Mortal Master Han Li

It's really short, the author is too short. As the first book I read in Qidian, I didn't expect you to be so short.

Yin Yue was designed to be a bit annoying. Although she was right to want to kill the male protagonist, she repeatedly suggested that Han Li take action against the male protagonist. Even though Han Li had some affection for the male protagonist and had said that he was an old friend, he still wanted to take action. She was a bit annoying. Yin Yue shouldn't be like this in her heart.

It's really easy to get stuck with a double heroine, either with a single heroine, no heroine, or a super harem. Author: Can you name a book with two female protagonists? The writing is okay, but I really don't want you to rush into the street

It started with Old Demon Han coming back from the Sea of ​​Chaotic Stars? ? ?

The whole article is like running on a task. Nothing is completed carefully and in detail. I start by introducing what I want to do, then write half a sentence, and then end it in a hurry, and then move on to the next task. After reading dozens of chapters, I look back and wonder what the protagonist did? He always looks impatient, and every word reveals that I want to rush to the fairy world and finish the book. And the thief likes black people, Black Silver Moon, Black Han Laomo, and Black Zi Ling. He really can't stand it when he sees Zi Ling. He feels sad and jealous that his woman has been slept with by another man. When he sees this woman, he shows his unhappiness with a cold face and ignores her (I guess, otherwise I can't understand the protagonist's inexplicable indifference and doesn't want to involve Zi Ling) Anyway, since you are on a mission, I won't bother you anymore.

A man with inner demons is writing about it like a dinner, and he is always wet. Is he trying to challenge the reader's endurance? Isn't it okay if I skip it?

The most disgusting thing about this book is that it contains Liu Dao's clothes, a group of widows such as Mrs. Bai and Long Han's wife. It's really disgusting and makes people unable to stand it. The rest is fine.

I'm a little confused. Tiannan already has 4 major cultivators, Mulan has 4 as well, plus Han Laomo, Nangong Wan can barely be regarded as a major cultivator. Even if the other party plus Gan Laomo have a total of 5, there is a numerical advantage, how dare the other party, and he looks full of confidence, just go to the other party's house, everything is solved

Why is it that all Han Li's beauties are biased against the protagonist? Moreover, the author made them all have some..., And the author made the protagonist seem to have opinions about them? In addition, the master-disciple relationship between the protagonist and Han Li is more like a transaction! This is not like the master-disciple relationship in the cultivation system.

Did you hire a ghostwriter? The rhythm and writing style are like a new person. Before, he just picked up women who came to his door, but now he actively seeks out women from the harem.

This plot doesn't make sense? Will the Luoyun Sect's three early Yuanyings stay at home and be unable to defeat one Yinluo Sect's middle Yuanying and one early stage? Is the Forbidden Formation of Luoyun Sect so low? The status of the Holy Lady Leguru was described as being so high and irreplaceable. However, the protagonist discussed taking action with her, and she just left it to death and the protagonist believed it? Are you still trading Lingzhuguo?

It doesn't matter how much water there is, we'll skip it.

An inner demon wrote more than 10 chapters.

Speed ​​up the progress, and I will go to Dajin immediately. I can't get the bonus of running anymore. This book is very smooth for mortals. You see, the science of cultivating immortals has been separated from running, and its popularity has plummeted. Recently, the plot has been connected with running. I still like running. The anime is also really good. Come on, author.

Starting from chapter 169, I have written 10 chapters of inner demons. Isn't it finished yet? After waiting, the inner demon is watching, which is uncomfortable.

I hope that the protagonist in the novel would not be as omniscient and omnipotent, as this would be a bit of a drama. . . You can know a little bit about some major events in mortal life, instead of just like Baidu. Some personal suggestions. In this case, the story will not appear too dramatic and the sense of reality will be higher.

If you don't want to read it, you don't have to read it. The author understands. This involves a subsequent plot, and the author just wants to write it slowly. Anyway, there is no hope for a five hundred equal order, and the author has no baggage anymore, so he can write it well. The eunuch said, probably no more. After all, the author really likes this book and wants to finish it. One more thing, this is not purely inner demon, there are hints before.

A good novel about cultivating immortals was written as a stallion novel. Alas, what a pity.

I will give you two recommendation votes every day. You should write well and don't fail. Try to be loyal to the original work and don't deviate from the original world view.

I would like to ask if it is written by the same author?

I feel like there are a lot of synopses released recently when I'm following the update. Don't worry about the author. I really like this book. I don't have money to reward it, so I can only support it with a monthly subscription.

Very good,,,,,,,,,,, come on, make more! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !