I Judge the Immortals with My Pen, I Am the King of Hell

In fact, I feel that the previous beginning is better than this one. This beginning seems that the protagonist has no brains and Wan Xiangzi does not have the feeling of being a master.

This opening is really more flattering than the previous book At least the opening of the previous book advanced the story quite clearly, but this opening is so true that I don't know what it was about And this title, to be honest, I wouldn't have wanted to click on it if it hadn't been for the previous book.

To be honest, if you play like this, it's really easy to make yourself a fool Newbies open new books and feel that their grades are not good enough. It's okay to change their vests and continue rushing. If you do this, many people will worry that you will become a eunuch in the future and stab them in the back. Subscriptions may be cheaper.

It's really a pity that the previous book was not confident enough. I really don't want to follow this one, especially after seeing "Connected to the Earth", I felt a little bit addicted. It's better to slow down and adjust to a city, create a European entertainment and financial circle, rebirth the French Inglisi or something like that.

It's not as good as the previous one, it feels a bit like a snake. I don't understand why I cut the previous book.

I didn't want to click on this book just by looking at the name. Give me back my cybernetic cultivation 😭

My evaluation is that it is not as good as the previous one

80% Of the time, I'd like to go back to writing about cities. If it's difficult to write about China, then write about South Korea, Japan, or the United States! It's just a suggestion. It depends on you.

It's not as good as the previous one, it feels a bit like a snake. I don't understand why I cut the previous book.

Why don't you stop and think about it carefully? This will make it worse as you write.

If it weren't for the last book, I wouldn't even have the desire to read the name. Really

Is the author about to give up again? I feel that this author is not very good. I suggest changing careers or further training. I personally summarize that there are two types of successful Internet article authors. The first type is those who can tell any story well and attract people to read. They can use old tricks and still have a way to attract old bookworms to read their stories. The other type of storytelling has an average level of above (60-90 points) but the story is novel and contains many new things, giving readers unexpected surprises, so there are more readers.

Don't stress about cause and effect! The more you stress, the more nothing can be done.

Personally, I think it's not as good as the last one in every aspect right now, so you should go back and write it.

I felt sick at the beginning. You might as well have written the previous book. I felt like I would be disappointed.

What a pity, cyber cultivator is so handsome

Li Ke's mother opened the door for Li Ke. The other name is... I'm so worried!

After seeing this, I almost want to give up the book. Compared with the development of Sai Bo Xian, writing like this now is not interesting.

It doesn't look good, come back and reward the author.

Urban writing is good, but forget about everything else.

To be honest, Qidian will be criticized by people no matter what you write. Many people can clearly tell that they don't have much ink in their stomachs, and they are all opinions. Of course, I won't say not to read feedback. After all, you have to rely on this to make a living, and you can't just do whatever makes you happy. It's understandable if the data is not good and it's reopened, but if the data is okay, I don't think there's any need to worry too much about some retarded comments.

Damn it, I'm dying. Actually, to be honest, this cyber world is not dark enough.

Nanshan, you are so gentle that you actually finished the book... You also got some investment income... (Now if you tj this book, you will be finished, I tell you) Come on

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