The Film and Television Tie System of Time Travel and Rebirth

Oh my god, I can't stand listening to it anymore. There are too many words like "That's..."... Does the author usually talk like this? This is usually the case when no one talks, so it's too hard to hold back!

I really can't stand it any longer, my sentences are all illogical.

There are a lot of them, and the author can't even make the sentences fluently.

Author, don't you even read what you write?

In reality, the author also talks like this, that means he is a sissy hahaha

Author, have you ever counted how many "Isn't that right?" You've written? It affects the sense of reading so much that I didn't even finish the first chapter.

Almost every paragraph has the word "" at the end

The author needs to improve his word choice. When I read The Red Mansion, I really struggled to read it. There were too many words like "when" and the writing was stumbling. I hope that after the author finishes writing, he will read it again from the perspective of the reader. No matter what, it's good to be able to write articles, so keep working hard

This book looks twisted, very awkward. The plot and concept are both good. The fault lies in the writing and dialogue. There are too many modal particles, and the system dialogue will dissuade you. I feel like it should be pretty good if you really look into it. It's a pity that I can't substitute. What a pity

Even after taking it, there are a lot of system explanations, the fucking system is your nanny, and Shennongjia can't support you all the time.

Can there be less of that? Every sentence contains that and of. It affects listening to the book too much.

There are too many same words. Now I just listen to books. The experience is too bad.

It turns out it's not my fault alone! This kind of ability to choose words and form sentences is so unusual that I can't stand it!

I persisted and read four chapters, but I still gave up😰

How old is the author? Is he still a ghostwriter? How did he learn to use words and sentences? Are you a fluent reader? You can express the meaning in one sentence but it is still not fluent after eight sentences, so no one can understand it.

It's too ink-written, the thoughts are so complicated, there are so many psychological descriptions, and all the trivial matters are written down. It can't reach that level. It's just superfluous.

I was put off by looking at the catalogue. It was all "of"

Water word count: when, when, when, when, when, when, when, can it be deleted? Don't you know how uncomfortable it is to listen to novels? After listening to a novel, I compared it to your novel

Oops, I'm going to go, I really can't stand it anymore. I can't stand it until I read two chapters.

There are so many "that" and "that", do you start to forcefully reduce the word count in the first chapter?

I read a few pictures and wanted to continue reading, but they were too wordy. Every time I interacted with others, I had to write about my own psychological activities. How can there be so many psychological activities that require so many narrations? I don't know if it's because of the word count, Luo Liba Suo, there's no sense or sense of substitution at all, and I don't know which person you use as the protagonist.

It should have been written by AI. It has no logic and is full of bad sentences.

Bibi Lai Lai Bip Lai Lai, author, have you read it yourself? What did you write? It's better not to write it. 🙂 Why do you feel like you are playing psychological games?

Written by a Northeasterner, what the hell, through the phone screen I could see the author pinching his orchid fingers, twisting his willow waist, speaking in a sissy voice with a shrill voice, and saying nonsense.

I usually listen to novels, but the sentences in this novel are not fluent, so I came here to post a book review because I feel disgusted.

The author definitely failed in Chinese when he was studying. Doesn't read smoothly

I regret not reading the comments. They are unsightly. It looks like a split personality, talking to oneself, and acting like an opera. It's so rude.

Speechless. . . The water number is like this, making it extremely difficult and uncomfortable to read 😡

This is too long-winded, especially the introduction of the system and the main character's ramblings, leaving me speechless.

Every sentence has at least one yes, one, which is awesome. I can't read it directly.