night long in one sitting! So happy

The author writes very well. No matter what they say, I support you! ! ! ! Come on, come on. They say your writing is not good. Why don't they write it themselves? Come on, come on! !

Is being a Daimyo bigger than Hokage? I don't quite understand the Japanese architecture. Is the daimyo equal to the emperor, and the Hokage is the marshal of the armed forces?