Devouring Starry Sky Time Simulation

Hey, what a pity. Such a good subject matter. I really like the first 50%. It looks good. But why does it get worse towards the back? That Lu Hongfei mentioned it once when Yang Wucheng became the Territory Lord, and then mentioned it out of context. When he became the Lord of the Universe, he mentioned it again, out of context. So what do you really want to express with this old mention, and there is no result? I really feel from the bottom of my heart that I spent money on this 108. It's an anticlimactic experience and I'm really unhappy about it. The emotions are not delicate and there's no explanation. It's just a swipe and it's very fast. It's understandable. But how do I feel?

The actual gain from this simulation is only 10 times the time acceleration on average (planetary star level, not seen later), and if the giant ax is willing, it can accelerate him ten thousand times (it was used by Luo Feng during the Duandonghe inheritance). Does that mean that a true god can create countless chaos masters? You must know how low your talent is, Yang Wu. The average level of the top ten in each realm is that of a feudal lord. If you accelerate the time of an Invincible by hundreds of millions of times, it would be pretty good to eventually become the Lord of the Universe (referring to an Invincible who has exhausted his talents, such as Zhen Yan does not count, because his talent is much worse than that of Zhen Yan). You must know that the original universe has been born for hundreds of millions of epochs, and there are only 6,000 human sages. Really, in a world where people have been cultivating for tens of thousands of years, golden fingers speed up time, and even the natives cannot be the top. Not to mention that the time interval will be shorter in the future, even if you count it 100 million times, you will not be able to become the Lord of the Universe. Those true gods of the Universe Sea have practiced for two eras of reincarnation. In addition, the acceleration of the stone tablet (generally true gods are about 100,000 times) cannot survive the reincarnation, so the acceleration of time is really nothing

The author of the Swallowing Starry Sky fan novel did a good job in the early stage, but the current poisonous point is that he chose to be steady and died too early, and it is difficult to simulate in the later stage. Simple simulation writing will most likely collapse in the later stage. It is recommended to upgrade the system midway, the kind that can add comprehension, or find an opportunity to improve the comprehension through simulation, otherwise it will be too single. Most simulation novels will collapse in the later stage because they are too single and cannot be written anymore.

Recommended "Heavens: Proving the Heavenly Emperor from the Desolate Era", I will write the Devouring Chapter soon... I, Ying Hao, come to the Era of the Desolate World with the Gate of All Realms, travel through the heavens, gather endless luck, open the first destiny dynasty in the ages, use the way of the ultimate emperor to make all the ways surrender, and become the eternal Supreme Emperor of Heaven. PS: I am currently writing about The Wilderness, and I may write about Swallowing Starry Sky, Perfect World, Under One Person, Douluo Dalu, Covering the Sky, Wu Dong Qian Kun, Snow Eagle Lord, Feijian Wenwen, Cangyuan Tu, Eternal Life, Yuan Tianzun, Beyond Time...

Something new. But there is also a common problem with system flow, which is that the system itself cannot be explained within the story frame. For cultivation, this means that the most important link lacks rationality and is unreal. The so-called cultivation is a process in which low-level energy gradually accumulates and converges into high-level energy. High-level energy will continue to accumulate, hoping to grow into higher-level energy. The system is energy far higher than the story. It has been delivering energy to the protagonist. The energy used in the process of delivering energy far exceeds the energy itself, but there is no price or purpose. This is strange.

Don't dare to deviate from the original work. What's the use of sticking to the details of the original work? You have to have your own story line and main line. I want to write my own story but don't have the ability, so I just have to rely on the popularity of the original work. Abandoned, if the more you write later, the better. Just pretend I didn't say anything.

There isn't much of my own content from beginning to end, it's all copy and paste 🤣🤣🤣👉👉👉🤡🤡🤡

When did the last few Devouring fandoms start to inexplicably ask the protagonist to leave the earth? ① Genius battle, enter the virtual headquarters, and the same Qianwu universe country comes out. When entering the core of the virtual headquarters, the origin of the protagonist from the first time he logged into the virtual universe should have been clearly exposed. The so-called anonymity, the virtual itself can't find it? The protagonist's selling of immortal corpses is also revealed. So who are you lying to by not revealing the relationship between the protagonist and the earth? What's logic! ②What is special about the earth? Mind is born on earth and becomes innate. Hong, Lei Shen, and the protagonists would not take it seriously if their characters were not exposed. What they thought was that there could be original ancestors who could defy heaven? , Xingxing entered the virtual core background and saw that he had inherited the legacy of the fallen feudal lord. That was good luck. After entering the virtual headquarters later, it's up to you to see how hard you work! ③ No matter how many geniuses like the protagonist and Luo Feng come, the top management will only be happy. The earth is just the threshold. Since the Stellar Genius War, the cultivation of the protagonist and Luo Feng has been based on other people's models. We can see more and more geniuses, but is this related to the cultivation on the earth? People only think that the protagonist and Luo Feng will get opportunities during their training, but what does the earth have to do with it? ④When did the earth in the original work become special? When Realm Master Luo Fengcai had no strength to protect the earth, Hong Universe level cleared the fantasy world, and Thor passed through the 16th floor. Two geniuses who were born on earth, both in law and combat power and in character, appeared at the same time. The latter kind of devouring human beings had never appeared before, which led to the giant ax investigation. If your character is not exposed and goes against heaven, who cares about the earth! Even if they are exposed, the protagonist and Venerable Luo Feng's combat power and self-preservation ability will definitely save the earth. The earth is just a special secret realm. Is it possible for something stupid to happen? Why not just write the protagonist in reality to remind the people on earth not to expose their unnatural character in advance? Don't you know how to write? What are you afraid of if the earth is exposed? You were originally born on Earth, so what are you afraid of? Is the idea wrong? What the earth wants is that its unfaithful character cannot be exposed in advance without the ability to protect itself! Can a genius like the original ancestor be compared to the laws and combat power?

No matter how many benefits the protagonist gets from the simulator, his performance in the subsequent simulation will always be worse than others, and then he will be better than others in reality by choosing. What kind of rat man is this?

After reading Chapter 239, I feel more and more uninteresting. The work tag corresponds to time travel and system flow. The protagonist's cheat plug-in was good at first, but the simulation interval became longer and longer later. The author wanted to write about the feeling that the protagonist relies on the system to become stronger at first, but later becomes the strongest on his own. It can only be said that the writing power is not enough and the arrangements are not in place. You must know that the protagonist is a waste from the beginning, relying entirely on the simulator to start. Without the simulator, he may be at the warrior level at most in his life, and he has to hold Luo Feng's thigh to figure out the earth. A protagonist with little talent always wants to rely on himself instead of relying on increasingly weak simulators. If the plot sounds good, it means it is close to the original work, but if it doesn't sound good, it means it has no new ideas. Readers read fan fiction just to see something new, not to read the same thing as the original work again. As for how to write new ones? There are hundreds of mission worlds in the original secret realm, and there are many opportunities in them. The original protagonist Luo Feng only went to a few mission worlds. With the simulator in hand, the protagonist can go to other mission worlds to find opportunities, and the new content and plot can be used at will. Another point is that the protagonist's talent is not very good, worse than Hong and Thor. And Thor's talent is not ranked at all in Devour. The protagonist doesn't think about how to improve his talent. He always thinks about his desire to be strong all day long. He relies on the increasingly weak simulator and dreams of overpowering Luo Feng and becoming the number one genius in mankind. After the time traveler hit the earth, he didn't use much of the time traveler's talent to develop himself. The system flow system also becomes weaker and weaker as it goes up. Every time the protagonist wants to simulate a reward, he has to worry about which one should I choose. The article is really not interesting to read. If you want to attract readers and not say that the writing is more interesting than Swallowing the Starry Sky, then you have to have different plot content. The biggest reason why I can't watch it is that it's not attractive enough. Even if I watch Swallowing Starry Sky again, it will be more interesting than it is now. The above are just personal suggestions, please forgive me if they are wrong.

Damn, I don't know much. This is the first time I've read a novel like Shuicheng 90% of the whole chapter is talking nonsense.

Among the Devouring fandoms, I think this one is well-written, and the others are outrageous. If you don't believe it, you can go and read it. It's nothing. I don't understand. Have they watched Devouring Starry Sky? How many times have they read it? Everyone is talented. Even if they have clones, they create their own species. Obviously they know it. Those who have swallowed the original text all think that their clones are better than those chosen by Luo Feng. In the end, they exist to promote the plot, not for ability. WC, among those who watch Devour, who thinks that pretentiousness is handsome, and those who are high-end, and those who are brainless? ? ? Among the three clones of Luo Feng, the Golden Horn gives Luo Feng an extremely solid foundation and the ultimate inner world; the Space Assassin (can't remember, after all, it has been used too few times) makes up for the lack of Golden Horn's space talent and improves survivability; the Blood Sea: the only possibility in the original universe that can break through the gene 100,000 times. If there is no Blood Sea, in the original text Judging from the content, it is basically impossible to break through 100,000. All other clones have better substitutes, such as World Tree, Time and Space Talent, Half Lord of the Universe, which can quickly increase the strength to Lord of the Universe, and the foundation must be solid, the talent must be good, and it is the dual talent of time and space. It makes sense that one can match the two. Let's understand why the protagonist of this article is an original clone. After all, there is no shortage, so just pick one. To be honest, you can choose a pure talent type. There is no shortage of combat power and so on. The main character of this article lacks talent. I continue to complain about other fanfics. There are actually people who don't choose Blood Sea. Oh my god, you can't say that you are sure that you don't want it. Blood sea, just break through with divine power, you NB, if you don't come up and go through reincarnation, don't directly seize the original universe, you are really creating a clone for the plot, pretending to be and standing at the same time, just squeeze your own universe out of the original universe when you break through, become the original universe yourself, and then reincarnate to devour the plot, and induce other time travelers to come and have fun. Those who voted monthly, don't call me haha

Poison point: The protagonist shows talent, in the eyes of the outside world. The first time I practiced genetic energy, my weight increased by 8,000 kilograms. The only one in the world. It was previously suspected that it was impossible, but it turned around because the protagonist was 24 years old. Not 20 years old. So I was looked down upon. Said it was impossible to break through the God of War. Resource investment suddenly decreased. There is no mention of the quota for the basic training camp. What ancient routine? He is two years older, so he feels "unfortunate to everyone" and refuses to invest.

It feels a bit poisonous, especially the simulator, which dies at every turn. The simulated character still has no memory of the original owner, and his understanding fluctuates. The plan to upgrade with multiple copies of dragon blood is a bit unbearable. In the early stage, I tried not to upgrade, but in the later stage, the upgrade was inexplicable. There was a golden finger, and even Luo Feng caught up. The key is that it actually added elements of urban literature.

The author is not very good at dealing with the earth. In the original work, Luo Feng had no choice but to give the earth away when he was not strong enough, and he took it back with great difficulty. The protagonist has no shortage of strength but takes the initiative to divide the earth?

Look at 135-136 for yourself, you big holy mother!!! Others killed you once in the simulation, and then came to kill you again in reality. You dragged the relationship and asked someone to catch the other party, and there is an old man who is coy and unwilling to kill the other party like a little girl!!! You: a star! He: the domain lord who wants to kill you! Huh? ? ? Therefore, I suggest you, the author, travel back in time to live in Nanjing during the Anti-Japanese War!!! Also, I don't have a B number in my heart, but I still think that without the golden finger, I will never be surpassed by the geniuses in the universe... Let's take a piss and look at the reality!!! Without the golden finger, you are just an ordinary person who is unwilling to accept his fate!!! (For example: most of the walk-ins in Hengdian) The more you look at it, the more poisonous it becomes!!! However, the most poisonous thing is: Coty, the disciple of the Lord of Chaos, was granted the title of prince as soon as he broke through immortality, and then the author writes that the current number one genius among the world masters in the original secret realm is the one who breaks through immortality and is granted the title of king? ? ?                                                                                                                A big step forward than Cody, then why is he not the disciple of the Lord of the Universe? ? ? Are they not all disciples of His Holiness? ? ? A highly poisonous thing!!! Also, the most boring thing is fighting. No matter who you fight with, there will be a slap in the face, and in the end, you will stab the opponent's eyebrow across space. Some of the opponent's attack effects are omitted. Anyway, it is just a shot across the space and stab into the opponent's eyebrow... It's extremely boring!!! It's like copying and pasting. After reading more than 260 chapters, I finally lost my aesthetic fatigue and couldn't stand it anymore.

I've read almost 400 chapters. How should I put it? It's better than ordinary fan fiction. At least the sentences are smooth and not too poisonous. However, there are all kinds of little poisonous points that never stop. Although it also gives the protagonist a lot of golden fingers, the overall plot always feels like a 60- or 70-year-old man peeing, dripping, sticky, not smooth, and very alienating. The character design of the protagonist doesn't have much charisma either. I may have wanted to write about the growth process of an ordinary person after receiving a golden finger, but in reality it turned out to be a pot of uncooked rice, with all kinds of pretentiousness and pretentiousness. Everyone wants to read fan fiction and enjoy it. Even though my strength is not low after reading so many chapters, I still feel sick. In the end, it was concluded that there was something wrong with the character: neither a Virgin nor a devil, neither refined and self-interested, nor generous. She jumped up and down repeatedly, had no charm, and was nothing.

In these recent chapters, in order to conform to the original work, the protagonist has been deliberately offline. Tsk, boring

I suddenly thought of the most powerful period in the future of this simulator. When I have not become a true god, but I am almost certain to become a true god, every simulation can break through the true god once, and becoming a true god can understand the evolution of chaos! Coupled with the time acceleration of the black-patterned stone pillar, which is used to increase the number of times, as long as you have the confidence to break through to the True God, you can quickly brush your own law realm to the level of the Void True God, even the Eternal True God, and even be called a saint! I hope the author will not suppress cheats. The strength of the simulator is not exaggerated at other times. The author can go to the original article to read about the Chaos Evolution of breaking through the strongest. The effect is so powerful. With the simulator, you can use a large number of Chaos Evolutions, and your realm will soar to the sky.

There is a problem. If the talent is too poor, no matter how much time it takes, it will be useless. For example, Luo Feng can be immortal for several epochs, comparable to the Venerable, but even if he is an ordinary immortal (don't tell me that ordinary immortal talent is not good, no matter how poor the talent is, it is only one among countless people). Even if he practices for countless epochs, it is difficult to be granted a title, let alone the protagonist is a very ordinary person among the earth's people (first Zhang said that the talents are the same as the original work, and you can only reach the warrior level in your 20s), so it is very unreasonable. It is recommended that you can improve some of the talents in each simulation, otherwise it will always feel like there is a bug. I can't imagine that a genius can only barely comprehend the laws after spending millions and millions of years (the master of the class also has law affinity), and a barely warrior in his 20s can comprehend the laws of space in hundreds of years.

You don't need to be so detailed when writing about fan fiction. Most people who read fan fiction have basically read the original work. How many words does it take to write a novel like this?

This book is getting more and more stale, almost turning into a pretentious article, with various psychological activities of passers-by, various dialogues, and various exclamations of the protagonist. One chapter is not enough, and there are a few more. The protagonist shows fifth-level strength in the original universe, and the whole universe knows about it. As a result, no one in the universe sea knows about it. Now that the universe sea has spread, is there someone who doesn't know about it later to make the protagonist pretend to be a slap in the face? What is the use of writing so many psychological activities and dialogues of passers-by? It will only make readers upset after reading it. It is purely superficial. Tomato's treatment of passers-by in the original work is very good. It is basically dealt with in one stroke. It will not go into several chapters to describe the psychological activities and dialogue of passers-by. The rest is just dry information. This is one of the differences between master authors and novice authors. This book is one that I have been following for a long time. At the beginning, I felt that it had the potential of fairy grass. By the middle stage, I felt that it was no longer good and could only be regarded as food. The feeling it gives me now is that it can only be regarded as an ordinary novel. I wonder if it will turn into a poisonous weed later. I don't know if the author has changed, or if the author has exhausted his talent. It is a pity

Deliberately suppressing the protagonist's combat power, even Sirius can deceive the protagonist. The master of the universe in the original book has the perfect gene. The original Sirius only relies on the palace treasure for defense. The attack is terrible. This can deceive the protagonist. It's a fake perfect gene.

I've read about a hundred chapters, but I can't see why it's a good one. I guess it's the type that takes care of the protagonist. It started with Luo Feng, and then Golden Finger came out, and Luo Feng rarely came out. It's a type that goes its own way. When Goldfinger comes out, it keeps suppressing the protagonist. The plot is pretentious and stiff. It is true that the simulator Goldfinger has such a problem. The protagonist doesn't feel like he has much of his own personality. He's sometimes proud and sometimes humble. The author also wants to write about a strong man's heart and his epiphany, which is very stiff.

The field coverage is too great, isn't it? The qualifying round is only 800 meters? In the original book, the flying speed of the ninth-level stellar-level slaves is about 50,000 meters per second. Good guy, who can you fight with in this 800-meter ultra-micro small field? It's too petty, and is there any connection between the field and gravity? The higher the gravity, the smaller the coverage of the field. This... Doesn't the author feel awkward?

After reading so many Devouring fans, I can say that the three views of the protagonist in this book are the most suitable for the original work, and the degree of rigor is also quite high. It is difficult to find loopholes that are contrary to the original work. It can be seen that the author has put his heart into it, and the key writing style is quite good. There is no saying that we must support it, come on. My only regret is that there are too few to enjoy.

It's a rubbish novel. You are always looked down upon by others and you keep kneeling down to lick them. All benefits are given to Luo Feng first. If Luo Feng is the protagonist, the original novel is not 100 million times better than this nondescript novel.

How to put it, I hope that my book will be extremely consistent with the original work, including the timeline (for example, what happened at specific points in time in the original work, the auction, the start time of the genius battle, these things that the protagonist cannot change at all, must be consistent in time) There are also various characters (there will be relatively few original characters in this book. Maybe you will find out in the future that some important characters in this book have made a surprise appearance in the original work) During the recent period, I not only read the original text of Swallowing the Stars several times, but I also clicked and read many of the comments in the book. But there is still a lot that needs to be discussed, so I don't know how to write it. Let's discuss it with everyone here.

This talent should be of interest to the Lord of the Universe. . . .

Let's guess how many floors of Tongtian Bridge Yang Wu could reach in 30 years of the initial universe~