Reincarnation Paradise: The Silver Moon Returns

After reading 100 chapters, here are my thoughts. First, reincarnation fanfiction is difficult to write because there's no real opportunity to obtain it; it's basically about following the instructions of the Paradise and being a tool. Reincarnation Paradise is famous because of Mosquito's writing skills; otherwise, the reincarnation system itself is quite dry.

Has the author considered super-beast armor? Would a simple ability-locking armor (top, bottom, helmet, shoes) solve the problem? Or could it be a growth-type item in a fantasy world? Would the issue of servants also be resolved with the emergence of super-beasts? Could it be a mount that can also fight, or could it be converted into a bow instead of a robot mode? 🤔🤔

Could the male lead be portrayed as more composed and wise? There's too much internal monologue. All the male leads in Chinese animation are the same. Even Pipi Xiao, who has been around for three or four thousand chapters, doesn't have any internal monologues.

There are currently 100 chapters in the draft. I will try my best to update two or more times a day, with a minimum of 4,000 words. Because I am a university student, I may update less sometimes due to busy schedules. The current world plan includes: First order Silvermoon Continent - Mad Moon Island (Trial World) Mortals in the Apocalypse Ace Censor Spirit Master Calamity Star (Tier 1 Trial)

The plot is alright, but the combat feels more like skill-based combat than technique-based. In the original story, it seems like characters only acquire techniques after reaching level 5, but the protagonist in this book has them from level 1, which is acceptable. However, the combat itself doesn't feel like technique-based combat; it feels more like skill-based combat.

Why do I always feel like the main character is so weak?

The combat is almost entirely turn-based, with attacks relying entirely on skills. And they dare to portray the protagonist as a mere practitioner of techniques? His attributes and skills are so advanced, yet he ranks so low in arena battles and frequently loses. He's so much better developed than Bai Ye, yet so weak. Despite having such a huge advantage as the protagonist, he's only slightly stronger than a weakling. It's a truly poorly written story.

I just want to know why a greatsword character isn't built around powerful, sweeping attacks, but rather agile and dexterous ones.

I've watched some. The male protagonist in the early episodes was the kind of normal, honest, ordinary person that's rarely seen in the cycle of reincarnation. But it actually makes sense. What was Xiao Ge's initial identity? Can the protagonist compare? He was just a pitiful office worker; we can't expect too much. So, looking at it this way, it's quite reasonable (scratching head).

The data is a bit messy, but everything else is fine. Just don't overemphasize reality. Adding the Cleaner is pointless; you could learn from Bai Ye's decisiveness and use him only as a transition. As for the protagonist's swordsmanship, I feel he could seek guidance from the Wolf or Bear schools in The Witcher, rather than a sword immortal.