Siheyuan: a Cave with You

I don't know what the author is writing about. 99% Of the whole article is explanation. The actual content is very little. A paragraph of 100 words insists on explaining 10,000 words. I am convinced. We are reading novels, not popular science. And the author is not popular science. He just forces explanations and explanations. There are a lot of narrations and no actual content. Is the author such a talkative person in reality? Have you been beaten frequently since you were a child? One word "should"

Silly Zhu can't be changed. Fetching rainwater is simply his biggest failure, and he still lives in the same hospital. Unlike the original novel, the rainwater is not directly in the courtyard. Don't say anything like severing ties. Living in the same hospital cannot break the relationship. Others gossip unless you are deaf

Don't you want to eat in the space? If you have to eat outside, just make some steamed buns outside.

Now that you are a second generation, you are still so naive in how you behave and do things. If you really want to help people, you can't bring a group of people outside. If you beat them up today and be reasonable, you will be beaten tomorrow and be reasonable. You will always understand. Well, human affairs are like those of a child. I suggest the author sort them out more and make them more streamlined. Don't feel awkward about forcibly inserting the plot into the story.

Work hard to write good works, and don't look back many years later and feel like digging a hole to bury yourself. That's so embarrassing.

The background of the novel must be timely, and the unrestrained and self-exciting writing is only suitable for young readers. For older readers, they will not be smart enough to read these things! Don't forget the purpose of writing, which is to let more people read it. No matter how difficult it is to get consensus, the author has to work hard. Unless writing is just for self-pleasure and dreaming!

You slipped away, what the hell were you writing about?

Now to write about the trouble of Siheyuan, let's watch the TV series first and then write about it.

The crookedness has reached the sky, and a good ordinary worker has become a martial arts master.

I saw the pig's feet running to interfere with Liu's family affairs. If Lao Liu is stubborn and refuses to offend you, how can he still be criticized? Lose your job? What happens next? The food, clothing, housing and education of your wife and children are yours? Or national? Have a finger in the pie. Let's focus on this after you leave. . . .

It's all private goods, a plot is explained in one page, just read it!

Too much to say, the author is probably around 13 years old. Anyone who has watched the original TV series knows that Silly Zhu was almost 30 when he first appeared. I'll count you at 27, because the author said that Qin Huairu was only 28 or 29 years old. If you think about it, the author is 13 years old, and the author must be 20 years older. He got married very late, and he was only 33 years old. Silly Zhu 278, who would raise someone who is two years younger than him as a child, but it turns out that Yu Yu is about 14 years old, and Silly Zhu 278, Yu Yu is 14 years old, do you think it's appropriate? In the TV series, Shazhu is almost 30 and is not married. Yuyu rides a bicycle and works in a textile factory. Bangge is already in elementary school and looks to be about seven or eight or ten years old. The ages of the characters in it are messed up. Although novels and TV series are different, at least your logic must be correct.

The more you look at it, the less interesting it becomes! Not to mention the entire article, the cow's gizzard pulls the horse's gizzard, and the Japanese, ancient martial arts, and high martial arts are forced to be added! Good luck

The author is too rosy and very good at calligraphy.

Gaowu Courtyard is okay, at least it's not the Courtyard of Gods and Demons

Never talk too much about light, darkness, and elixir power, and then talk about cultivating to become an immortal! A story that happened in an ordinary courtyard house. He was too good at boasting and had no friends 😅😅😅

A more mature protagonist would be more reasonable,

It feels like you are watching the author express his thoughts. Didn't see any plot

I actually spent 100 coins just to be able to comment, just to comment with three words "too watery"

... It's really outrageous that he loves to give examples. At least half of the chapter is giving examples or explanations.

The whole story is about the author talking about self-awareness, but it's actually private stuff, and the plot is like shit.