Records of the Giant Moon

To be honest, the rhythm is too tight. If you are deceived one after another, a normal person will not trust anyone in a short period of time. And if you are continuously exposed to fatal scams in an unfamiliar environment, you should be a little bit worried. The author makes the protagonist too innocent, causing readers to feel that this person is simply stupid. The author's writing style is actually pretty good, but I hope the author will rethink the outline, otherwise, to be honest, this book won't go far.

I think of a painting I drew before

Will a time traveler tell others that he came from time travel? It's not hard to guess what will happen, as he lost his freedom in the first three chapters.

This book has obvious advantages and disadvantages, and the shortcomings are super low-level mistakes. I can only say what does the author's editor do for a living? You can't even see the obvious low-level errors in this book.

The setting of this book is okay, but the protagonist is naive and stupid. He should be a growth-oriented protagonist, not a cool novel, so he has high blood pressure... It's just my understanding, nothing more, and it does not represent other people's opinions.

I always felt that the pace was too fast, and I realized after reading the testimonials that the author has written too many game scripts, but game scripts are different from novels. Games need exciting moments and plot climaxes to keep players motivated to continue playing. But in novels, if the plot arrangement is too dense, readers will be seriously fatigued. If there are too many daily routines, they will feel watery, and if the plot is too dense, they will feel tired. The creativity of the book is very good, and the writing style can support the creativity, but the author needs to make more adjustments to the rhythm control.

I feel a little uncomfortable. Why do I always have to be number one in the eyes of others? It's a bit baffling. Moreover, this kind of plot is too tight and is aimed at people who have traveled through time. It seems to give people a way to be themselves in the eyes of others, really like that old man, didn't he self-destruct in the end? The latest chapter is a bit baffling now that we know that his identity is in danger and he is still in the hospital. Continuously fighting monsters and leveling up can be very tiring, especially when you don't have much sense of immersion yet.

It's almost enough to leave those who give pointers in the comments section. The author should be humble, why do everyone think they are good again? You should have some idea in your mind, don't be so easy to teach others. Your thoughtless and instructive text really affects the reading experience of newcomers.

When a normal person suddenly enters a new environment, he will be wary of the environment itself, because he does not know the fundamental difference between the environment he has experienced and the current environment. For the sake of his own safety, he will carefully explore the surrounding things and information, then work hard to integrate into the environment, and finally wait for opportunities to move.

The writing is very good. The world view of the huge moon is very attractive. This is the first time I have seen such an explanation of time travel.