The Will of Fire Cannot Save the Ninja World

Kushina, you don't want Naruto to be bullied by everyone!

What a strange operation this is. The protagonist has strength and fame in Konoha, but only four people can directly take over Konoha F4 in one pot. What's the point of starting a new business like this? You say there is not enough time. You are not yet 16 years old. It will take you 10 years to implement reforms and 20 years to achieve the top four. It is easier to indoctrinate a knowledgeable ninja than to teach him from scratch. Now we have to start from scratch, disintegrate the Iron Kingdom's armed forces, provoke a civil war, and cultivate military talents. Even 20 years may not achieve the same results as 10 years in Konoha. And among the five major countries, Madara will not let you develop quietly. Your situation is completely different from Chiba Shiraishi's. That book took away a lot of Uchiha and Hyuga clan members, so it can be considered a basic base. It will take at least 10 years for you to deceive and kidnap and create little brats.

There are a little more people now, and there are voices of discussion. Everyone has a different understanding of Naruto, from different angles, and how much of the plot is left in their memory. Naruto itself also has many controversial points, and discussions are normal. And the author is not omnipotent. Some of them are modified and filled in for the book, such as Minato's graduation team and some ninjutsu. Some of the things that the author really remembered wrongly were corrected by everyone, such as the way the monster inside Yakumo died, and the fact that Konoha's vest was gray-green during the Second War. So, civilized discussions are very welcome, such as the post with the most comments on the relationship between the daimyo and the Shinobu Village. However, if there are some comments that directly use swear words, the author will definitely delete them. Book reviews are not for venting negative emotions, so please try to exercise restraint. 😇 ------ One more thing, please don't use your modern life experience to apply the logic of Japanese society to the ninja world, and then the ninja world will say that it is not so fucked, it should be like this, it shouldn't be like that, normal people will be like this, and it shouldn't be like that Forget it if you haven't seen it, it may be deleted if you see it, it hurts

I've always wondered why most current Naruto novels like to create their own heroine? It always feels weird looking at it

Ninjas possess chakra, and even if they die, their body's vitality remains longer than that of ordinary people. Then the question is, why no one collects the sperm and eggs of ninjas who died in battle, and then fertilizes them through in vitro fertilization, looking for civilian surrogates. Isn't this the appearance of Sharingan Byakugan Wholesale! And the white eyes that are born are not like those of a caged bird.

The author completely misunderstood the Daimyo in Naruto. In the first generation of Five Kage talks, the Five Kages declared war and drew territories at will, not caring about the Daimyo's feelings Pen scolded in front of Tsunade that "all wars were caused by the Five Kage" Sasuke's revolutionary plan in the finale was to execute the Five Kages instead of the Daimyo All of this proves that the Daimyo is nothing in front of the power of ninjas, it is just a higher-end cash machine

Fight in my hell! Miscellaneous repair!

This is obviously a mixed book. . It seems you have seen too little. . The routine is imitated by Chiba Shiraishi, the new three-body technique is imitated by Uzumaki Masakura (Kumi Uzumaki), I won't talk about the Uchiha route, there are too many Uchiha texts. . I haven't read the rest of the story yet, but I guess the author will get worse and worse as the writing becomes more and more confusing, because it's too confusing, and I'll have to use my brain to write the story later on, and there will be nothing to learn from. .

The writing is too scattered, the form is scattered and the spirit is scattered, nothing is written. Will spiritual transformation? Yes, but only a little. The pursuit and research of power? Yes, maybe a little more than the above, but there is no place to use it. When using it, it will make no difference if it is replaced by ordinary ninjutsu. There is no specificity and necessity written down. In love? There are a few, a lot of pages, but they are all about original female characters with a very poor sense of empathy, and the relationship is determined from the beginning, there is no process, there is no sense of empathy, and it is not sweet. To put it simply, it seems that there is nothing wrong with the writing, but there is no attractive point, and it is stuck there.

The first three chapters confuse me. They overpower the protagonist at the beginning. They blatantly denigrate the Will of Fire and call them leeks. They don't have the strength to compete blindly. They make themselves look awesome, but they are actually a piece of trash. Ask Shen Nong if he can read the rest.

When you start yearning for freedom, you are already a caged bird.

Before I watched it, I took a look at the characters. Good guy, I don't recognize any of the heroines. The important female characters in Naruto are all female supporting characters. The heroines are original. Ah, I really can't understand this. I think it's best to not be original when writing a fanfic, and even if it is original, don't make it the main character, otherwise it won't feel like watching a fanfic. (Of course, this is just my first thought after seeing the introduction of the character, and has no other meaning)

Writing about Naruto doesn't have the flavor of Naruto. . . . That political level is exactly the same as Kishimoto. Graduated from junior high school. . . . . . Awkward one. Too boring.

In reality. Bad people don't die, good people don't die either, only stupid people die.

Is your protagonist, the author, anti-wood industry? If not, I'll escape as soon as possible. The genius of Konoha - the war hero - was suppressed by others - the whole village will be sick of it. With the strongest strength, I have killed several shadows, but I still can't become the village chief in the village. I have been fighting in the nest for a long time.

My evaluation is not as good as the one next door that killed Shimura and the Sarutobi clan.

Not to criticize you, the author, but I think you know how to do it... According to the current progress of the plot, of course, the most speechless thing is that Black Jue will fall into the illusion. Do you want to laugh me to death?

Compared to the Naruto fanfics of the same period, it is simply a glimmer of hope in the Naruto fandom.

If you can't bear this or that, what kind of Uchiha are you doing? Just reincarnate as Minato Madonna

The first chapter is full of poisonous points. First, he randomly makes up a clan traitor so that the protagonist can show off. He pretends to be "The Will of Fire" written by other authors ten thousand times. Then he starts to brag about the werewolf "invented" by the protagonist. Why don't you just copy a few Tang poems and memorize a few passages from Mao Zedong?

Naruto fandom is always like this, the authors don't dare to make big changes, or they dare to start but don't have the ability to finish. If you have the ability to make major changes and develop it reasonably and smoothly, then write original content. Who will write fan fiction? So they are all written in terms of neither up nor down. The protagonist is written in such a ridiculous way, but in terms of the development of the entire story, there is no difference whether he is present or not, and it is still the main line of the original work. Everyone was talking about the butterfly effect, but from the looks of it, there was no butterfly effect at all. Bored

I stayed up late last night to watch it. I couldn't stand it for more than half of it and had to go to bed to continue watching it today. After watching it today, I really couldn't stand the rest of the plot. It felt like the protagonist had been led by the villain from the time he rebelled against the village and went solo. He was dragged here and there like a 🐶. It's so disgusting. You clearly wrote well in the front. Why are you so crotch-like in the back, and your intelligence is reduced to the same as that of a supporting character?

The more I look at it, the less interesting it becomes. The evaluation is: Does the protagonist look like the protagonist? I feel that what I am reading is not a single-protagonist novel, but a multi-protagonist novel, or one that mainly describes the supporting role of the male protagonist. How can an original character without plug-ins be better than Kakashi Minato Uchiha Itachi? Why do these two heroines have such strength? Just because you practice the so-called Kaiqiao points? Can you hold down a few jonin and beat them when you are just a teenager? Is she worthy? Is it reasonable? The protagonist has a nine-magatama Sharingan that opens to six-magatama, but he can only open it 50-50 with others. If a three-magatama is promoted to Mangekyo normally, he can fight with the shadow level, okay? The skills brought by several magatama are all auxiliary. Do you like supporting and being your mother's protagonist so much? Why the hell does it depend on other people to change the plot? The key scenes are all about several female protagonists showing off their power and extraordinary strength. The protagonist puts it aside to make soy sauce, so he likes to write about you going to female videos! It's strange that you can be popular! This is a random article that likes to use the perspective of the protagonist as a supporting role

In fact, this is something to worship. For an author with real writing skills, it would be great to be able to write an original female protagonist in a fanfic, but the author has written two? Oh my god, is China going to play in the World Cup?

When writing a Naruto fanfic, you don't have a good idea of ​​Xinying's plot, and then most of the text is about water ninjutsu, explaining and analyzing it, as if you can analyze the flowers.

It would be better not to have the self-created heroine withdraw immediately.

I don't really agree with the fact that the heroine doesn't have Mito. If you want green, then the one with the strongest green Konoha

Try to keep the word count at more than 8,000 words per day I have recently adjusted my work schedule and updated the update time to around 0 o'clock

Why do you always talk about your family and shut up about your family?

I don't quite understand that the protagonist obviously knows the plot, and he can defeat Konoha at the age of 10. Since he wants to leave the village to carry out reforms, why can Madara Uchiha be young again and get the Rinnegan Eye? It's several levels more difficult than facing Obito.