Reincarnation Paradise: The Silver Moon Returns

After reading a hundred chapters, tell me your feelings. First of all, it is difficult to write a reincarnation fanfic because there is no chance to get it. Basically, you just listen to the instructions of the paradise and do the tasks and be a good tool. Samsara Paradise is famous because of Mosquito's writing skills, otherwise the system of reincarnation itself would be boring. The writing is still there but not much, and the setting of the protagonist is very awkward. Because even the original novel is still enjoyable in nature, and although this one has a strong sense of reincarnation, it is obviously not exciting enough. The performance of the protagonist is at the level of a high-level trash fish of the same level who can resist Bai Ye for a single attack, but will definitely get the second blow. There is also the protagonist's Silver Moon inheritance, which adds some life, resilience, and Silver Moon enchantment. The attack power is seriously insufficient. This setting is fine for group play, but a lone wolf is looking for death, because in the early stage, if you face a peer who cannot be beaten, you can just surround him. When facing a BOSS, even Bai Ye will not fight the BOSS. Compared with blood volume and sword skill talent, this thing is good in the mining paradise, but useless in reincarnation. Who knows that the skill type is the big one in the later stage, but everyone does not choose it because there is a high probability that he will not survive the later stage. Bai Ye can do it because the inheritance of extermination is equally powerful in the early stage, and the protagonist's hip-stretching Silver Moon inheritance really makes people think that he will not survive the early stage. All in all, the protagonist is average and has no characteristics, the setting is average and has no characteristics, and the storyline is average and has no characteristics. The purpose of Samsara Paradise is to raise Gu, the Gu King (Bai Ye) is the big one, and the mediocre trash fish can only be used as feed.

Has the author considered the super beast's armament? The problem can be solved by making a special lock armor (tops, bottoms, helmets, shoes). Or can the idealistic world be turned into growth props? The problem of followers coming out of the super beast can also be solved. Can it be used as a mount and still fight? Or can it become a bow without the robot mode? 🤔🤔

Can the male protagonist be described as calmer and wiser? There are too many internal complaints. The male protagonist of the Chinese comic has a moral character, but he has not complained internally for three or four thousand chapters.

There are currently one hundred chapters in the draft, and I will try my best to update it twice a day or more, with a minimum of 4,000 words. Because I am a college student, sometimes I may be less busy with classes. The currently planned worlds are: First Order Silver Moon Continent·Crazy Moon Island (Trial World) Mortals in the End of the World Ace Censor Spirit Controller Disaster Star (First Order Trial) Level 2 Scorched Earth Continent (refer to ARK·Scorched Earth) Undead Battlefield (War for the World) Panling Ancient Territory Spirit Controller·Neutral Zone (Level 2 Trial) Level 3 JOJO·Golden Wind Distortion·Underground (ARK·Distortion) Land of Dreams and Nightmares (Proof of the Strong) Apas Continent (Native World, Evil God) Because I am not very interested in Japanese comics, I write more about Chinese comics, because I know that most people don't read Chinese comics, so I try to transition to the original world as quickly as possible I hope more people can read it 😭

The plot is okay, but the battle is not technical, but skill-based. In the case of Pipixiao, it seems that the technical moves are only available after level 5. The main character has it in the first level. But as for the battle, it doesn't feel like a technical type, like skill-based. The skills are released one by one, and there is no feeling of technical combat. And if the protagonist is a big sword, it may be that the big sword character Pipi Xiao has fought is too deep. The big sword character in the secret world. The sword, the old knight who drew the world, and the moon wolf, these words are all open and closed, the big sword is front-facing, and the hegemonic body is open. What do you say about the protagonist? It is a wandering combat type. It feels like the weapon used is not a big sword. Without this feeling, the author's writing is still okay. What about the battle scenes? It's a bit like what Pipi Xiao said in the first ghoul world, which only uses skills. I hope the portrayal of battles can be strengthened in the future.

Why do I always feel that the protagonist is so weak?

The battle is almost a turn-based one, and the attack method relies entirely on skills. How dare you write the protagonist as a skill? His attributes and skills are all so advanced, he is so far behind in competitions and still loses so often, his development is so good compared to Bai Ye, but he is still so weak. As the protagonist, he has such a huge advantage but is slightly better than a weakling. The writing is really a failure.

I just want to know why a character with a big sword doesn't use wide open and close but has a dexterity route.

Watched some. The early male protagonist is the kind of normal, honest ordinary person that is rare in Samsara Paradise. But it can actually be explained. What is Brother Xiao's initial identity? Can the protagonists compare? I'm just a poor social animal, so my demands can't be too high. So it seems more reasonable when you look at it this way (scratching your head)

The data is a bit messy, but the rest is fine. Just don't write too much about reality. It's useless to join the scavengers. You can learn from Bai Ye to be decisive and overdo it. As for the swordsmanship of the protagonist, I feel that I can find guidance from the wolf or bear faction in The Witcher instead of the swordsman.