Deep-Sea Survival: A Submarine from the Start

The rare abyssal syndrome and deep sea trek, I hope you will come on, come on. Although I don't know how to write novels, I have had some time to read novels. I have summarized some of the poisonous points of highway traffic. I hope it will be useful to the author. 1. Endless beautiful characters. Believe me, most of the readers who come to this genre of novels are not the kind of idiots who come here to read this. Moreover, there are no cosmetics and rest meals in the background of highway traffic. The female characters are very clean, and it is basically impossible for that kind of exquisite beauties to exist. And once you write this kind of character, you will inevitably resort to tricks. What is particularly taboo is forcing a beautiful woman to join the team or have a long-term relationship. It is better not to write it, and just use some reliable bearded uncle depending on the background. 2. Other players are more lucky than the protagonist. First of all, what we want to make clear is that what everyone wants to see is that the protagonist has a sense of superiority. You can occasionally get rare items from passers-by, but a certain passerby repeatedly reaches rares and becomes a regular merchant. I can only say that he is the stinky tofu in Coke. He cannot kill people but is disgusting and unreasonable. For example, a certain novel has a coquettish girl with coquettish hair who keeps getting rares, which is criticized by readers. 3. The official organization repeatedly appears to be unclear. Needless to say, Chunwei Guangzheng is not right. It is too realistic and easy to 404. Don't pay attention to those readers who say what will happen to the official in this situation and why there is no official organization. They say both pros and cons. Those who are the first to report anything they don't like. The author takes advantage of the fact that it is still early, and it is better to change to an individual mining alliance or fishing team than an official organization. 4. Excessively enhance the world view. The setting should be stable, the combat power should not be exaggerated, and do not make some false and empty battle rules all day long. Just use the old gods and other things as a background board, a lesson learned from a certain road flow. 5. Our Lady gives you resources, and exchanges survival products for garbage. There's not much to say. The protagonist's behavior of controlling the price of fish to keep it from being inflated is considered human conscience in highway traffic. Don't give away resources or anything just to set up a foreshadowing. 6. Wait until you remember before writing.

The ships sent by aliens must be very advanced, right? Isn't that what they have?

After thinking about it for a while, I thought I would recommend this book and write a review~ At first I thought this book was no different from other books about everyone + installing It is different from other books in that it is cheating, but it is not absolutely invincible. It is also not like other books that deliberately match the number of opponents and then forcefully use the numerical advantage to suppress the protagonist in order to deliberately suppress the protagonist~ The story also clearly states that if you have more people, it is not really true. The invincible and crazy Rush B can be used to suppress it. A good example is the military fleet that was almost wiped out by an abnormal object before and the preparations were made in the early stage (they encountered a small waterloo in the painted skin...) And the protagonist is not the same. I'm crazy about Gou. Personally, I hate Gou's books. They're very wretched and timid. I feel like all the people in the world except some beautiful teammates are shark-maniacs and Z-maniacs. The bonus points are the characters of the protagonist and supporting characters. The protagonist is an ordinary person and a dragon country. Common people should be cautious but not timid, kind but not ignorant, brave but not arrogant. Helping others to the best of your ability is kindness. The supporting character is grateful and repays kindness after being rescued. This is what ordinary people should be like~ It is even more praised in transactions and dealing with others! The protagonist has the ability and dream to change the unfair market. This is justice. Not only that, but after gaining fame, he still worries about not being able to sell his goods? This is a win-win situation! When encountering a foreign enemy, in addition to the fear that an ordinary person should have at the beginning, there is also wisdom and finding a way to solve it, and then later doing good deeds. It writes what an ordinary person should be like, instead of winning by laughing and joking. , I have no ability, so I rely on cheats. The most important thing is that in addition to the protagonist with this cheat, other survivors can also live, and they also have opportunities and development. In many books, the protagonists are cheating and they still have a hard time surviving. I want to ask: Where are the others? Um? I have played 1-2 similar games, both on Steam. One is SOMA (I have all the English versions, I really don't know what it is called in Chinese...), And the other seems to be called Subnautica. I haven't played much, but I can feel the oppression and magnificence of the deep sea! The description of the deep sea in the book is basically quite realistic. Is it depressing? It is indeed very depressing, especially for people with cabin phobia and deep sea phobia, but it is also a nightmare, but so is the magnificence of the deep sea. The light formed by the luminous moss and jellyfish groups at the bottom of the deep sea shines on the fish, or the dim light emitted by the reflective place in the distant trench, and large marine creatures slowly swim by from time to time! PS: Since they are all novels, how about raising a pet? Fishmen, dolphins, octopuses, etc. You can also raise a jellyfish! If you feel okay, you can hug the head of the big jellyfish and it will be very comfortable!

Good guy, after sky islands, islands, trains, roads, boats, battleships, small stars, planets, caves... There is another submarine! What else can come out next time ε(*´･ω･)з

The subject matter is novel, but quite boring. Even though the Alien Abyss submarine has survived, it still engages in the nationalism that was the favorite in online games more than ten years ago. I personally don't like nationalism and having to fight for blood every day. Although if the author didn't write it, a large part of the plot would be missing.

Under the concept of putting some pictures

Forget it, just delete the book. I can't stand Chapter 13 anymore. It's not poisonous, it's just that the water is disgusting.

Just at the beginning, a piece of fish meat is exchanged for 10 irons. What do you think, 10 people in a fleet of others can't even catch a fish? Let's just call the book, Global Survival, Only I Have Fish and Meat. It's just like a stand-alone game, everyone else is just bad.

There is always a problem with this kind of novels. Except for the protagonist, everyone else is a fool, and the transactions in it are completely wrong.

The subject matter is good, but the writing is really bad. If you write a good survival flow normally, the results will be good, but you have to add messy things to it, making it look foreign and unsophisticated. It will make you upset just looking at it.