Deep-Sea Survival: A Submarine from the Start

A rare case of deep-sea diving syndrome and deep-sea navigation. I believe in you, keep going! Although I can't write novels, I've been reading them for a while now and have summarized some of the pitfalls of the road trip genre. I hope this will be helpful to authors. 1. An endless stream of beautiful female characters.

The spaceships launched by aliens must be very advanced, right? Don't they have these features?

After thinking about it, I feel I should recommend this book and write a review. At first, I thought this book was no different from other "everyone's a powerhouse + showing off + cheat codes" stories. But after reading around chapter 10, I realized this book is quite good! Unlike other books, it features cheat codes, but not absolute invincibility.

Goodness gracious! Following sky islands, islands, trains, highways, ships, warships, little stars, planets, caves… now we have submarines! What will they come up with next? ε(*´･ω･)з

The premise is novel, but it's rather uninteresting. Even in a story about surviving on an alien abyss submarine, they still resort to the nationalist tropes favored by online games from over a decade ago. I personally dislike this constant hype and fervor surrounding nationalism, although the author would have missed a significant portion of the plot if they hadn't included it.

Let's put some pictures under the concept.

Forget it, I'll just delete the book. I really couldn't stand chapter 13 anymore. It wasn't particularly bad, just disgustingly padded.

At the start, you can exchange one piece of fish for 10 pieces of iron. What were you thinking? Others have a fleet of 10 people and can't even catch a single fish? You might as well name the book "Global Survival: Only I Have Fish." Just like in a single-player game, everyone else is a husky.

These kinds of novels always have one problem: everyone except the protagonist is an idiot, and the transactions within them are ridiculously absurd.

The subject matter is good, but the writing is really bad. Just write a normal survival story, and it will do well. Instead, you add all sorts of random things, making it neither sophisticated nor rustic, which is annoying to read.