Elf: Becoming a Master Starts by Traveling Everywhere

I feel like it's a bit ridiculous to always find excuses to say that I can't afford to raise an elf because I have so many opportunities to make money, yet I give away so many things to others for free, and I repeatedly emphasize that I have no money, which makes my character a bit twisted. It's a pity that the beginning was quite good, I feel

Wait a few more days to see, it's too toxic. To be honest, I rarely comment on books and never give negative reviews. But there is something wrong with your book. I can't help but complain. You said that your training is slow. It's okay. You can take your time. There are no resources to arrange. Mosquito-repellent frogs are currently the main force. Cammy turtles will evolve into water arrow turtles. The strength is not bad. Rotom can only win by unexpectedly changing attributes and being unfamiliar with others. Do you really expect him to be able to do it? Do you want to fight for the league champion? Stinky flower and plant support. What's the use of your sudden recovery of the sun coral? There aren't enough water elements. There is no racial value or strength, and it will also share your already tight resources. You are going for the water king. A team of baby elves is not enough for the protagonist to fight with one hand. Is there a main line in this article? The protagonist just travels and wanders around, without thinking about playing in the alliance. How many chapters do you want to write in this article? How many regions should you write about? There are many protagonists who have not risen in more than a hundred chapters, and there are many starting points. It cannot be ruled out that the article is slow to gain popularity, but the potential of the elves you arranged cannot be seen. If you go to play in an alliance, the NPCs in it are not fools, and they are not weak. Their elves are better than you, they take longer to train than you, they spend more resources to train than you, and their command levels are almost the same. What do you win?

I really don't know how an ordinary person with no golden fingers, no background and no resources can reach the top.

This is the most useless protagonist of elf novels I have ever seen. Look at those dark novels, they don't have a golden finger. Your protagonist is said to have a mental age of over 40 years old, but in fact he does not have an adult mind.

I found that many authors insist on writing the protagonists as poor people, but they all treat money like dirt. It's funny.

I've read a hundred chapters and I feel a bit lost. The protagonist's journey is very routine, no different from that of a normal poor family child, and there are not many adventures. It can only be said that he is getting stronger a little bit, but the degree of getting stronger is very small and the speed is very slow. Currently, only the mosquito-repellent frog can go up and fight with others. Let's put it together. Other elves are not strong enough. We really need to arrange for other elves to have resources. Also, the title is Elf Master. So what kind of person does the protagonist think the Elf Master is? Is he the strongest trainer, or does he figure out how to get along with elves and cultivate them, and then hand it over to others? Because after one hundred chapters, the protagonist has taught many younger brothers. Will he establish a sect in the future and convey his ideas to the elf world?

🐸It's hard to sew it together. A good Pokémon world must be sewn together with Pokémon by the inferior routines of domestic cultivation. There are a bunch of cultivation levels, lower, middle and upper levels, waiting to break through. It's really boring to see. There is no need for you to wear a Pokémon skin for a photo. Go directly and write about the high school beast masters written by the domestic Pokémon authors. There are 100 million levels. All kinds of people only talk about their resource background. The immortal cultivating family sect should be called the beast controlling family sect. "Monsters" can also practice exercises. Isn't that good? I won't click in to watch it, and you won't be trolled. I'll continue to look for Pokémon fans to watch?

I feel that if I really want to write about a rainy day, Fangyuan starts with a water-leap fish, and after catching the long-winged gull, I consider catching a lotus-hatted boy, and then runs to Guandong to catch mosquito tadpoles, flying mantises, magnets, gophers, and even consider catching a black sea horse. The team suddenly becomes the semi-common rainy day team.

It is recommended to join the Rockets and sell elves to make money faster. If you are poor, don't be restricted by morality. If you don't have money, it's just nonsense.

I suggest you change the name to "Crossing the Elf World; I Became the Water King"

Mosquito-repellent frog, you also want to be Xiaochi

The writing is a bit bad 😒 and the writing is not smooth.

It is very encouraging for the author to continue writing, but there are many problems with this book now. First of all, this book seems to have no outline. All the plots are independent events. You can write whatever comes to mind, so there are a lot of annoying plots. In addition, it deviates far from the traditional elf literature. The protagonist does not have the feeling of upgrading and experience. He is just traveling and sightseeing, making money to survive. There are many experiences that can be used to brag, but the feeling of growth is very poor. Goldfinger gave the humanoid elf a combat power setting and then disappeared. The author did not make any reinforcements. The elf aspect also found a reason to randomly add one or two elf to the protagonist to make up for it. The charm of elven literature is travel and adventure, victory in battles, and becoming the champion after a duel. This thing is the main plot. Many of the plots you wrote are not worthy of the name of this book.

If you don't have money, you have to raise good elves, walking grass, giant needle bees and the like. The giant needle bees have honey...

Brother, it's so funny that you are so poor that you can't train elves. With your fighting talent, your master's gym will support you by itself. Shiba is an example.

Compared with those mindless novels that rely on anime to go through two chapters and fight in one gym, this novel is much better and has ideas. I like it

I always feel like you are not traveling but like a settling turtle

It's a very healing and leisurely novel. I really like traveling and planting trees in it. I don't know why there are so few comments and there are trolls

If the author really wants to write a world view like the Pokémon animation, I suggest that the game settings be as downplayed as possible, because the starting point of the game settings is for gameplay, and there is no need to think too much about the rationality of the game world, especially the characteristics. Many characteristics are not suitable to appear in the animated world view, such as breaking the rules and being defenseless. Some characteristics need to be adjusted, such as various appearance weather effects, etc.; There are also some characteristics that I feel cannot be considered characteristics, such as competitive intimidation, which is available to most Pokémon, and the effect can be large or small. After all, can an ordinary roaring tiger still intimidate a mythical beast?

I looked at the character card and laughed to death. Another Rotom. The polygon is really miserable. Its abilities are highly overlapped with Rotom, and the combat is better than Rotom, but no one paid attention. After reading so many fans, I have seen one that does not require Rotom but a polygon.

The protagonist is too pretentious and twisted. Every time he meets a good elf, he says that he has no resources and is a poor man. As a result, he also sets the current situation that Ibrahimovic has only discovered five evolutions, and the evolution of Shavaran Abiran and others is unclear. When he can make money through these, he makes himself regard money as dirt. The most speechless thing is that although the title of the book is Becoming an Elf Master, but I feel that the protagonist has always been bad, and the elves he conquered are just like that. Maybe it is to show that he is poor and has no resources. The collected elves are not powerful, and the team formation is very confusing. I don't understand what path to take. Although there are many water elves, there seems to be no cooperation between the elves, and it feels like the protagonist is getting more and more bad.

Although there are some problems, it is still quite interesting overall!

This elf configuration doesn't feel right 😥

I just read a few chapters, and the writing is okay.

When I saw the protagonist taking two young masters from a wealthy family on a trip and acting as a nanny, I didn't want to watch it! And the protagonist is a good teacher. The author really wants to find a companion for the protagonist. Can't he bring the heroine? !

It feels okay, I don't know why so many people complain about it

Come on, write slowly at your own pace. The author can add more content from the theatrical version.

When writing down the elf level, be careful not to write it wrong. Squirtle was already at level 29 when he first evolved, and was already at level 48 when he arrived at Elf Academy. He evolved into a Blastoise and dropped back to level 29. Squirtle also dropped from level 26 to level 19. Why did he evolve and lose levels?

If you are short of money, you can make your own money. Evolution stone props and resources similar to those produced by elves can be cashed out.