Immortal Cultivation: Eternal Life and Immortality

Killing is a small way, immortality is the right way, That's right, but cultivating immortality only involves these few things,

The protagonist falls into coma at every turn. I think there must be similar scenes later. I don't want to write about the heroine in the longevity novel. She is really connected and speechless.

What kind of cultivation is this??? Will your lifespan be shortened every time you practice a spell?? How do you ask others to practice? There is something wrong with your setting

I have been living in the mines for thirty years, and my character is still weak.

After all, it's mortal abortion + immortality, so it's better not to write it like a romance. Fang Yu should just play a supporting role and write a touching story and finish it as soon as possible. I suggest you don't force the matchmaking. It's a bit poisonous. It's not that there is no emotion but it's unrealistic.

Is the author still writing? The first order has been made. Although I don't know how the results will be, but it's not a good idea to cut it off at the beginning. If you have any difficulties, please tell me. Otherwise, no matter how good your writing is, no one will read it. Our tolerance for new authors is actually quite high. In addition, the writing is also quite good. Although there are some flaws, newcomers can understand it. It's very bad character:-(

It's not enough. I hope you can hold on to a few million words.

There are many places where the purpose of triggering conflicts is to highlight the deliberateness. I guess it is because I didn't think clearly about how this kind of gossip should advance the plot during the planning. As a result, traditional methods are still used. For example, first the protagonist openly accepts the admiration of the female supporting character and invites outsiders to do evil, then one by one is implicated and tortured and "rescued at the last second", and then he is reprimanded in person to strengthen the emotional tone. The above plots all take place when the protagonist is very weak in relative strength, which seems very deliberate. At the same time, the protagonist is also made to have very intense emotions, which is incompatible with Changsheng Gouliu. Of course, if it is a traditional golden finger tattoo, whether it is a personal risk or inexplicable implication, there will be no such problem. Therefore, it is reasonable to speculate that the role of "krypton life improvement" should be strengthened in the future and move closer to the traditional genre.

There is no need to write a female protagonist in this kind of novel. If you write it, it will be a failure.

Immortality without power is like an ant