Mystery Descends on Tokyo

The protagonist is the source of all abnormalities and can distribute supernatural powers. After the distributed powers are trained, he can master them simultaneously. After the protagonist's personal revenge plot in the beginning, the description of the supporting characters is added Obviously, there is a setting to learn from the guy who does not carry a knife after the rain Compared with that guy, the advantage of this book is that the protagonist's detached image is better described. The disadvantage is that some big forces are very weak in countermeasures against new abnormalities (such as the extreme lack of communication among various departments) No Knife After the Rain is the only book that has been completed. The other three or four are all eunuchs. In the recent eunuch book, he wrote a summary of his own improvements, but it is easy to uncontrollably tend to the group portraits, and the protagonist is invincible because of his drama too quickly. The plot lacks conflict, tension, and excitement. He designed some improvements, but due to various reasons he became a eunuch again I hope the author can learn a lesson, and while learning his advantages, be sure not to study them all, otherwise it will be easy to fail to write

The writing is very good, especially the description of the interaction between the characters. Please write more interactions. The interaction between the protagonist and his sister

In a word, I'm sorry, I underestimated the power of the mysterious sequence. I remember that the Assassin's Sequence 9 can make the whole ship kill each other with just one mouth. You have always said that hypnosis is of no use. You can't make people commit suicide directly. To keep influencing, reality also needs an identity. If you want a faceless man to change his appearance, you really know Super What is everything? Extraordinary means transcending ordinary people. Hypnosis can be contagious in the extraordinary. I can hypnotize one person and use the hypnotic person, eyes or words to hypnotize the next person. I can also make the already dead person realize that he is not dead. This is hypnosis, this is the audience, what are you talking about? Mortal hypnotist?

After reading more than 30 chapters, the leisurely life style of the weird, murderous and semi-invincible protagonist is quite interesting, but the foot control of the tame little lolita is quite abrupt and unreasonable, especially because the author deliberately describes these, and has a strong otaku feel. This is a poisonous point in my opinion. If the normal love plot is okay, these deliberate light novel-type romances full of routines are very inappropriate for the behind-the-scenes style of this post-apocalyptic world setting, especially the protagonist always saying sarcastic remarks.

First, can Sequence Six hypnotists and Sequence Five Dream Walkers rely on hypnosis to force ordinary people to commit suicide. Regarding this issue, I think that if you rely on a period of subconscious tampering to make the target have suicidal thoughts, and then continuously strengthen this idea, plus hypnosis, it will naturally be possible. I find it a bit difficult to rely on hypnosis to force someone to commit suicide if it is their first time meeting them. Here are the original words of the Lord of Mystery: "If Audrey's "arrangement" directly harms the life of the hypnotized person and the things he values most in his subconscious, the other party will show strong resistance, causing the hypnosis to fail. In addition, if the target has a strong spirit and a firm mind, he can also resist hypnosis to a certain extent." The hypnotized person here probably didn't emphasize whether the other party was an extraordinary person. ———— Second, whether the Sequence Three Sea King can withstand the bombardment of modern warships without suffering any damage. It is definitely possible to hide. Neptune has a large number of water and wind spells. If the defensive method relies on magic scales, it may be a bit reluctant. After all, the original work does not emphasize the defensive power of magic scales. The original work emphasizes that the magic scales are hidden under the skin, making the "sailor" as difficult to catch as a fish. So the focus of Magic Scale and Dragon Scale should be different. —————— Almost all fans have constant disputes when facing the issue of combat power, especially those about the two worlds. There's nothing we can do about it. Everyone is welcome to give examples here.

Let's list the performance of high-sequence in Mystery.

I came here for the mystery. I thought the protagonist would focus on transcendence, start to advance towards the direction of a dreamer, and finally become transcendent. As a result, he suddenly recognized a younger sister, okay, okay, it's normal for the protagonist to have relatives and friends, but he actually has to go to school. . . Seeing the campus outfit at the back, the cheat for a sister I've known for less than a day, and the Chinese-Japanese language, I suddenly felt like I was living in Bengbu.       ，

I feel like the protagonist could actually be a little stronger. The protagonist's rank is already very high.

Make a statement. I haven't read this book. I took the daily guide today and felt that the subject matter was okay. After putting it in the bookshelf, I clicked in and took a look, and found that it had been updated and no more information was written. Well, it was directly cracked.

First of all, the resistance of ordinary people is different from that of extraordinary people. The original text here refers to the extraordinary people. Sequence 5 is already an inhuman demigod. If Sequence 5 cannot lure and commit suicide against ordinary people, then the mystery is not as reliable as climbing technology. The first point you said is wrong. My suggestion is to change it. If it is not convenient to change, I suggest you pay attention to the strength of the mystery side in the future. This is Sequence 5, not Sequence 89, 1-4 are The upper sequence, 5-7 is the middle sequence, and 8-9 is the lower sequence. If a transcendent who is about to enter the inhuman realm of "demigod" has to use his strength for a long time to make an ordinary person commit suicide, that is too weak. Other book friends are also attacking you on this point. To be honest, this is your problem in itself, and there is nothing to admit. The author is not perfect, and it is common for him to be unable to cover everything. Just pay more attention in the future. Second, I can tell you clearly that Sequence 3 Sea King can completely withstand the gunfire of warships in modern society. Sequence 3 is already a terrifying "saint", a monster completely divorced from actual laws, and as a sailor sequence, the Sequence 0 tyrant is precisely physically strong. Known for its speed, its speed can reach the true speed of light, and it can transform into real lightning, comparable to Kungunir in myths and legends. The regularity of this sure-hit gun actually means that it can transform into thunder and lightning, and the speed that turns into light is the support for its "sure-hit" characteristic. Sequence 3 Sea King The "Dragon Scales" of the Spectator (also known as the Dragon Path) path are stronger than the "Dragon Scales" of the Spectator Path. The former can reach Sequence 0 and can physically withstand the terrifying pressure brought by the speed of light with the help of mystery. The latter cannot be deeply cultivated in the Soul Path unless it imagines that it has indestructible armor. The psychic dragon scales in Spectator Sequence 3 cannot be stronger than the phantom scales of Sea King in Sailor Sequence 3, and the dragon scales can only be said to be weak against warship shells. The phantom scales should be stronger than the dragon scales, and it should be easier to resist warship gunfire with stronger defensive capabilities. (The original text contains a description of the Sailor Path Sequence 0 Tyrant. You can easily see the original text by searching in TXT e-book mode)

I feel bad living with her in front of someone else's brother.

The most taboo thing about this kind of writing is that the combat power is too different from the original work. For example: it's like the boxing champion in the original work can't even be beaten by ordinary people in your book, and he is turned into a dog.

The order of promotion in the old days was wrong. The original work made it clear that after the True God, the Sefirot was first accommodated, and then the uniqueness and Sequence One extraordinary characteristics of other pathways were accommodated. It is the worst route. Xiao Ke in the original novel was cheated in the ending and first accommodated all the uniqueness and Sequence 1 extraordinary characteristics of the Gou San family. He would not need to fall into a deep sleep until he formally accommodated the sefirah. Otherwise, even if he raised his level of divinity in order to fight Amon, he could still fight awake without falling asleep.

It's okay up front, Mysterious Resurrection is quite attractive. But I really couldn't appreciate the various descriptions of teasing women, various feet and breasts, etc., So I left.

The subject matter is very interesting, but it's a pity that the author can't control it.

，，     ，，，     ，， Less, you can write more about the protagonist's life, let the neighbors and classmates encounter some troubles, and then the protagonist pretends to be a little bitch, and adds some excitement There are too many branch plots at present, including the Sea Dragon King, the Abomination, the Arctic, the desert, the God of Death, and there is only one Abomination because of the scientist. In addition, it is also very important to grasp the balance between extraordinary and ordinary plots. I can't think of any suggestions on this point. I can only hope that the author can find the feeling.

It is recommended to put an event card directly into the mold base to create a big life and earn more source points by the way.

Has the author considered changing the younger sister to be the protagonist?

This thing can't be a harem, right? I thought it was pure love with my sister.

The subject matter is good, but the writing style is not good.

I was really right, you are really a eunuch, I predicted it before. Sure enough, this type is difficult to control.

If you look at the Virtual Creator, although the early writing was very poor and the results were poor, he still persisted. Although the updates were very unstable, he still persisted. I doubted that he could be a eunuch for a lot of time, but I didn't expect that he could survive and attract a lot of readers who like that kind of genre. I can only say that perseverance is more valuable than perseverance.

Chapter 3 clearly states that the official will launch an investigation after the death of the target, so why does the protagonist in the next chapter have to assume the identity of the deceased?

The author has been following a lot of books these days. Wait for me to watch the ads to support you.

Speaking of which, I don't know when the lawyer route appeared. The arbitrator route also appeared.

Fortunately, the order was small, otherwise it would have been a huge loss for Dafa

I suddenly had a guess that the protagonist was part of the original, and the purpose of spreading extraordinary power in the world should be to produce the three pillars, and the number of years is most likely the day of the initial awakening (or maybe the countdown to the invasion of alien gods?). As for the system... Maybe it was given by a big boss who didn't want to let the initial awakening?

Is this because book lovers haven't woken up, or are there very few people subscribing?

To be honest, when you are learning from others, can you not be idle and get rid of its side effects when practicing the system? Otherwise it won't look good