
There's Something Wrong with This Narration
这个旁白不对劲
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- Urban Life
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- 2y ago
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Let me first talk about my impressions after reading the whole book. This is a popular science article that can pass the time. Let's talk about some shortcomings that I personally feel (I don't think it is a poisonous point) 1. There is a logic for the operation of the golden finger. I personally feel that the author's control is not in place. To be precise, I have not touched the logic of this golden finger. The golden finger in this book is more like a tool to promote the plot. When the author feels that the protagonist needs the next step of development, he will jump out to refresh the sense of existence. Of course, I don't deny that the golden finger itself has a role in promoting the plot, but it feels too rigid. When I read the introduction, I felt that Goldfinger should be that when the protagonist sees something similar to technology, Goldfinger will analyze it and give the future development route of the technology. Then the protagonist will select the technology empire puzzle piece he wants from a large number of technologies for development. But after reading it through, it gave me a feeling that the golden finger is planning the development route for the protagonist, rather than the protagonist making his own choice. 2. The existence of the heroine. I really feel that this heroine is a pure tool, and the emotional line is relatively rigid. 3. Because it is a popular science article, this article is filled with a lot of professional knowledge for ordinary people in society and the development history of some domestic industries. ,ok, Those who don't like reading will feel that the author is in the water, and each flower is in his own eyes. but also because it's a popular science article. To be honest, I personally feel that the story of this book is not particularly strong. For example, the author said that the extensive description of msk was to pave the way for the brain-computer interface, but it gave me the feeling that Musk is just a tool to help the protagonist promote the game engine and improve his performance. I really feel that the early pace was slowed down a lot because of this character. If you really want to obtain information on brain-computer interfaces, the artificial intelligence invasion will not be the end of the matter just like later. As for waiting for the artificial intelligence upgrade, there are many things you can do. For example, if we delve deeper into the derivatives of artificial intelligence, many novels have mentioned software that can liberate more performance of mobile phones and computers, as well as the possibility of delving into rendering optimization engines and launching some high-quality animations, animated movies, and movie games. These can bring a lot of cash flow to the company. Having a lot of cash is very good, whether it is to enter the industry later or to form a cloud computing group. In short, I feel that the protagonist failed to maximize the use of the resources he already has, and the wealth derived from technology will not delay the protagonist's so-called innovative ideas. As I said before, this book is a popular science book, and its attributes related to business are really not strong. 4. The protagonist gives me a feeling of confusion. He has no plans for the future of the company. He basically uses whatever Goldfinger gives him. There is also a sense of being poor and rich for a long time in character creation. Having said so much, I actually think this book can still be read. It is a popular science novel to pass the time, just as it expands one's horizons. Actually, the author is not for the author to read. The author gives me the impression that he is an interest author who is purely motivated by love, and does not seem to expect to make any extra money by writing novels. These are for new readers. Please read and cherish this book. According to the current pace of this book, I doubt whether the author has an outline, and maybe one day it will be gone. Above.
Before eating mushrooms: Family, today we just picked wild mushrooms, they are very fresh. After eating mushrooms: I am a flower~I am about to wither. Hello, can I plant it in your flower pot? I'm going to wither. Can you give me some water? Why is there a Smurf on your head? It's shitting. Shit is still green.
Buying Longcheng stocks already constitutes insider trading, especially if the increase or decrease in holdings after 15% of the shares must be announced in advance
This book is about black technology entrepreneurship, and Goldfinger is the narrator. Various black technology ideas come from the narrator's tips. If you have any comments or suggestions, you can leave a message under this comment.
Doesn't the author know that Li Ning insulted China? Why still write it? ? ? ? ? ?
As long as you keep it long enough, you can always get it for free
I can't live with AIDS, right? Where does this disease come from? Who are these people? How many good birds are there?
I find that many people now don't even know what black technology is... You can create it, but you don't know the principles. This is called black technology... The blackness of the black box.
Author of mushrooms, please don't slander the wild mushrooms in Yunnan. It's obvious that you haven't cooked them and said they are poisonous.
I finally found a science and technology novel that I can read. Now I am really tired of waiting for "My Autobiography Can't Be a Tragedy", which can only take a few days to complete. This book is written at the current pace, as long as it doesn't collapse. When I saw 182, what the teacher said was: fight with heaven, fight with earth, fight with people. Some people in China have really bad intentions and always delete what teachers say, which makes many people think that teachers are aggressive and turn to smear teachers.
The author may have enough professional knowledge, but after reading it for a while, I didn't feel happy. I can only say that everyone is not compatible.
The author really knows a lot about stocks, the stock market, and the ownership structure. I am an old stock investor. I don't need the big guys to give me popular science about the stock market and ownership structure. I definitely want everyone to understand when I write a book. The purpose of choosing low-priced stocks is to intuitively reflect the data, so that everyone can know the protagonist's income without using their brains to calculate. No matter how much money is invested, there is no need to bother calculating the income based on the percentage increase. The protagonist's company will also guarantee 67% of the absolute controlling interest. No one will and cannot threaten the protagonist's status. The protagonist's company cannot form a veto power except for the protagonist. Everyone can rest assured and watch.
Too close to foreign capital! Are there any authors who don't consider the protagonist's personal safety?
The company shouldn't have written it in such detail, but since it was written, it was done so smoothly without rewriting it.
Raven
This narration makes me feel like the protagonist is playing a virtual game and everything has been arranged.
Lin is the protagonist, and Guo is Lin's golden finger, right?
If the protagonist wants to engage in more black technology, the narrator's black technology trigger must be related to the technology that this person or team will develop in the future. Communication with academicians from the Chinese Academy of Sciences will definitely trigger the top black technology in the next hundred years. Whether it is military, aviation, materials, basic technology, biology, computer information technology, robots, nanorobots, quantum technology, 3D printers, high-energy batteries, alloy formulas, controllable nuclear fusion, antimatter, virtual reality, gene editing, space vehicles, anti-gravity technology, the Grand Unified Equation, scientific and technological materials for the next 100 years, etc.
Regarding the naming of artificial intelligence, the author exposed it to the outside world as 02, and the company also named it 01. Is this because he is afraid that others will not associate it with the more powerful 01? You can also change the code name.
The pace is too slow, and it writes too much about business matters. It would be better to write more about science and technology in scientific articles.
This boss is in charge. . . . .
The protagonist, the boss, was discussing something with another boss in the room. The conversation lasted for a long time. When he came out, he still had to apologize to his assistant? (Chapter 226) This. . . . . . . . .
The latest version of the same genre is "I Have a Wasteland World"
It's really good. The logic is relatively rigorous, and the cheats of cheats are not as big as the system. Although the system is cool, it will basically become less and less interesting later on. This book is really good. The rare thing about this book is that it always leaves you with a fresh feeling. I think this is something that many novels nowadays cannot do.
I just started watching it, and I suggest that the narration not make suggestions. The narration tells the facts and the protagonist makes the judgment. This makes the protagonist appear to be autonomous. Otherwise, the narrator is the protagonist. What is the difference between this and those systems?
? ? ? ? I was so busy, why did I suddenly start playing with the book? I had thirty or forty copies, and I watched the chapter names getting more and more popular, and now they are gone. Could it be that the author is too busy with work in real life?
I have seen the latest in more than two days, so I will update it quickly, and then I will add professional knowledge. It is better to keep it in moderation, keep it first, and come back when it is fatter.
I suspect the narrator is the final version of 01
It's mushroom season, why haven't the mushroom army arrived yet?