Evolutionary Direction

I tidied up the settings 🤝, moved the settings in the text to the settings, and posted more free chapters. By the way, the plot is that the protagonist is about to come out of the novice village, get rid of the constraints of his parents, see the vast world, compete with others, and have endless fun 😁

I'll go, there are so many screens here

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The real core theme of this book - evolutionary goals revealed tonight

It will be released tomorrow, please vote, update chapters 9-10, guaranteed 20,000 words, thank you friends who support me

Do you know what kind of mecha is the strongest? The next volume will reveal

Gan, after reading dozens of chapters, I realized that I was the only living person!

Come on, look forward to the follow-up, come on

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Chapter 300, 26 comments...

What the hell is going on in the comment section? Weird characters and numbers with unknown meanings. First of all, the author's idea is good, but the writing is too compact, with key plot dialogues from beginning to end. A plot that is too compact cannot attract readers. As for the settings, the settings of this book are all written in the setting collection. There are currently more than ten chapters in the text that are not mentioned at all. There are too many numerical changes interspersed in the text, giving people the feeling that they can be skipped, but if you skip it, you will not understand where the weapons come from. In general, the plot is not about compact battles and complex numbers. It should be appropriately interspersed with settings, backgrounds, etc., And less numbers should be written. It's true that the settings are written in the setting set, but to be honest, most people don't read the setting set. I've read more than a dozen chapters, and there are quite a few updates so far, but I can't even talk about it in one chapter. This book has been published, but the setting is still good and the creativity is innovative. I suggest the author just cut it off and start a new book.

Is the author contracted internally or directly?

It's pretty good-looking, but it feels a bit nonsensical.