Records of the Giant Moon

To be honest, the pacing was too tight. After being repeatedly scammed, a normal person wouldn't trust anyone for a short time, especially after experiencing a series of devastating scams in an unfamiliar environment. It would definitely leave some psychological trauma. The author made the protagonist too naive, making him seem utterly foolish to the reader.

I remembered a painting I drew before.

Will the time traveler tell others that they came from another time? What will their fate be? It's not hard to guess; they'll lose their freedom in the first three chapters.

This book has both obvious strengths and weaknesses, but the weaknesses are incredibly basic errors. One can only wonder what the author's editors were doing? They couldn't even see such obvious and basic mistakes in the book.

The premise of this book is acceptable, but the protagonist is naive and foolish. He should be a character who grows and develops, not a wish-fulfillment story, so it might cause high blood pressure... This is just my understanding, nothing more, and does not represent the opinions of others.

I felt the pacing was too fast, and it wasn't until I read the author's release notes that I realized the author has been writing too many game scripts. However, game scripts and novels are different. Games need exciting moments and plot climaxes to keep players engaged, but if a novel's plot is too dense, it will cause serious reader fatigue.

It's a bit uncomfortable. Why always have to be number one in other people's eyes? It's a bit inexplicable, and the plot is too fast-paced, like a transmigrator's targeting. It feels like you're trying to be who you are in other people's eyes, just like that old man who ultimately destroyed himself.

Enough with the armchair critics in the comments section. The author is being modest; why does everyone seem to think they're so great again? Have some self-awareness; don't be so eager to teach others. Your thoughtless, instructional texts really negatively impact the reading experience for newcomers.

When a normal person suddenly enters a completely new environment, he will be wary of the environment itself because he does not know how his previous environment is fundamentally different from the current one. For his own safety, he will carefully explore the things and information around him, try to integrate into the environment, and finally wait for an opportunity to act.

It's very well written; the world-building of the giant moon is very appealing. This is the first time I've seen a time-travel story explained like this.