The Daily Life of My Youth as a Monk

• My guess is that the performance of this book was not satisfactory, so a lot of content was cut from the beginning in college, and the book needs to be finished as soon as possible. However, this also exposed the problem of Lao Zhao's book writing. The structure design of the novel is unreasonable: now it is 1.3 Million words, and the whole story has been roughly unfolded, and the conflict has been revealed. If you write it according to the original plan, you will have to write another five, six, or seven million words. Teacher Zhao, please listen to me, you have so many updates, you can't handle the super long novel. • According to my experience in reading online articles, a book with less than 3 million words is the best. Authors who update slowly should pay more attention to controlling the total word count. It is best to finish it within one to two years. Otherwise, it will waste time and energy, consume the author's talent, and consume the reader's enthusiasm. Be careful. I suggest that Lao Zhao read some high-quality novels with one or two million words when he has time to recharge himself. • Lao Zhao's literary dramas are very well written, but his martial arts dramas are very eye-catching. So far, the best martial arts drama written by Lao Zhao. Except for the fight between Athena and the senior sister in "Anti-Demon", I think it is Lin Huaien's fight out of college. This is the upper limit of Lao Zhao's martial arts dramas. I suggest you use your strengths and avoid weaknesses and write less about fighting. • You can have philosophical thoughts, with a small amount of embellishment to add depth, but don't indulge too much, otherwise it will inevitably become a sermon to the readers. • Never touch grand narratives. • It is difficult for a writer to write a good work by himself. Editing is very important. This can be seen from the quality difference between the magazine serial version, the physical book version and the online serial version of "Dragon". I know that Lao Zhao has read "Dragon". Communicate more with editors. Sometimes you have to find someone else to edit, and sometimes you have to do your own editing. • The outline should be detailed so that each volume should be written as a short story, with a complete framework, continuous transitions, and neatness and refinement, so that the novel will not be bad. Be careful to end as you began. A good ending is not only a respect for your own work, but also a respect for the readers. It is not only the end of one book, but also the beginning of the next book. You have almost gone from Longkong to Y. Everyone knows your notoriety, so you should pay attention to it. • The settings involving extraordinary strength must be clear. The previous book The Chosen One was already very vague and suspected of being a book. This one is even more confusing. You are very persistent in "rationalizing" the explanation of extraordinary power, but you are not interested in the power that promotes the development of the plot. Growth lacks design. To be honest, the extraordinary world you wrote is not good to watch. You need to work harder on this aspect, otherwise you still have to use your strengths and avoid weaknesses. You will not be able to keep the readers who love watching fights and killings. Those who will stay will only read your writing about women. Fortunately, you have two brushes when writing about women and literary dramas. • The character design of the male protagonist does not need to be too much. If you write too much, you will make mistakes. The more you describe, the darker it becomes. The male protagonist of this book obviously uses too much force. It is necessary to bring in as many readers as possible. Every concept has its opposite meaning. Every more clear characteristic means one more "enemy". The more characteristics, the more "enemies". Carl Schmidt's philosophy of justice is also valid in reverse. You must understand this. • Although the image of a protagonist with profound contradictions is lofty, and everyone loves to talk about lofty terms such as character arcs and character growth, you still have to convince readers to read on, and don't let your writing skills become a negative asset. Readers of male videos mainly come to read women, so most of the text is devoted to women, so remember this. • The most difficult thing for everyone is Lao Zhao's Zhao's refreshing essays. The thunder is loud and the raindrops are small, and the excitement stops before a hundred thousand words. It bursts out and is interrupted by silence. Maybe you have your own thoughts, but the words are out of control and have no structure. This will not convince readers to accept your thoughts. • After writing too much about "Suffering and Enmity", the author will inevitably fall into the negative emotions created by himself. He must not fall into it. He must regulate his emotions more, and it is best to develop the habit of exercise. There are many benefits. You may also want to learn self-hypnosis and tell yourself that you are happy coding, happy at work, and happy in life, and then happily write a medium-sized poppy. Just two to three million words will do, and you can just practice writing. Originally I just wanted to write some small suggestions, more to encourage the author, but I couldn't control what I wrote and turned it into a critical review. I am very ashamed. I am afraid that my brain wave is similar to that of the author, so the problem is the same. Some criticisms are wishful thinking and may not be correct. Please forgive me if there is anything wrong. I will continue to support the author. Please keep creating. I hope you can overcome the thorns and thorns, brave the wind and waves, the green mountains will always be there, and watch the storm with a smile. 2025/5/8/23:04Re-edit the layout to increase readability

I was deceived by the introduction and title. After reading a few chapters, I felt something was wrong. When I went out and looked at the author, it turned out to be you.

It's well written, it still has the same taste, if you can control it, it's a very good work

Although I was always afraid that something like this would happen when I watched it, from what I saw, the male protagonist was destined to have a harem. I didn't understand it. This was not the emotional development of the male protagonist and the female protagonist that I imagined and expected. Their beginning was so beautiful. As an audience, I couldn't accept the intervention of other people, even people like the senior sister who didn't understand anything. Maybe the male protagonist could use external pressure to defend himself, but he enjoyed it, didn't he? Just saw it here

I have always felt that although Lao Zhao feeds shit, but from my sister's anti-demon, I see here, Lao Zhao is still in my heart t0. Anti-demon deleted the feed and deleted all the trash talk and trash content. I feel that it is no worse than the Dragon Clan Finally, is there a similar type and the same level as Lao Zhao? The writing style of Recommended Books Mainly because I feel that there are always those few people on the hot list, and they can't get Chen Dong's series of articles at all. Other platinum writers feel that they all have a famous work, but then they start to get stuck in their writing habits.

1 The last book was updated in three chapters a month, and the last volume was updated in three chapters a month, every day. 2 Various settings were forgotten, and the group was divided 3 The full subscription group was disbanded after the last book was finished, and it has not been given yet.

I've read a lot of posts criticizing this author, and I think this is wrong. The author's own works are very good and can stand the test of time. In addition, I play Genshin Impact.

Ahead is 💩, return immediately!

After reading dozens of pictures, I really didn't understand what the book was about at all. One moment it talked about how rich the family was, the other moment it said the protagonist had been studying abroad as a boarder since childhood, the next moment it was about the protagonist's mother's baby, and the next moment it was all about fantasy. I went to boarding school at a top school in America when I was a child, and then transferred high school and returned to China to study. Apart from other things, in this environment, I didn't understand how the protagonist became a mother's baby. When I thought I was writing about youth campus, I suddenly found out that if I was dying of brain cancer, I could ask a master to renew my life. The prerequisite for renewing my life is that the protagonist becomes a disciple. However, the protagonist disagrees with the materialism on the surface, so the master gives things to the protagonist, and the protagonist becomes a psychopath who can develop his thinking in anything. The protagonist is portrayed as an elite who received an elite education from a foreign country since childhood, and then the protagonist's ordinary thoughts are written, and the protagonist's background is written as a group at the top of the domestic pyramid. As a result, in order not to show abnormality, the protagonist does not use a mobile phone in the top schools in the country and only uses a little genius watch. What the hell is written about?

It is purely a work for self-entertainment and to satisfy one's literary youth. I advise you to be cautious before entering.

The famous ex-convict author, the above-mentioned story about a girl who cheated on a girl (several times), and the hero left for a few years, the heroine's daughter called the hero's partner daddy, the hero came back and saw the heroine and the hero flirting with each other

No matter what the reason is at the end of the previous book, I still choose to support the author. The worldview constructed in the previous book is somewhat consistent with the current international background, and the AI ​​theme that I want to highlight at the end also conflicts with current politics. I guess it wasn't originally supposed to be this ending, but I had to change it due to some pressure. As for what those pressures were, I, a Zhengzhi novice like me, don't know. Of course it's just a guess. The author's ability has been fully demonstrated in the early and middle stages of Anti-Demon. There was also a good work with concise writing before (otherwise, it would not have been so many years ago, and there are still people who still hope to continue writing it), so the ability is certainly enough to give Anti-Demon a good ending. So the question is, why did it suddenly break down at the end and the group was disbanded? You might as well take your place. I think I am ashamed to face it. I know clearly that writing like this is not what I want, nor is it what everyone wants to read, but I have to write like this and give Cheng Mo such a regretful ending (the author also talks about regrets in the epilogue). I don't know what literary youth is. I only know that Lao Zhao is very picky about his works. He can often revise a chapter repeatedly. He must have poured a lot of emotion and unfulfilled longings into his youth. The ending written there is regrettable for all those who love anti-devil, just like when the money-refunding brother watching Chinese football yelled (Geneva, refund the money!) Outside the field, this is not a sign of love and anger. I can only say that the people who came here today to curse in the comments section of Lao Zhao's new book are all die-hard fans who used to get a little excited after work and school, thinking about the new chapter of anti-demon in the evening. They love deeply and hate deeply. I want to express my grievance on behalf of Cheng Mo, and I want to avenge my senior sister and Tongtong whose name the author has forgotten. These are all justifiable, and each has its own perspective on the issue. However, I would like to ask everyone to step into the perspective of Lao Zhao, an author who can be said to have had countless good words and sentences excerpted from two books. The two senior sisters in his writing (I still remember Pei Yanchen) are even more deeply rooted in the hearts of the people. Such an author has released a new book, but he dare not announce a single chapter in the finished high-end work. If you try to deduce it, he must know that the scolding will be endless, and it can even wrap around the door beam of his house. Opening a new book was originally a happy and good thing worth running around to tell everyone about, but the author knew very well that he would not be able to see everyone in person, and he also knew that he was sorry for the anti-devil, and he did not want or dare to touch the anti-devil again. Now, looking at the new book, with its sophisticated writing style, gorgeous vocabulary, magnificent background and world view, it is really difficult to find such a book at Qidian. However, the data is really difficult to describe, and it is undeniable that the author has his own problems, but I trust his ability and understand his difficulties. I don't have much money, and I'm still a poor student. I can only vote for recommendations and post comments every day, just to do my best. I hope the author will work hard. Those who attack you in the comment area now are all your most sincere fans in the past, even many with the most high-end brands. Those are the most emotionally invested readers. It can be said that he is the adoptive father of the child Anti-Demon. If one day, the author recovers from the sluggish period and thinks of the child Anti-Demon, please take care of him, give him an extra story, and give Tongtong, the second most brilliant star, a good ending. The innocent girl never lacks smiles, right?

I don't understand how to write a male protagonist with a net worth of hundreds of billions in such a frustrating way, and make the male protagonist behave like a low-IQ child. Moreover, the author's various speculations about the United States are very uncomfortable. It makes me, a person who has been in the United States for many years, feel a sense of eye-opening embarrassment...

The quality of this book should not be as good as it is. Please leave more comments, because when I look for books, I never look at monthly tickets or recommendations, only comments. I have never been fooled by a book with 1,000 comments on it!

It turns out that the author is Zhao Qingshan, no wonder it makes me feel like a young man reading this book.

After reading the first 4 chapters, I want to make sure that the author is not someone who has no money to write novels because of the lack of royalties. At first glance, it smells like "Reader"

Sister, Counter-Demon, and " Anti-Demon." The author's books were quite popular when the first half of "Ðì" and "Ð-Äù" were published, but now there are almost no chapter reviews. The main reason is that the routines of the three books are exactly the same. The main plot of the three books is to recruit girls from the harem. There are many ways to recruit girls in other harem novels, but the author only knows one way, which is to put the protagonist and the harem into an extremely dangerous situation to achieve a similar suspension bridge effect. This means that the protagonist must not be greatly strengthened, because the author cannot control the protagonist who is too strong and will not fall into a dangerous situation. This is why the author said that he can write cool articles but wants to write more in-depth. In fact, he is simply incapable of writing. The first sister has no superpowers, so it is not obvious yet, and it also attracts many readers. After the anti-demon obtained the carrier, and why this book knows how to practice very early, the protagonist has never had the motivation to become stronger, because after becoming stronger, it will be difficult for the author to use his routine to advance the harem. This is also the reason why the anti-demon became more and more outrageous in the future, including the fact that the protagonist never got his watch after Paris, and why Athena threw away her watch. It was all to put the protagonist into crisis. Later, he couldn't control it anymore, which led to the readers feeling that the plot became more and more outrageous.                                                                                                                 but                                         but                                                                                                                                     All the author's works are actually no different from Japanese novels and animations. They are basically theories of blood and fate. But the biggest difference between Chinese online novels and foreign novels and animations is that they don't believe in fate. The author's works have a certain writing style, but if the line is wrong, everything he does will be wrong.

What kind of chicken stuff are you writing about? I came here to practice Taoism, but my face was covered with a mixture of literary youth and middle-aged students! Shouldn't you go to a female channel and write about youth campus idols? What a fool you are here! !

At first, I was still thinking about how a book by such a veteran author could be on the free list. After reading dozens of chapters, I felt that the author should pay me for reading the book.

What are you writing about? . After reading more than ten chapters, I only have two impressions: "Mama's Boy" and "Show off a few words of English in just a few lines", just like the so-called Shanghai elite. It's very annoying. After reading more than ten chapters, I don't even know what is written.

1. To put it bluntly, change is necessary. If you don't change it, you will be blown away. I am the elder level sister and anti-demon. I have been reading novels for 20 years. I have never seen such an old author who can write several books in 2024. Create a work in which the disadvantages are maximized and the advantages are hidden. I actually didn't order any new works because I couldn't hold on reading half of them for free, and I didn't want to read any of them for free. If it weren't for my trust in the first two books, I would have given up long ago and deleted my collection. The content of the old version is slow to advance and the plot is boring. From time to time, long paragraphs of eight to nine hundred words without segmentation appear, and there is no content. It was already very prominent during the time of Anti-Demon, but Anti-Demon has advanced the plot and various aspects very well, so I can bear with it, and maybe I can learn some knowledge or be of some use. It is particularly off-putting to introduce these things that have little significance to the plot in the critical early stage of the new book. It's completely over-prepared. The entire free chapter of the old version is only three sentences. ①My family is super rich, but is in many crises and has only a glimmer of hope. ②My mother, a strong woman, puts pressure on me all day long. I am a little weak, but I have practiced a lot of skills. ③The life of the family seems to be with me, but I don't know what to do. I do a little bit of everything in one day. 2. One of the essential points of writing novels, especially online articles, is that they are fascinating. It can be said that the old version is completely lacking. The plot, characters, and deep background are not even half decent. Probably only 1/3. How do you manage to be unattractive to all three? Because only a little bit of all three are explained. People should be interested, but you didn't even ask the questions. Didn't even finish asking. The White Dragon King and the Old Monk, who also spent a long time writing, didn't feel the meaning until the free chapter ended. 3. I remember clearly that by the ninth and tenth chapter, some people were still asking if the protagonist of this book was his mother? Because the protagonist hasn't appeared yet. It doesn't matter if he shows up late, but what matters most is that he is boring. It's stylish, funny, suspenseful, heartwarming, and it's all about being in danger. I felt like I was blown away at the time. 4. Compared with anti-demon, there are also crises and difficulties at the beginning. Opportunity is the watch. The next difficulties encountered in school and the appearance of senior sister Tong. When using the bracelet for the first time, there was nothing in the book, it just exploded. 5. I really can't hold it back. After saying so much, I'm going to watch it again now. I will report back to you after watching the free exhibition.

It's begun, the attraction of the characters is here 😍

I started writing it in 2019, and it's been 6 years now. Qingshan, why don't you just release the 300 chapters for a fee first? Don't worry, we can't afford to wait 🤓

There's something wrong with your pacing. It's been more than forty chapters, why haven't the protagonist's golden fingers been revealed yet? At least the anti-demon should explain the purpose of the watch in the early stages. The trick on the bottle is not to read it, or it will scare the reader to death.

At the beginning, I saw the protagonist using Lego as an anchor. I thought it was quite interesting. But as soon as I read on, it made me laugh out loud 😅 The mainstream process of building a Lego moc is to complete the drawings and parts list ordering through studio virtual design, and the subsequent construction is called materialization. The materialization process is almost entirely mechanical construction, and the design inspiration ends in the virtual construction process, which is where the real value of the entire MOC lies. In other words, the valuable thing is the virtual drawing itself. As a result, the protagonist played the game with it and 🤭 really made me happy. No wonder I can't find a domestic communication circle. You, a purebred Jiahao, are worthy of joining other people's internal communication. Those who insist on using official documents in MOC are strictly selected by the big guys who insist on the exchange rate. From this point onwards, it is certain that those messy descriptions are purely for show-off text illustrations. Even the anchor point of the protagonist's hobby can be so fooled. Those cars and houses behind you are purely for your own show off, right? 🤭 And the most famous FLL in the Lego competition is the mechanical competition? How did you, a construction moc, get in? Are you even unwilling to look it up and start writing it? There is no need to read the following ones, just comment on the purebred literary youth for your own enjoyment.

Uemoto-senpai is very interesting to watch before she dies, and it's fun to quarrel with her. The author has a strong ability to write characters, but he seems to have very high ambitions. He feels that only writing about men and women and cool articles are too boring and cheap. He always wants to write about big events, backgrounds, and battles of wits. But the problem is that his own ability cannot support these. This leads to him not writing what we want to read, and we don't want to read what he wants to write. In fact, even if The same goes for the previous book Against Demons. The plot about the battle of wits is hard to explain. The category of urban superpowers is not good at all, but everyone is dead. However, after all these years, the author still does not intend to change, so I don't think there is any need to expect the author to change. Moreover, he is at least half an old man this year. It is unrealistic to expect him to catch up with the trend of young people again. The author's current situation can be said to be pursuing art and immersing himself in his own world at best. At worst, he is called stubborn.

As expected, the one used by this AI was beheaded.

From the last book, I want to say that the author has a very strange feeling when he writes about mature women. Are you really serious? If you have any tips, I'll go check it out.

A new book club group has been established. Everyone is welcome to play. Please see the introduction for the group number.

I hope that the protagonists in the three books of Lao Zhao can meet and complain about Lao Zhao and break the dimensional wall.