Map of the Ten Thousand Realms of the Heavens

Master Lingzhi was still able to interact with Qiu Qianren and smiled.

The writing is pretty good, but I wish each world could be longer and not too short, so as not to turn into a running account. In addition, if the main world can be written well, it will be very brilliant. The collision between the martial arts of other worlds and the world of cultivating immortals based on spiritual roots is now a great start. I hope it won't collapse.

I also feel toxic. If you don't have the brainpower to write a plot, don't write a useless story. The protagonist's previous life was in the era of information explosion, and this life is in the world of cultivation. After several decades, why is it that in the Luding World, he still behaves like he is ignorant of the world? He must not have the intention to harm others, and must have the intention to guard against others. Now a primary school student can understand how he survived (the writing is too stupid)! There is no need to write about Deer Cauldron and Shooting Condor in the original version (the starting point is so high). It is still interesting to just write about Fengyun.

Why are there so many perverts in Qidian? Do you like putting an old man in the protagonist's head? Abandon the pit! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

The settings can be changed. The pig's foot is a second-hand travel prop from the previous time traveler, which is still broken. It has also been worn in the world that the previous time traveler passed through. Who knows if you will meet someone you like in the future and find out that the previous pig's foot slept with it 😓. Besides, after the pig's foot has raised the system, how will it be connected to the previous pig's foot. . So many holes have been dug. This cannot highlight the unique mystery of pig's feet, and the sense of substitution is not good.

Are you writing about the most delinquent person in the world?

Does the protagonist have a problem with his IQ? ! ! !

The protagonist's last life was in vain... This introduction is very problematic. If you don't have spiritual roots in the main world and you can't practice, why should you go to the fairy world...

Please update the world of Elf Dream Ye Luoli

Let's break up. Let's break up. Eunuch.

When I saw Lu Ding Ji taking out the marrow-cleansing pills, I knew they were poisonous. How many people would take them out. They would take a few pills at a time and run away without any explanation. Ten years later without clear explanation!

Are you a eunuch?

Isn't it bad to have birds? Why cut it?

There hasn't been an update for two days. What's going on? The author is quarantined

Martial arts practice in the world of immortality. , This is not bad, for example, the Qi refining realm corresponds to the innate and acquired internal energy, the Qi training realm can instantly kill the acquired Qi, but is weaker than the innate, while the innate cannot use magic weapons, and is a little worse than the weapon refining. Such a system highlights the respective advantages of weapon refining and martial arts training, which will be very interesting later.

Personally, I suggest that you control the length of each time and not drag it out too much. Otherwise, it won't matter whether you go to the next world or not, and there will be one world that takes a very long time, which is boring. It would be better to have more worlds in Zhutianliu, and you don't have to clear every level to get some soy sauce.

What is the protagonist doing in Shooting Condors? It's practicing exercises, learning martial arts, and fighting for hegemony. I can't figure out what he wants to do there.

I don't know if this book can survive 🙂

Come on, author🥺🥺