Devouring the Starry Sky: Receiving a Disciple and Rewarding You Ten Thousand Times

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Among many types of fan fiction, Swallowing Starry Sky is unique and unified in that it licks the original protagonist Luo Feng, and the homogeneity is extremely serious.

You give Luo Feng to Lingyu, and you get 10,000 Luo Feng😏

The venerable can directly exchange things in the clan treasure house. The returned items cannot be given away, but they can be directly contributed to the clan. We bought a heavy treasure when we were in the treasure house. We recruited a few more disciples of the King of Feng to give away the heavy treasure. There is nothing wrong with returning the treasure. Contributing the treasure to the ethnic group will benefit both the ethnic group and yourself. Then he continued to buy heavy treasures and give them to his disciples. Don't ask where the treasure I contributed came from. Is it wrong for me to contribute to the ethnic group? Who can become the master of the universe, who doesn't have a secret, and who doesn't have a fate that defies heaven? You asked me where the treasure came from, what do you mean, do you want to steal my opportunity, or want to find out my clone or trump card? Are you determined to be my enemy? Otherwise, what do you mean by asking me this question? Never mind the black or white cat, it is a good cat if it catches mice. Contributing treasures will allow the sages of the tribe or the Lord of the Universe to have more treasures to choose from. When the quantity is larger, the tribe can even lower the price, so that some poor lords can exchange for treasures. Questioning where the treasure came from, are you trying to steal my opportunity? If I really can't defeat you, do you want to force me to defect? Theoretically, the strongest people would not dare to ask others where their treasures came from. So, it is normal for equipment and the like to develop rapidly. Why are you so petty? Now he is a venerable person and has this qualification.

Recently it has become unreasonable. The protagonist's 10081 times genetic World Tree clone is still the Lord of the Universe, which is equivalent to 100.81 Times the Lord of the Universe. In addition, with the huge divine body, the will is the top overlord. Before your genes are perfect, you are the top overlord's will. Even if you use treasures, it is a bit too heavy. After all, 5000 times the World Tree is equivalent to 50 times the Lord of the Universe. It is said that the divine body and will will be stronger. If your genes are perfect, you will still be the top overlord's will. Then your breakthrough is not in vain.

The writing is very similar to the original work of Swallowing the Stars. After living for billions, tens of billions, trillions of years, the immortal, the Venerable, and the Lord of the Universe are still so mentally retarded. Communication is as clear and silly as students in school. After all, Tomato also likes to write about some weak-minded people, whose IQ is about the same as his own.

The setting of this book is also quite rigorous and is as close to the original work as possible. But I think the author still fell into a misunderstanding in the performance of the true god's combat power in the original universe. In the original work, in the original universe, only the attack power of the True God is limited to the peak of Level 6. The attack power of the True God is essentially the power from Level 7 or Level 8 upwards. After subtracting the weakening of treasures or environment, it is also locked at the peak of Level 6 (it will not fall to Level 5). In the original universe, the true gods rely on all attributes to exceed the upper limit, will not be breached, and can escape at any time through verbal spells. They are basically immortal. Because their attack power is limited, they will only be dragged and blocked by the same level 6 combat power, but they can still leave as they please. Studying the original work, we found that if the true god did not have such expressive power, he would not be called the strongest in the universe; only such a true god can explain why the race with the true god can be the strongest group of races in the original universe, but the race of the fifth-level top universe master (Northern Xinjiang Alliance and others) cannot. Don't you see, all the masters of the universe who walk alone are worried about being punished and afraid of finding a backer, and all the true gods who walk alone have a great mentality and wander around. Similarly, the true god who appears in the article to assassinate the protagonist enters the protagonist's kingdom, is suppressed by the World Tree, and is besieged by the Lord of the Universe. But I think even if the true god doesn't have the most powerful and precious armor, nothing will happen. It can be the same as the original work, and it can be written that he saw that the assassination was hopeless, so in order not to waste his efforts and not be embarrassed, he took the initiative to leave. But the photo god in the article was beaten to compromise? This gives me the feeling that the author is purely obscene. Original Case 1: The Ancestral God suppressed by the Supreme Treasure in the Ancestral God Sect + blessed by the original universe, faced with the True God who tried to break the restrictions on combat power under the suppression of the Original Universe, could only block but could not restrict the True God from leaving. Case 2: After Luo Feng received the Duandonghe inheritance, during the battle between Luo Feng and the 6th-level universe masters of the human race against the strongest demon race, the true god would only be knocked away, but his defense would not be broken at all, which shows that the defensive attributes of the true god were not suppressed by the original universe at all. In addition, under the suppression of Luo Feng's domain treasure, the True God of the Monster Race was still able to fight off Luo Feng's weakest clone (quasi-level 6) to save his subordinate Master of the Universe. His attack power was undoubtedly locked at the top of level 6 and has not been weakened. Case 3: The last battle between the races and the human race. Under the suppression of Luo Feng's blood sea clones and various treasures, a large number of the masters of the universe of all races were captured and killed. On the other hand, although the true gods encountered obstacles, they all dared to ignore the risks and forcibly rescued people. In the end, they all returned unscathed. This is a group of true gods who prioritize their own interests, which shows that they clearly know that their defense is high and nothing will happen to them. The above is the actual combat case in the original work that has the greatest attack power against the true god in the original universe (it should also be the apex), which can support my point of view. In addition, I think the suppression power of the Lord of Nine Netherworld is similar to that of Luo Feng's Blood Sea Clone. It belongs to the restricted area of ​​the Lord of the Universe, but it can only achieve the effects of siege, high-frequency attacks, and consumption of divine power, making the true god embarrassed but unable to stop the true god from running away. To sum up, in comparison, facing the true god, the protagonist's so-called perfect gene top universe overlord World Tree has the same restrictive ability as an onion~~ I can only say that the blood bar is thick and the blood regenerates quickly, so it cannot be killed. As for the dozen masters of the universe who are true gods wearing the most powerful armor? Tickle

Hong just lacks resources, but he never lacks qualifications, and his will is even more top-notch. The later the stage, the more emphasis is placed on will. The qualifications to become a true god are much better than those rotten fish and shrimps that the protagonist accepts.

The protagonist should go to Chaos City before becoming immortal, or join the Virtual Universe Company, otherwise it is unlikely that he will join the core circle of the human race after becoming immortal.

The author's next novel will be full of Siheyuan fans. He is so talented in writing about family life. Swallowing Starry Sky can also write about family life. It would be a pity not to write about Siheyuan.

It's uncomfortable to watch as soon as the combat power is suppressed. It was fine before the swallowing scene started. After Luo Feng came out, the pace became very slow. His realm was crushed by the Master of the Universe.

The clones in the original work of Swallowing the Stars are not very reasonable. Many sages have no clones, and even the Lord of the Universe has many clones. It stands to reason that the golden-horned giant beast is only a medium chance, so why not help seize a clone during the genius world master period. The genius who passed through the original Tongtian Mountain should be given a chance to clone himself.

1. No more training after immortality As Lu Qingshan's first disciple, Lei Ming allowed him to discover the master-disciple system, allowing his wasted life of ten thousand years to begin to move towards glory. As of now, eight hundred chapters have passed, and the protagonist is already invincible in the universe sea, the most powerful treasure wholesale, and has countless resources to cultivate the master of the universe. Even a watchdog feeds the master-of-universe level resources from time to time to cultivate the master of the universe's combat power. Qualifications and talents are all excuses. The qualifications of being born as a third-class genius in Lei Ming are much stronger than your original qualifications, Lu Qingshan. Lu Qingshan cheated on his own and made rapid progress. Instead, he symbolically gave this disciple a special life and a set of exercises. After a few tatters, he stopped paying attention. The treasures, cosmic sea qualification fruits, and beast god inheritance that are fed everywhere in the current version are all not given to thunder. 2. The number of characters appearing is not as many as that of the supporting character of the same name It clashes with the supporting character Lei Ming Zun in the original work. I searched the full text and found that the number of characters appearing in the title role of Lei Ming Zun is not as many as that of Lei Ming Zun. This is because there are more characters like Lei Ming Zun and Gan Wuzou. Although it is understandable that the traffic comes from the original character, it is too miserable to be the disciple who brings the greatest opportunity to the protagonist and is a mere tool.

The leader of the Qianwu Kingdom owes so much money, so every time he starts searching, attacking and withdrawing all his equipment, he only searches and attacks, but does not withdraw 😅

The first enjoyable part of swallowing is the Earth chapter, the second is the Peak Tournament, the third is the Realm Master chapter, and the fourth is the Master of the Universe. To be honest, I don't feel much about this book. I have no desire to read it since the Amplitude Treasure.

What are 503 and 504 written about? They are readers who are chasing after them step by step. These two chapters make the protagonist so frustrated. After so many years, this kind of pretentious writing has been scolded to the heavens. The author still writes

What's going on now? What can Luo Feng have to write? Look at Luo Feng. Isn't it good for me to read the original work? I don't have to pay extra.

Suddenly, I discovered that the cultivation environment of Swallowing Starry Sky was so good. The universe would grant eternal life if you broke through to a certain level. In other extraordinary worlds, if you dare to break through the level, you would be struck to death by lightning. Thunder tribulations would cause catastrophes in the world, and inner demons would block your way. There were also people who robbed high-level monks and strangled geniuses. The protagonists in other novels are reincarnated into a devouring world and cannot die laughing. If Han Li is reincarnated into a devouring world, he will wake up laughing even in his dreams. 🙂

The plot is still the best before Luo Feng appears, and the two little cotton-padded jackets of Lingyu and Lingxi are also very interesting (the genius battle in the early stage is really interesting, obviously much better than most of the Devouring Starry Sky fans who can only mechanically upgrade). After that, Luo Feng felt that the plot became more and more boring, relying more and more on most of the Swallowing Starry Sky fans who only get boring upgrades. Also, a lot of the plot revolves around Luo Feng, making it seem like Luo Feng is still the protagonist. Moreover, Luo Feng Wudi has long been tired of watching it. It doesn't matter that he is the protagonist in the original work, but he is still praised by various fans all day long. It really feels like Yaozu (I can't find a more appropriate adjective). Author, you should know that fans can set their own settings. As long as it is reasonable and logical, you can write whatever you want. This book is popular because of the original plot in the early stage, and it is not just about killing monsters and upgrading. Now the protagonist is basically the same as Luo Feng in Devouring 2, collecting materials, researching, upgrading, and invincible cycles. It seems reasonable, but in fact it has no plot and is boring. It's not as good as Lingyu Lingxi's epic level enhancement. The protagonist's disciple occupies the protagonist's current position (but not that strong, probably slightly stronger than the original Luo Feng). When encountering a serious crisis, the protagonist takes action and easily solves everything (instead of the traditional running around to get up and develop). If the author plans to end it at the ending of Swallow 1, then that's okay, it's almost over anyway. If you still want to continue writing, you might as well skip the plot of Swallow 2 completely (because the plot of Swallow 2 is originally a mess), and only refer to the characters and level settings in it. The rest, whether adapted or self-created, is much better (in addition, the origin continent setting of Swallow 1 is obviously different from that of Swallow 2, and Swallow 2 is completely a fantasy setting. I think the origin continent setting of Peeping Leopard in Swallow 1 is much better)

The hang-up is very big, and it is often suppressed in the later stage. This is the poisonous point of many novels, including this one.

I can see it, but it's a bit overwhelming.

Devouring fan series, this work definitely ranks first! The fault is leading, and the other Myriad Worlds Heritage, etc. Are really poorly written, and I can't stand them.

The secret method is based on the understanding of the law. Whether it is the top universe overlord or the universe overlord, the understanding of the law is exactly the same as that of the high venerable. How can there be a difference between the secret method of the venerable and the secret method of the overlord. According to what you said, the immortal secret method is divided into the peak secret method of the king, the ultimate secret method of the king, and the invincible secret method of the king. 😂😂😂

Come on, this fanfic of yours is the most palatable to me. The basic settings are relatively rigorous. It is considered a fine product. I will give you seven tickets this month. Let's see if I can add some details.

Some of the author's secondary settings are too unreasonable. For example, the protagonist picked up an Enlightenment Flower on the road to Jin's World, and the effect of using it is equivalent to a chaotic evolution. Do you think it's possible? If there was such a treasure, would the original Luo Feng's status in the world of Jin be lost? In the original work, Luo Feng went directly from the eighth level secret method to the tenth level after experiencing a chaotic transformation.

Don't even think about the monthly ticket. It's so useless. A True Yan King has no value to the protagonist at all. Breakthrough took nearly a page and a half to describe. It's so useless! He spent half a page describing the main character as a disciple, like Ling Yu, which is reasonable. Zhen Yan should be treated like Yin Mu. Just say that he has been promoted to the Lord of the Universe.

The protagonist takes Hong as his disciple, but he never appears, let alone bestows treasures 😅😅😅😅😅

There's nothing interesting about the recent chapters, it feels like they were forced in... Not interesting.

Come on, author!

I saw killing monsters and killing insects. Killing the machine clan, I think it is in the later stage, aren't these all your subordinates? What's the point of killing them? The novel cannot be broken down by thinking about it. 😅😅😅😅😅