Immortal Road Evergreen

Why hasn't it been updated today?

What's the use of a Foundation Establishment Pill with a 10% breakthrough rate? It sells more than 10,000 spirit stones. And the item level, first class, first class, first class, what the hell?

Author, you have a lot of problems with this novel. The description of the environment is rather weak. Take the most recent chapter 42, for example. You describe the section where the cave is opened, how the left side of the mountain tilts, and which direction the right side tilts. This section is too cumbersome and misses the key points (the concentration of spiritual energy and formations). It is written dryly. The biggest problem is that the protagonist is too distracted. It's like having ADHD. If you go to this place to chat with people and make a few comments, you don't look like a native, but like a funny person who traveled through time. In the conversation, you have to focus on the key points (interest relationships). Why do people treat you well? Because you can make elixirs. This can be justified, so why bother with hypocritical politeness? In the last chapter, you wrote about two people praising each other again and again. Socializing is just a click away, and everything goes without saying anything.

I think the description of the previous life Yuanying is very unreasonable. The cause of death is so vague that it is difficult to relate. There is no difference between the description of the experience of becoming a Yuanying and the description of Cheng Zhuji. To put it bluntly, it is just a running account.

Finally, it's not a waste of ridicule. It's better not to have a female protagonist. It's okay to have a furnace. There is no woman in my heart. I draw my sword and it's natural.

Keep it up, author, it's very interesting.

I came in after reading the title of the book, and when I saw the chapter names, I felt a little nervous. The first three to five chapters were about building the foundation, and the next three or five chapters were about the Golden Pill Cave Palace, and then the Life and Creation Pill. Before it even started, there was a hundred-story building, so I left decisively.

Only one chapter per day is a bit short!

Who is the first?

Hello comrades

Wow, new author, come on Dame 😡😡😡

Grabbed a sofa

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(I haven't read it yet) The [pattern] of the reincarnated strong man is the most difficult to write. Since he is the Nascent Soul Lord, a strong person should have the courage and mind of a strong person.

The first chapter is unnatural, as if it was arranged by someone. Too many coincidences

I haven't read it yet, so I'd like to ask if this is another crappy start with four spiritual roots and five spiritual roots? After reading the table of contents, Chapter 7 kills the foundation building. Is that so cool?

I've written about swords all over the place, and I'm bored just looking at them. Is there anything new?

Come on, take care of the seedlings. The author can post recommendations in other novel groups.

The setting is too awesome, and it's not as good looking as SM. Anyway, they are all crushed.

The two chapters about becoming a Taoist couple with Taihua lacked a bit of foreshadowing and were a bit abrupt. Here are four chapters to chart it slowly, which should make it better!

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