The Apocalypse Is Coming, I Can See Hidden Hints

The two women I met at the beginning were a failure. It's not popular at all. How many books are there to be written about it? It deserves to not be popular.

How dare you write about Sister Yu and Loli It's been so many years I don't have a long memory

They are writing about the apocalypse. Is it called the apocalypse if it is neither astringent nor violent? You start screaming when you write about a woman. Why don't you read the Monk novel? A good article is about living in the apocalypse. It has to be a lone wolf. The whole process is either conspiracy or killing monsters. It's nonsense. You should be bitten and become a zombie as soon as possible. After all, they are all guys who only know how to kill. There is no need to write about the apocalypse if it is not astringent or violent. So why don't you just write a Monk novel by yourself if you can't stand it when you see a woman? I just succumbed to these people, making it extremely difficult to find a book now.

This book has received mixed reviews, but I think it is fundamentally a very well-written book. First of all, I think the handling of the character Song Jiang is very good. This completely broke Song Jiang's previous style of obeying Tang Monk's advice. Tang Seng is not like before, always chatting with Lin Daiyu and not doing his job properly.          ， ⅩL And Xiahou Dun did not have a crush on Hua Gangu from the beginning as stated in the original work, but the sparks sparked with her after experiencing Mei Changsu's transference. This way the logic of the plot becomes very smooth. Let the audience have a refreshing feeling. The plot of the story is also very touching and fascinating.        ,?        ?        ?        The finale of the fight scene between Zhu Bajie and Donald Duck was well arranged, and the open ending made the audience yearn for the love song duet between Taishang Laojun and Marilyn Monroe. It is worth mentioning that the atmosphere of vicissitudes of life when Big Big Wolf misses Zhou Zhiruo in Akina Mountain, and Ren Woxing's delicate inner world when he steals Huba, the sacred object of the Uchiha tribe, is suddenly revealed. The stand-up comedy session of Comrade Sha Ruijin and Chu Liuxiang who guest-starred in the film, and the ingenious idea of ​​Mr. Bean visiting the thatched cottage and asking Charlotte to go together to save his grandfather are also highlights. All in all, this is a good book. (Bah, I am so shameless!) In short, I still hope that everyone likes my story. If you can support it as much as possible, use your sacred little hands to click on recommendations and monthly votes or interact with me to let me know that someone is watching. Thank you all.

Not long after I started, I read "Royal Sister Loli"... I felt like I couldn't get up from this book.

After reading the introduction, I know that it is not possible. Any good book will basically not put patriotism on the bright side. It will either be aloof or vague.

I'm ready to read the results and look at the table of contents. Chapter 16 is both a royal sister and a lolita. Withdraw, withdraw.

I met two women as teammates at the beginning, and the man I met earlier died. It was really unpleasant. Do women have to be good people? Will there be a plot later on where two women throw themselves into each other's arms? Is it okay for the author to be so obscene, since there is such a lack of women? Junk book

Regarding the plot description of Chapter 18: Chapter 18, the appearance of Anya and Meng Yue, several readers and I complained that the writing was not good. How to put it, first of all, I have to admit that this plot is not well designed or well written. Anya is set as a doctor. Compared with ordinary people, she is thoughtful, adaptable and able to withstand stress. She has a special skill and good luck at the beginning. She opened a treasure box and obtained a life potion. Her starting attributes are higher than others. Under such circumstances, she did not ask for protection just because she was a girl. Instead, she actively asked the male protagonist to leave zombies for her to kill, and she consciously handed over the crystal core. She was considered smart, so she was not a vase in the team. As for Meng Yue, my original intention in designing this character was to make her represent a real ordinary person and to witness her growth. From the very beginning when she appeared, the male protagonist didn't look down on her. From the time she followed Anya and asked to kill zombies, to the 18th floor where she asked to kill zombies, and then witnessed the male protagonist's killing of enemies (human beings), and now she is able to accept killing the mutated neon people who are not dead yet, I feel that I have written her growth, but my writing and plot control are not very good, so the character description is not very good, so it is not written well. As for the male protagonist, Madonna, I don't agree with it. The male protagonist was just a deal from the beginning. Later, he discovered Anya's advantages, but because of Meng Yue's drag, he did not show any intention to recruit. It was not until Meng Yue's performance made him feel that it was okay, and with the emergence of the team contract, he officially recruited Anya and Meng Yue. After all, for the male protagonist, his teammates do not need to be very strong, but first of all, they cannot be a drag, and secondly, their character must be passable. The same goes for Zhang Xiaodao. The male protagonist has always been wary of him. He specially handed the pistol to Anya (based on the premise that the male protagonist knew that the pistol was no longer a threat to him) and told her to beware of Zhang Xiaodao. It was not until Zhang Xiaodao's subsequent performance that he invited him to be a teammate. I am really grateful to all my friends who have read my book for their pertinent suggestions. I also feel deeply ashamed that my writing, characterization and plot control are not good enough. I am really sorry. I hope that the subsequent plot can make everyone change.

The writing style of Newcomers and New Books started to decline until I met a girl. At this stage (personal feeling) there is no need to interact with girls, you can accept younger guys or fat guys, but this awkward conversation mode is really embarrassing even if you are not chatting at the beginning of the apocalypse! Aloof is not aloof. Fangirl is not cool like fangirl? It's very confusing. There is also a little girl, do you want to be the treasure chest mascot? Two strong vases? It is better to wait until the protagonist becomes stronger, then meet a girl who has the same awakening, and go through hardships together to become a teammate who can support him.

Sofa

I want to ask if the protagonist of this book is alone or in a group, or if he has a girl with him.

I can't bear to read it, please write more chapters!

There are many books about teammates and the opposite sex being natural, and they are very successful. The reason why everyone has such a strong reaction is simply that it has not been written into their bones and they cannot accept it. This in itself has nothing to do with writing about teams and women. It's not contradictory. Everyone's writing techniques and settings cannot be highly consistent with readers. Please be more tolerant. If you don't want to read it, you can just skip it and watch it. After all, the main idea is relatively clear and innovative.

Can you continue to write more? I really think this book is very good. The author really writes well.

It was stupid to kill the man in front of the sleeve from the beginning and wait until he showed his weakness. .

Dear author, did you submit it to the editor internally? Who submitted it? There aren't any good zombie novels. I'm going to write one and submit it internally to see if I can get it selected 😁😁

Damn, this book is also very unfamiliar.

Do you mind if I raise it? Reading here is like constipation, it's so uncomfortable to wait

Isn't it a little early for you to put it on the shelves?

It's well written and worth reading. That's why no one reads it.