Uncle Jiu's Chief Disciple

Very good idea, I like it very much

The subject matter is very well written. It's a pity that the author's writing style is not very good. Come on, author. I'm going to meet you by chance. I'll give you my recommendation vote.

It's long-winded, full of useless introductions, the protagonist's behavior is startling, and I'm convinced that he can spell out all the spells by chanting them. I don't recommend it, it's a complete waste of time.

Chapter 11: Persuading people to quit. Before rebirth, those in their thirties were basically living with a dog. What kind of anecdotal plot is there? What is the realm of Uncle Nine? Is there someone at the master level? Is it easy for him to beat Mr. Ren? Still flying stiff. . . How did you get into the tomb with a one-meter earth evasion shield? I really can't bear to complain, the author should be named Xingxiu Old Monster

Come on and update, it's best to develop the sect to the modern age

It's well written. The episode about Uncle Nine in the front should be the era of national chaos in the middle.

The idea is great, but the writing is a bit poor

The author can change the writing a little bit, so that no one will read this book.

The creative idea is good, but the writing style, have you not graduated from elementary school?😰😰😰

It seems that Ren Zhuzhu and Jingjing are the same actor! When I saw Jiale married Jingjing. I feel like the main character has a green head. It would be great to replace Ren Tingting earlier. There are too many books where she is the heroine. Why do so many people think Yu Saifeng is beautiful? Why do I feel that I am not a goddess? The actresses who played Ren Zhuzhu and Jingjing were much prettier than her. 😍 Have you seen any peaches or jade peaches? How beautiful they are!

I really can't bear it anymore. The writing is so poor, the plot is in one step and nothing is explained clearly. It would be better to start with the plot in detail. One final rant. "What the hell!!!"

I am a legend before reality 5111 go 11 uh 6 kiss 11 I go I go 1... Good 11 days

I have just read more than 20 chapters, and I feel that this book is like a farming novel (I clicked on it because I thought a fairy would fight magic weapons). I felt pretty good after reading these chapters, but the complaints in the chapters are really annoying. In the fantasy world, if you have spiritual energy, you can live for a year by pulling Ganoderma lucidum, which is not the real world. I feel that the author likes to play farming games very much, because the author focuses on describing the types of spiritual plants and various animals obtained (obviously a collector, good review!), The adaptability of the space (thought carefully, at least not mindlessly stuffing them), and "giving gifts" (giving gifts increases favorability, which is basically the case in farming games). For me, who rather likes farming games, it feels quite interesting. And the author has thought carefully about many details. But there are also many shortcomings. For example, as I said at the beginning, I originally clicked in because I wanted to see various fantasy battles of immortal warriors. In this regard, at least in the first twenty chapters I read, the author basically omitted the battle scenes and the adventure process (it feels like a log in a farming game, so some people say it is like a running account). I hope that the author can try to add some adventure scenes in the future, so that people can feel the thrilling and ups and downs of the adventure process. Instead of being as calm as the lake (to liven up the atmosphere) There is also the author's complaints mixed in the article. It's not that it's not good, because the author is obviously using it to explain the various behaviors of the protagonist. But if you occasionally complain about it, the readers will at most complain about you grabbing the lines and complaining all the time. In this case, some readers who are full of energy and can't vent their anger can only get full of anger and attack every aspect of you with their angry words. Moreover, it also makes the experience of some readers who like to bring in the protagonist a bad experience (I personally don't like to bring in the protagonist, isn't it fun to read the story?). It is recommended that the author change the way of explanation.

A full blow of Xiantian Lingbao has a power of 122,600 kilograms, which is equivalent to one yuan... Which is 61 tons. The damage is not as bad as being hit by an overloaded and speeding garbage truck. Your Xiantian Lingbao is the Pinduoduo version.

Originally, I could support reading it, but it turned out to be a stud harem story. Currently, the two girls in the Ren family have taken it, and there will probably be more in the future. Everyone, you can decide what to do, but I have withdrawn it. I can't stand it anymore.

It is rare to write about Jiu Shu's disciples who founded a sect because they were poor.

There is no logic at all in this book, mmp, where is the final method mentioned? The Foundation Establishment Masters are inferior to dogs. The Foundation Establishment Masters are all over the place. Dogs have no skills. The Foundation Architects are a batch of weak people. They will be locked up and starved for a day and will become weak. It's really disgusting. The invulnerable Foundation Architects are actually weakened like this. A little cult disciple can build a foundation at the age of thirty. There is no logic at all. If you read too much, your IQ will really drop. You can read this kind of book in Sanjiang. It seems that the platform of Qidian is really going downhill.

I don't know what the significance of the protagonist's establishment of this sect is. Everything is made by the protagonist, he does everything, and he provides resources and everything else. What's the use of these people?

What I watched before was okay, but since the plot of Renjiazhen started, I couldn't stand it anymore. Farewell!

I just saw so many dedicated people in book reviews! Hehe! What's wrong with harem stories? A harem is not a stud, don't get confused. It's not that harem stories are bad, it's just that some authors can't write them well! For those who say they are disgusted with harems, in reality, the red flag at home may not fall, but the colorful flags are flying outside! When playing with the mistress, I didn't see you going home because of disgust. Now I go online to pretend to be innocent and single-minded.

This is really the protagonist of the ironclad Ren Tingting Liu Shui.

If I had my own space and the flow of time was different, first, I would definitely let the space grow and collect all the species in the world. Second, I must practice Taoism, because the speed of time must be faster than everyone else in the space. Because of the aura, the Taoism of the outside world is not visible, because the aura gradually dissipates. Many sects' secret methods of cultivating immortals are functionally deleted versions, because they cannot be practiced without aura. The protagonist can collect these skills, plus practice the Shangqing Great Cave Manual and the speed of time for ten or eight years to be absolutely invincible in the world. There is enough aura in the space and an endless supply of mana, so there is no problem in collecting the skills. Third, if I practice Changsheng, I will travel around the world, the people will change, the people will be in poverty, many people will sell their sons and daughters, and there will be countless little girls with good bones and good physiques. If I receive them in the space, if I get too many, I might even be able to have a royal girl ascend in three thousand days. In this way, the earth and law will bring wealth, and the earth will bring its own space, sufficient spiritual energy, and an inexhaustible supply of elixirs and spiritual materials. Dharma: Collect the skills of all schools in the world to supplement your own and lead to the great road. Couple: After being raised as an adopted little girl, she has the magic power to cleanse her menstruation and cut her marrow. She is fragrant, white and tender, and is perfect for both cultivation and cauldron. Cai: It's not enough to travel around the world and collect treasures from heaven and earth! ! ! ! Therefore, the protagonist forcibly participates in the plot, lowering his own grade, and accepting the heroine lowers his horizons. On the great road of cultivating and becoming an immortal, the relationship between master and apprentice is just an embellishment. It is enough to give some compensation and understand the cause and effect. If you want to engage in plot, go to Liaozhai, go to A Chinese Ghost Story, or any other world where you can find some world with fighting power, treasures, and benefits. As mentioned above, the author had a golden idea, but it turned out to be a bad hand of cards. It was so pulpy.

This is so damn fast, all the innate spiritual treasures have come out, and there is enough space in the early stage, and there are also innate spiritual treasures. There is also a deadlock, and he is still a stud.

I saw it in Sanjiang. I went in and read it for a while. I was speechless that this kind of book could be published in Sanjiang. The books from ten years ago were better than this one and full of poisonous points. At this pace, the protagonist Cheng Tianshi could even arm-wrestle with Sanqing. The author's background is so strong!

I had no sense of immersion, and I read more than a dozen chapters out of boredom. I thought the author's writing had become a little better, but it turned out that he started to accept girls, and he even accepted three. Later, I became someone else's nanny. Since I am the world's top writer, why do I do everything myself? Then there are so many Jindan stage monsters for you to fight? The realm is written but there is no matching strength. According to the realm of cultivating immortals, an opponent in the Golden Core stage who is in the Foundation stage will still be grinding for a long time. What else is written about the Foundation stage being fooled by the speed of the Golden Core stage. In terms of strength, shouldn't the Golden Core stage be able to instantly kill the Foundation stage? Why use speed to fool others? Moreover, it is still the foundation-building period for poisonous insects that are not good at killing. Almost didn't send me away...

Uncle Jiu is not the leader of the Maoshan sect, so where can we start talking about the leader's disciple? Just by your mouth?

It was fine before, but I lost the taste after accepting Ren Tingting. Now I have to accept Ren Zhuzhu, which is even more painful... Author, are you going to write a supernatural romance novel?

The protagonist is really too saintly, and I personally really dislike this kind of saintly character. Is it necessary to waste resources on an Adou like Qiu Shengwencai who cannot be supported? As a leader, he has no dignity at all. Uncle Jiu makes the decision on everything.

The first few chapters are fine. After ten chapters, there are Pangu tribe and innate spiritual treasures. You can go to the Great Desolate Gods to play, right? The highest one here in Uncle Jiu is not a god. Even holding a spiritual treasure is enough.

In Chapters 170-172, Pig's Foot is a monk in the Golden Core Stage. He beat the Miao clan leader who was in the 3th Foundation Establishment stage for a long time and couldn't kill him. During the fight, he also beeped a lot and was extremely poisonous!