I Judge the Immortals with My Brush, I Am Yama

Actually, I felt the previous opening was better than this one. This opening makes the protagonist seem rather dim-witted, and Wanxiangzi doesn't seem like a wise person at all.

This opening is definitely much worse than the last one. The previous book at least got the story moving forward fairly clearly at the beginning, but this one's opening really doesn't make sense. And honestly, if it weren't for the previous book, I wouldn't have clicked on this title at all.

To be honest, playing like this can easily lead to your downfall. If a new author feels their new book isn't doing well, they can simply switch to a different account and keep going. If you do this, many people will worry that you'll become a eunuch and betray them in the future, and their subscriptions might even drop lower.

The previous book was a real shame; the author lacked confidence. Honestly, I'm not really ready to follow this one, especially the part about connecting to Earth—it feels a bit toxic. I'll take a break, adjust my approach, and maybe do something urban, like a European entertainment or financial story, or perhaps a reincarnation in France or England.

I don't even want to open this book just from the title. Give me back my cyberpunk cultivation novel! 😭

This one isn't as good as the previous one; it feels a bit anticlimactic. I don't understand why they cut the previous book.

It's likely to flop. I suggest you go back to writing about urban life. If Chinese stories are hard to write, try Korean, Japanese, or American ones! This is just a suggestion; ultimately, it's up to you.

My assessment is that it's not as good as the previous one.

Why don't you stop and think about it carefully again? Otherwise, you'll just keep writing and make things worse.

This one isn't as good as the previous one; it feels a bit anticlimactic. I don't understand why they cut the previous book.