The Supporting Character Starts in Swallowed Star

The protagonist's clones are incredibly weak. One is an iceberg behemoth with ten times the genetic power, and the other is a metallic life form with a low level of existence. More importantly, neither is compatible with his attributes, and neither possesses the high spatial affinity of the Demon Slayer Clan. What's the use of the iceberg behemoth? At least the Flame Star Behemoth is useful for building roads on the main path.

Blood Crystals have even been turned into an industry chain. The entire secret realm is dedicated to cultivating races. Getting Blood Crystals from within is easy enough; they won't let you resell them. Forget about it! The Golden Beast God has been killed; why would humanity need Blood Crystals?

Why write about beast taming? Why not write about Pokémon? It's a waste of your talent to write about Swallowing the Stars.

Is this all you've written for the three golden chapters? Aren't you bored?

The beginning was alright, but it became increasingly difficult to watch after the Blood Crystal arc! I remember in the original story, when Luo Feng was in the Hong Alliance, he participated in an auction where Blood Crystals were up for auction. Back then, only Universe Venerables dared to bid, and Luo Feng was wondering how much his many Blood Crystals were worth!

I like the female-lead-free genre, but some of the romance storylines are just too silly.

Your approach of using the mind-controlling beast-manipulation style is too restrictive. You've limited yourself. What's the point of pursuing such a path?

I'll keep reading for a while. I've already cast four votes. The author should address those comments; I almost gave up on the book when I first saw them. They had a significant impact. The author's writing is generally reasonable, but I'm worried it might be abandoned. 🥺 It's a pretty good Devouring fanfic.

The beginning was watchable, but the later plot became chaotic and meaningless, leaving the reader wondering what the author was trying to write. It's unclear what the author was reading, as the later plot felt very vague and unfocused... It just felt nonsensical.

Actually, I think the worldview of Snow Eagle Lord is quite suitable for fanfiction. The power system is relatively clear, and the novel's framework is already established. Even if you just follow the original plot and change the "Dao" (the Way), you can still write something original. This makes writing easier, and the audience is fairly mainstream. It's quite suitable for practice, but nobody seems to be writing it. 😭😭 How about the author pre-orders one? 🙂