I'm the Rich Second-Generation Heir!

After reading twenty-five chapters, there are only two words, "Embarrassing". The common problem of great writers is that they are not smooth and pretentious. The last book was too didactic, and this book is too pretentious. I will wait for the next book. It should be better if I write more.

So far, there is no obvious poisonous point. Keep it up and speed up. Just give me some advice, don't be a slave to the system. Nowadays, almost all the novels written by heroes are extremely poisonous. It is really sinful to write novels about heroes with a filthy thinking pattern, and they have no ability to control wealth at all. It is standard to guide people to trade stocks without thinking. When drinking, you only know ♠️A. When selling a house, you must be a Tomson brand. The first woman I hired was from a 4S store, and the second one was from a big-name clothing store. Cats and dogs are not so casual when they appear. I can't complain anymore.

I've read so many Shenhao novels, and I feel so embarrassed. They mostly write about Wang Sicong and Qin Fen, which makes my head hurt. Neither the author nor us readers have the experience of the rich second generation. After all, how can any rich second generation write novels like Huan Yu?

There are too many oatmeal posts, dozens of posts a day, and I can't delete them, so I opened a post with a fan value of 1.

In the latest chapter, I would like to express my opinion. China is not that poor. If it is really that poor, it can only be blamed on their parents. This kind of aid is a waste of money. I am from a rural area and from the mountains. It takes an hour to drive from our village to the county seat and climb mountains. There are no special products, no tourist attractions, and no allocated forests. But I think we are not that poor. We can't even afford the tuition fees we have until now. With transportation now so developed, why can't parents go out to work even if their parents are disabled or dead? The book is in 2016. Most of the people going to school at this age are only children. The state also covers a lot of expenses for high school. The annual living expenses plus food are only more than 10,000 or 20,000. The grandparents are less than 60 at most, and they don't need to support them. Can't they still afford two children? Prices in rural areas are also different from those in cities. A bowl over there only costs 2 yuan in 2016.

You still need to have some knowledge to write a heroic article. And IQ

Summary of poisonous points ps: This book is the only one I stayed up late to read recently, but some of the poisonous points are too obvious and illogical. 1. The issue of going to school is systematic. Life is destined to be full of ups and downs. Standing on the commanding heights of Rome, don't write about such messy things as going to school. You can see that you can't handle the upper part of what you wrote, so you can only deal with it coldly. You can use money to build a library, so buying a degree is not normal. The protagonist is just like attending lectures. 2. Heroine, I believe that 99% of the readers are against this heroine. You have a great system. Why do you want to lower yourself to the pattern? To put it bluntly, the pattern is not big enough. You obviously want to write a majestic story, but you have to make some stains and hindrances. The heroine is not as good as the president's secretary, the eldest princess of the Rong family, or the daughter of the Qiao family. Since it is destined to be the final product, don't engage in some vain plots, which will not provide any sense of promotion. To put it bluntly, the heroine is really awkward 3. Family background, since she is the second generation of rich people, she is speechless if she has resources left unused. My family is engaged in real estate. It is understandable to buy a house in Jinling at the beginning, but after arriving in Shanghai, my father's real estate has been listed on the market, so I always have houses and talent reserves. You can't use ready-made talents to build your own gray rhinoceros. In the final analysis, the writing is not detailed enough, and many things are just mentioned in one stroke. Maybe I wrote it when I remembered it, but then I wrote something else when I couldn't remember it. 4. There is no main line. After reading hundreds of pictures, I feel that it is not the protagonist who has ideas, but that he is a puppet of the system, like a puppet on a string, and has not encountered his own ideas. Now that we have a system, we shouldn't be motivated to conquer the earth and become the finalists. A man's dream is nothing more than to lie drunk on the lap of a beautiful woman and wake up to take over the world. 5. Problems with female casting. Since we want to write something majestic and high-end, we should not write some irrelevant Karami female characters. To be honest, it would be too low-grade and full of diaosi feeling. Like in the article, I think the person who should be most related to the male protagonist should be The daughter of the Qiao family 👸 (You already have a wishing system, don't worry, and she is a politician, a government official, and she will definitely help the protagonist. This is in line with the capital ideology:), and the princess of the Rong family 👸 (She is rich and powerful, a skinny camel is bigger than a horse, the protagonist His right-hand assistant:), bank secretary (this female character is the earliest to appear in the early stage, and may also be the most helpful to the protagonist. Not to mention recruiting her to be his secretary, the protagonist also exchanged many social privileges and resources in the bank at the beginning:). That's why I say that the author has no main plot, doesn't know how to play chess, and doesn't know how to use resources. He just talks nonsense about capital. (What is capital? Capital is the use of all available resources to improve oneself. In the eyes of capital, only maximizing profits is the only thing that can be done. The same goes for women. Similarly, have you ever seen a European royal successor marry an ordinary person? It does not help him at all and is also a hindrance. Unless he is crazy and has a crazy brain, he would choose :). If you don't have a military, political and business background that can pave the way for you, you probably won't know which tree to hang on. That's about it. It can be read as a brainless and refreshing article. If you want to become a god, the author still has a long way to go. For Shenhao's novel "Fengshen", either you are an emotional killer and have a very good grasp of emotions, or you have to be different from others and write a book that is completely in line with Shenhao's writing, and use this as a benchmark for Shenhao's writing!

Please write less pretentious plots. It's too embarrassing. It's both Hongmen and a fund.

1. At present, apart from having money, the protagonist has nothing that can make Byte excited. What Byte currently needs is to monetize traffic and go overseas to capture the global market. The current status of the protagonist is, to say the least, a bit low. If you really want to invest, you first need to have your own influence. Byte financing not only requires money, but also can help it further strengthen the company's development capabilities; 2. This senior brother plot confuses me. First of all The author didn't describe it in a very powerful way, he just described the income of the fund he managed. The financial circle despises chains very seriously. A bachelor's degree from Jinling University is really not good enough. Of course, it does not rule out bigwigs like the Ningbo Death Squadron, but they and the main The investment direction that the protagonist wants is different. What the protagonist wants is someone who can find the investment direction and goals and be able to manage them. Now this senior brother gives me the feeling of being arrogant. There is nothing else but this. And the most important thing is that he has had insider trading and has been certified. The Supervisory Committee filed a case and was imprisoned. I am not from the venture capital circle, I am from a bank. First of all, the financial circle also attaches great importance to whether you have broken the law. Not only are you not allowed to work under the law, but you will also be isolated from the circle. Your path is too wild and most people will not like it. Another point is that the annual salary is tens of millions. We are not Wall Street. Some cases in investment banks may result in millions of profits, but in ordinary venture capital companies, the annual salary will not be so high. Unless there are original shares, I personally feel that it is not worth the tens of millions of annual salary for the senior brother. What is more inexplicable to me is that he himself was imprisoned for insider trading. After he came out, he was still so crazy and not young and energetic. Didn't he think about the problem while in prison? My personal thoughts are not meant to be offensive. I hope the author doesn't mind.

Personally, I am indifferent or even disgusted with luxury cars and watches, especially in the early stages of the novel. When you have money, luxury cars and watches must be at the bottom or not at the top of the list of things you want to buy.